Guddan FF - What I Deserve (Part-12 UPDATED on Pg-20) - Page 14

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update👏

Jindal Saab is mission to manao biwi😉

Thanks updating👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: srain10

Awesome update👏

🤗

Jindal Saab is mission to manao biwi😉

Starts!! ❤️

Thanks updating👍🏼

Its my pleasure and duty!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hey Guys, Are ya'll ready for Part - 11?

It was a pleasant afternoon. Guddan was in the kitchen looking for something to eat and that's when she noticed a familiar lunch box. Wasn't that Jindal-Sahab's lunchbox? Didn't he take his Lunch? As if on cue, Durga and Lakshmi reached the kitchen, gasping.

Du: Aree, AJ ne apna lunchbox bhoolgaya?

L: Durga-di, mein bhi pack karna bhoolgaya!

Du: Kya, Lakshmi? Itni important baat kaise bhoolgayi tum?

L: Maaf kijiyega, Durga-di!

Du: Ab maafi magne se kya faida? Pata nahi AJ kya bolega vaapas ane ke baad!

Guddan was listening to this conversation keenly. Durga-ji was right, to a certain degree. AJ would be mad but if told the truth he might understand. That's when Dadi entered into the circle.

D: Kya huva tum dono ko? You both look like you've seen a ghost!

L: Dadi, ek bhoot ko dekhna isse achha hota.!

D: Matlab?

Du: Matlab yeh hein ki Lakshmi ne AJ ka lunch pack karna bhool gayi!

D: Aree, yeh toh acha khabar nahi hein!

L: Ab hum kya karein?

The three of them stood there thinking while Guddan was confused. Was there so much to think? Someone should sent this to Jindal-Sahab before his lunch time and that should be fine,right?

G: Umm..... Maybe someone can give his lunch before lunch time?

The three of them looked at her in surprise and that startled her. Was it that amusing?

D : Aree wah, Guddan beta, kya kamaal ka idea diya tum!

L: Haan Sasumaa! Aap toh, woh kya kehte hein.....? Haan ek Genius ho!

Du: Sahi kaha Lakshmi ne!

G: ...... Accha... OK.....

L: But still there is a problem?

G: Problem?

Du: Aree haan, Who will go and give this to him?

G: Hum Driver ko----

L: Driver toh chutti par hein!

G: Chutti par hein? But I saw him today,infact he himself came to pick Jindal-Sahab up!

L: Haan.... woh.... toh,...

Du: Uske baad mein hein chutti!

G: Baad hein chutti?

Du: Haan.... He said that he has a family emergency so he said that he'll take leave in the noon.

G: Accha..... phir hum kisi aur ko bhej----

D: Aree, nahi! Sabko kitna kaam hoga na?

G: Kaam?

Du: Haan haan! Ghar mein bohat sare kaam hein!

D: Lakshmi is right. We also have a lot to do!

G: Then why didn't anyone tell me? Aap boliye, kya karna hein?

L: Sasumaa, aapko kuch nahi karna hein!

G: ....Par aap log hi keh reh----

D: Woh sab karne keliye hum sab hein na.....

G: Aree Dadi, yeh aap kya kehrehe hein? Aap bataiye na, kya kaam hein? Hum karlege!

D: If you're sure then can you do me a favor?

G: Bilkul Dadi! Aap bus boliye kya karna hein!

D: Woh,.... Lalla ki lunchbox..... kya tum usse jaakar dedogi?

G: Dadi.... Hum?

D: Nahi nahi, beta! Agar tumhe nahi karna hein toh mein tumhe force nahi karugi.... Now nobody can go to the restaurant as we all have work to do. I just asked as you had initiated.

Guddan felt this whole scenario a bit weird. Feels like this whole thing has been preplanned.

D: But I'm worried for Lalla! He would come back only by night. Till then, he has to remain hungry.....

L: Aree haan, AJ toh ghar ka khaana ke alawa aur kuch khayega hi nahi!

Durga looked at Guddan who was lost in thought. Dadi and Lakshmi looked at each other.

G: I'll go then..... Its not really good to remain hungry, especially Jindal-Sahab!

Du: Sahi kaha Guddan - Sasumaa, You get ready,till then I'll pack the lunch.

G: OK, Thank you! I'll get ready fast.

Saying so, Guddan left to her room. Dadi, Lakshmi and Durga signed in relief.

L: Sasumaa ko shak toh nahi hogaya ,hein na?

Du: Pata nahi AJ ka ye plan kaam karegi yaa nahi!

