You Are Reason For My Existence (os)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guys, this is my first post on this forum and I hope you people will like it and will express your opinions and likes.


You Are Reason For My Existence

The minute she entered the Jindal Mansion after 15 long years, she thought that she will get back the love, her Akshat she missed but here she was being treated as a stranger by her husband in her own house, another side her mother-in-law, her daughter-in-laws even her sons are treating her as an unknown person which hurts very much by the way but Guddan who introduced herself as guest and sister of Revati, her soon to be devarani was roaming around the house like a daughter-in-law where each member of the family quite dependent on her. Like every day from the time she returned today is no different.

"Guddan beta, did you see my medicines which Lalla brought yesterday while coming home?" Dadi asked.

"Ji Maa, come I will show you where did I place them," Guddan replied and took Dadi to her room to give her medicine.

Meanwhile, Guddan was once again called by Laxmibahu for an opinion about the gift she needs to take while going to a party for which she and Vardaan were invited.

"SasuMaa what gift should we take while going to the party, I thought of taking a dinner set packed but Babyboo is denying it," Laxmi said.

"Laxmibahu, dinner set will not look good as Vardaan said, why don't you people find a statue made out of marble of God Krishna and gift them in that way it can be placed as a showpiece as well as it has a long life," Guddan instructed.

"You are right Guddan Maa, your idea of a gift is wonderful and we will take it while going and I need to leave for a restaurant along with Kishore bhaiya and Papa as we are getting late, where are they? we should still have breakfast." Vardaan asked.

"I think they are still in the rooms, you and Laxmibahu wait for us, I will call them and come," Guddan said moving towards Durga's room.

"Kishore Ji breakfast is ready and Vardaan is waiting for you as you people have an important meeting today," Guddan informed.

"Coming Guddan Maa and today evening I will be late from the restaurant," Kishore informed her.

"It's okay Kishore but does have your dinner at right time in the restaurant before returning back home," Guddan ordered him and he nodded his head and they both moved towards the dining table and Akshan room, just then Akshat shouted from the room.

"Guddan, Guddan did you see my yellow color file, car keys and my wallet." He questioned and Guddan came running inside fearing Antara will listen.

"Jindal Saab your file is left side in the shelf, your wallet is your pocket and your car keys are here which I hanged last night so that you will not have a problem in finding them and why are you shouting what if Antaraji listens to you." She chided him gently.

"Sorry Guddan but I got so habituated to you for finding everything, I was just frustrated," Akshat said pulling her in his arms.

"It's okay Jindal Saab, but now you should have breakfast and leave for restaurant because you have an important meeting today and our sons are waiting for you." She said setting his coat right. With that, Akshat kissed her forehead took her hand in his and both came down for breakfast and after having breakfast, kissed Guddan on the forehead as a greeting went to meeting meanwhile Sarubahu and Durgabahu were serving breakfast according to instructions given by Guddan and Antara had enough of observing so she came down silently to have breakfast but all the time she can see Akshat and everyone communicating silently regarding Guddan. After that men left for restaurant, Dadi retired to her room take rest while Bahus was cleaning the table after breakfast and Antara's sight went towards the handprints she made on her wedding day as a symbol of the daughter-in-law of Jindal family but what caught sight of her eyes is another set of handprints next to her's, she know that those prints don't belong to one of the Bahus because their hands different from these prints and she has a hunch that to whom do they belong.

"Guddan Guddan, come here right now," Antara shouted and everyone came outside running listening to her yelling as a precaution Laxmibahu called Akshat back home because she is having a feeling that today truth will come out and Akshat assured her that in 10 mins he will be at home.

"What happened AntaraJi?" Guddan enquired.

"From the day I entered my house I'm seeing you, you are behaving as if you are the owner of the house and you are roaming around my husband Akshat and I warned you to stay away from Akshat, alas you didn't heed my warning and started getting close to my husband, what are you to him? You're nothing but a house wrecker who wrecks others houses." Antara shouted and Guddan eyes were pooled with tears.

"Enough Antara not a word against Guddan and you are not the Antara whom I once loved because the one who I loved, always was understanding and caring but you are totally opposite now," Akshat shouted and took Guddan in his arms.

"What wrong did I say Akshat and what wrong did I say to her and what relation do you have with her?" Antara questioned him.

"Guddan has every right on me because she is Mrs Akshat Jindal, yes you heard it right, she is my wife Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal, wife of Akshat Jindal, daughter-in-law, mother-in-law of Jindal family and mother of my Sons of Jindal family." Akshat declared proudly which made Guddan smile at him which he returned.

"But I'm your wife Akshat and how can you marry someone else and give my place to them," Antara questioned him.

"Antara when you were dead 15 years back I became a stone-hearted person, who forgot to love and live his life working as a robot, but when I got your last letter telling me to remarry I denied it but as it was your wish and mom's wish I conceded to it and married Guddan, who taught me to laugh again, melting my heart with her innocence and selflessness loving everyone without expecting something from another person, which lacks in you. I Loved you in Past Antara and you will be always in my heart as my first love and I was alive for these 15 years but I love Guddan now who made a place for herself with these acts and I can't live without Guddan and if something happens to Guddan then Akshat will live his last breath there itself, because she is reason for my existence." Akshat explained to Antara.

