‘Updated’ Guddan - TS - Mat jao... part 4 on pg 6 - Page 3

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Thank you so much all! Will continue soon! 😄😄

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey Kashish ! Visited the forum after a long time and all I did was to read this SS

It was amazing ... continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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plz continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you for all the love guys... 😄😄 continuing further...

Part 3

In Gupta house...

Guddan is lying on the bed thinking about how beautiful her life was shaping out... how amazing it felt when her Jindal Saab told her that he loved her... she had that beautiful letter clutched in her hand tightly... tear stains were visible on that letter as she was crying holding it the whole night...

Guddan - Aapne aisa kyun kiya Jindal Saab... jab bharosa Hi nahi tha to pyaar karne ka dawa kyun kiya...

she suddenly heard a reply

Akshat - Galti ho gayi mujhse...

she turned and saw him standing at the door... she wanted to run and hug him but the moment she saw him she remembered all those words he had said to her, his anger, his hatred and those chits... she turned her face towards the bed and sat up... without looking at him she softly said

Guddan - aap Yahan kya kar rahe hain?

Akshat - Tumse baat karna Chahta tha...

Guddan - Ab Kuch Bacha nahi hai baat karne ke liye... jab Rishta Hi nahi bacha to aap kyun mujhse baat karni ki takleef utha rahe hain...

Akshat - Rishta hai Guddan... pehle bhi tha... ab bhi hai aur hamesha rahega...

Guddan - galatfami hai aapki... is rishtey ke Aapne khud tukde kiye hain... ab Kuch bacha nahi hai...

Akshat was heart broken to hear this... he could feel that Guddan has left all hopes of them being together... he could not bare it... he wanted her back in his life...

Akshat - ek baar mere paas waapas aa jao Guddan... is baar tumhe khud se dur nahi jaane dunga...

Guddan just closed her eyes and said - chale jaaiye Yahan se...

she thought it was all a dream and Akshat is not there she is imagining him... her mind was telling her that he will not come to her and for her... When she opened her eyes he was still standing there... that is when she realized that it is all real... she stood up from the bed, looked at him for a long time and then went outside the room...

Jindal family and Gupta family was sitting together talking... Bhushan ji did not want Revati to marry Angad anymore... Guddan saw the situation and told Bhushan ji...

Guddan - Papa... humari Buri kismat ki sazaa Chutki aur Angad ji ko kyun de rahe hain... wo ek dusre se pyaar karte hain... agar wo shaadi karna chahte hai to unhe meri wajah se rokna galat hai...

She then turned towards Angad and said - Angad ji... aap meri Chutki se pyaar karte hain?

Angad - Haan Bhabhi baht...

Guddan - aur bharosa? Bharosa karte hain us pe? Saath chod to nahi denge na uska kabhi?

This question really stung Akshat who had now come out of Guddan’s room holding the letter in his hand and was standing there listening to her...

Angad - kabhi nahi chodunga Bhabhi aur hamesha Uske saath Rahunga...

Bhushan ji - Thik hai... to Phir Hum is shaadi ke liye taiyaar hain...

Everyone is discussing wedding arrangements... Angad comes to Guddan and says - Thank you Bhabhi... Aapne itna sab Kuch hone ke baad bhi is shaadi se ke liye haan kar di...

Guddan - Manaa kaise kar sakte hain Angad ji... aap dono ki khushi ke raaste mein kaise aa sakte hain hum... then she gave a sad smile and said - aapko pata hai humari to kismat hi Bachpan se kharab hai... jisse pyaar karte hain humse dur chala jaata hai... pehle humari maa aur ab Jindal Saab... bas Bhagwan ne papa ko humse nahi cheena ye hi ek tasaali hai...

Then she left from there and went to her room... Akshat who was standing far and listening to Angad and Guddan’s conversation stood frozen in his place... Her words were like dagger to his heart... she was in pain... he could see it and could not do anything to make her feel better...

Akshat - Main Hun tumhare dard ki wajah... Meri galti ki sazaa khud ko taqleef pahuncha ke nahi de sakti tum... tumhe tumhare hisse ki khushiyan de ke rahunga main Guddan... chahe mujhse kitni hi nafrat kyun na karo tum is baar main tumhara pyaar waapas pa ke rahunga... ye waada hai mera...

with this determination Akshat went back to Jindal Bhavan which was no longer a home but just a house of bricks and stone... life of his life and his house was far away and he had to bring that light back!

To be continued...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bahut chota tha ye

Btw its amazing continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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awesome

next part update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful update👍🏼

So what will Akshat Jindal do woo his love his guddan back

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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nice one....

wonder wht Akshat will do..

plzz update soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you all... 😄😄 will update soon... 😊

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