D: Meri Lalla ka plan zaroor kamyaab hogi!

Guddan came back after getting dressed appropriate to go outside. She was dressed in an orange-pink salwar-kameez with an open front longline jacket. Durga came to her and handed her AJ's lunchbox. She noticed that it was a bit heavy, like it was meant for two people. But she didn't question it. But Lakshmi answered it anyway.

L: Woh kya hein na, AJ ke dost bhi hogi,shayad! toh unkeliye bhi humne pack kardiya!

And that made Guddan more weird. As far as she knows, Jindal- Sahab never eats with a friend,let alone share his food. But she didn't question that either. Dadi and Durga on seeing her doubtful made her walk to the entrance saying its almost time. Guddan felt they desparately wanted her to go to the restaurant. Daal mein kuch kaala hein!

D: Guddan - beta.... scooty se jaa rahi hona? dhyaan se jaana!

G: (smiles) Ji Dadi...

And that's when they all saw him. The driver whom everyone told left for a family emergency was washing the car at the entrance. Dadi and the bahus looked at Guddan as she was staring at him surprised.

Du: (whispering) Lakshmi....

L: Bhool gaya!

Guddan looked towards them and they suddenly looked at the driver.

G: Ramu- kaka toh wahan hein.... aap ne hi toh----

D: Yeh Ramu yahan kya kar rahein hein?

L: Haan humein toh laga,ke woh chala gaya!

G: Chaliye phir, puchthe hein....

L: (whispering) Uski kya zaroorat?

G: Kya?

L: N-nahi kuch nahi,sasumaa! Chaliye,puchte hein!

Saying so, they went towards Ramu-Kaka the driver who was just doing his job like any other day.

G: Ramu-kaka!

Ramu-Kaka (RK): Aree, Guddan bitiya.... kaise ho aap? aur aap sab yahan? kahin jaana hein kya?

Dadi ,Durga and Lakshmi began to sweat. If Ramu- Kaka tells anything, they would be in trouble.

G: Ramu- kaka, aap toh jaane wale the na?

RK: Jaane wale the?

G: Aapko kisi kaam tha na.... yeh log tho----

L: Ramu - kaka aap ne hi subah bataya tha na.... ki aapko kuch kaam tha tho aap chutti lelege..?

Dadi and Durga initiated him to go with the flow behind Guddan.

RK: Kaam?

D: Aree, Ramu, tuje jaldi ghar jaana hein na? tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Ramu - kaka understood their thought so he thought to go with the flow. Besides,he'll get a free leave too.

RK: ..... Woh,.... haan, Maa-ji, Mein bas jaa raha tha.... bus yeh ghaadi wash karke---

Du: Uski zaroorat nahi hein! Aapko jaldi ghar jaana chahiye! Hein na, Guddan - Sasumaa?

G:.... Haan... haan!

With that, ramu - kaka left from there. Guddan and the others walked beside her scooter. She placed the lunchbox inside.

G: Toh hum yeh dekhar aate hein!

D: Haan beta, dhyaan se jaana!

L: Goodluck Sasumaa!

Guddan smiled then turned towards Lakshmi.

G: Goodluck kis liye?

L: woh....

Du: Woh, aap itni door wahan tak jaa rahein hein na? Toh iss liye....

G: Oh... Kay? Hum jaa rahein hein! Bye!

Dadi and the bahus stood there waving at her while Guddan went with her scooter. Just then, Lakshmi's phone rang. She picked it up:

"Haan AJ, Sasumaa aa rahi hein!"

And that's it for Part - 11! I know I'm again late and I'm sorry for that. But I hope you guys enjoyed this episode. We didn't get any AkshAn scenes here but on next part,we'll get ample amounts of it and some romance~ The next part will come soon!

Be sure to Like and Comment and shower me with your guys love. 🤗❤️

Till then,this is Pooh,signing off~ Toodles~🤗


Edited by PrincessPooh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing

Lekin next part aap kab update krengi😒aaj hi krdo na plz😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update👍🏼

Whole family is dramebaaz😆😆

Update at the earliest🥱

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

dat_INFJ thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amazing

Lekin next part aap kab update krengi😒aaj hi krdo na plz😛

Thanks Kajal!😃

I'll update soon! bear with me please!

dat_INFJ thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: srain10

Amazing update👍🏼

Thanks!🤗

Whole family is dramebaaz😆😆

So true! 😃

Update at the earliest🥱

Will do~🥱

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thank you so much and I will!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Thanks a lot! And I will update soon!

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