"Antara beta you are right you loved my Lalla but made him your puppet in your love and separated him from family by always keeping him by your side but meri gudiya, meri Guddan brought him close to family who now thinks about everyone and respects their wishes which you failed to do even though you were in our family for 3 long years but Guddan was in family only for 8 months and she proved how caring she is for her family and about your marriage then you are no more a Jindal because your marriage is annulled and now you are Rawat again," Dadi said.

"Antara Maa you were there for us when we needed a mother's love but you failed to understand us because you always took away our right to voice our decisions but Guddan Maa even though younger than us accepted us as her sons and gave us the love of a mother without expecting anything in return but we never called her Maa till this day even then she never complained sorry to say this but Guddan Maa is worlds Best Mother one can ask for." Kishore and Vardaan declared.

"Antara Maaji I don't know how you used to behave with us Bahus because at that time we were not present as our husbands were still teens but for me, Guddan Sasuma is only my Saas because she considers us Bahus as her friends which few people failed to recognize because of their ego and hate towards Sasuma and not only that she considers our opinions in family matters and decisions and allows us some time to spend with our husbands. What I'm saying is she best Sasumaa, a girl can get after getting married into the family." Laxmibahu said.

"You know Antara you should have come before a few days then you would have seen that Guddan is a not deer but she is a lioness who protects her cubs and pack fiercely with love, passion, commitment, responsibility and happiness with her life and if one of the pack or cub gets hurt she will hunt you like a lion hunts his prey," Akshat said with pride in his voice.

"Jindal Saab, even now I'm the same lioness but I was keeping low with patience because I didn't want Antara ji's health get affected but now Antara Ji I think it's high time you realize what is your place as a guest in my house and we respect Guests but even the people's hospitality gets bitter if guest wished to live more days than necessary in one's house." Guddan declared and turned to Laxmibahu.

"Laxmibahu from today you will see to Antara ji's needs but not any other works and Durgabahu I want you to take the responsibility of household works while Sarubahu will take the responsibility of Kitchen works because I don't want you both to conspire against me again by sitting idle, you people minds are getting dirtier day by day as there is saying " empty mind is devils workshop." do you understand what I'm saying?" Guddan ordered the three Bahus.

"Ji Sasumaa." They answered in unison and everyone went to work, Antara went to the guest room and Guddan was setting her things in the cupboard when Akshat back hugged her by putting hands on her bare waste which made her gasped.

"So Mrs Akshat Jindal I Love You and I promised you that I will separate the knots by truth and true to my word I kept my promise and now I want to listen to those three words from your mouth., Akshat said.

"Jindal Saab, from childhood after Maa's death, everyone including mummy said Guddan Tumse na go payega other than Papa and Revati but you were the first one in outer world to tell me Guddan Tumse Sab Kuch Ho payega and I'm happy to listen to that from your mouth, you were the first one to make me learn about what is meant by love because I saw the way you loved Antara Ji for 15 long years, you also made me learn what is meant by responsibility, family, happiness and how to make up for the mistakes we commit.

What I want to say is You are the reality and you are the dream of me, You are the restlessness of my heart and comfort too from now, wherever I go now, whenever I go, I find you there, even if you are not with me your essence and presence are present in me, you are my best friend, my partner and my soul mate, without you, I won't breathe and cannot live even for a moment and I cannot stay and I can't stay. I Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal loves you Mr Akshat Jinal. I Love You Akshat, you are the reason for my existence.


I hope it's up to standard, I welcome All type of comments and if this os is successful then I plan on writing a fanfiction on Guddan and Akshat in future.


Edited by ruhanika_ruhi - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice👍🏼

Do write more😛if possible plz write one more part or epilogue of this os

And welcome to the forum🤗

Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Firstly welcome to the forum

It was beautiful

Do write more ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you and I will try to write the second short.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow...

Such straight os...

Love Everyone in this os....

Do right more...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Such a beautiful straight forward os

Loved it

Do write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice effort

Do write more.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey! Your os is sooo similar to mine..actually dialogues too...

My OS"GUDDAN AKSHAT JINDAL"

But nice try.. keep writing dear..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh okay Sorry, I didn't give think properly while writing, I'm once again sorry. I will take care next time.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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First welcome Ruhi to the forum🤗

Right now I can only comment on your writing style-

Very beautiful & nicely written in a straight forward manner👍🏼

Before commenting on the story I want a brief clarity on Antara's back story & what kind of marriage Akshat-Antara had.

You haven't mentioned anywhere that this os has same back story as that of the show from start to till date. In last half of story there are many dialogues which has reference to Antara's past acts & to judge every character's actions in rightly manner & comment abt it, one needs to know abt back plot.

For me this piece of writing is purely your work & I don't feel right to assume things on my own.

Even if I try to assume it same as the show's storyline I can't because in that, there's never an indication or clarity on the fact that Kishore & Vardhaan were there when Antara was alive. Also Durga being part of family 15yrs back (not sure abt last 4 episodes, if shown)

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