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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
Brilliant
From where do you get such brilliant idea main bhi bed se girte girte baachi.
Let meguess this song must be poing through AJs mind
Yeh kya huwaa,kaise huaa,kab huaa,kyun huaa

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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Attiya finally u r back with a bang

Bhaiya Khushi itni ho gayi AJ ko gir hi Gaye bistar se 😆

Ek hi gaana badhaaaiyan biwi tenure badhaaaiyan neee 🤣


Awww...thank you dear😆
You should write titles of my OS..that's brilliant idea
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Brilliant
From where do you get such brilliant idea main bhi bed se girte girte baachi.
Let meguess this song must be poing through AJs mind
Yeh kya huwaa,kaise huaa,kab huaa,kyun huaa


Hahahaha...😆
Awww...thank you dear😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Summerlight

Wow...
Love it...
Continue soon please...

Thanks dear😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
Its beautiful
I liked the last part

Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
Salam and hi.
Thanks for lovely response on first part.🤗

Hope I justified second part

I took one inspiration from comment.
Enjoy😃

AKSHAN OS- chapter 6 : CHAOS ( 2nd part )


AJ yeh kia..." Durga took the charge to questioned.

" daadiii! Nahiii..." Guddan cried.

Looking at durga, laxmi gained confidence " AJ ap to meeting k lye gayay thay..." She was not satisfied with this result of meeting.

" daadiii! Nahiii" once again.

" AJ ap to isko pasand bhi nahi kartay..." Sarru took the responsibility to remind AJ of his likings.

" daadiii! Na..."

" shut up! Ab 1 aur bar mujhay yeah daadi ka sur sunayi diya to mujh s bura koi nahi hoga. Aur baqi Sab ,Bahar jayay.mujhay guddan s akele main baat karni hai." AJ finally thought to finish this fish market.

" Ab bhi akele..." Laxmi tongue slipped.

" out! Not a word" AJ try to control himself.

Durga pulled sarru and laxmi out of room while daadi looked at guddan.

" lalla! Aram se..."

" maa, please..."

She went out of the room.AJ glare at guddan who was lying on bed, her face white with fear.

" woh..." Guddan tried to explain but , AJ put his hand on her mouth and positioned himself upon her on bed.

" tum bolne s phle soch nahi sakti.mazak bana kar rakh diya hai tumne hmara. Bachi nahi ho tum k pata Na ho k bachay kese hotay hain. Dimagh hai ya nahi." AJ fired upon her.guddan couldn't take this avatar of her new friend, she removed his hand and blabbered while crying.

" ap bhool rahay hain ...humne dosti karli thi...aur mujh se ghalti hogayi...apni halat dekh kar mujhy laga...laxmi bahu Jo kh rahi wh...sach hai.."

" tumhari yeh halat plane mn faltu thoosne se hui hai. Kaha bhi tha itna mat khao."

" ap phir mujhay dant rahay..."
AJ realized her position.her eyes,nose were red due to constant crying.he calmed down himself.he moved closer to her.

" sorry!" He wiped her tears.she looked away.
" meri ghaliti nahi hai.tum...tum n un Sab k samne wahan Jo hua woh bhi bol diya.Jo hua tha who wahin bhoolna tha "

Guddan realized her mistake." Array to is mn kia hai.main abhi ja kar bol deti hun k him n koi kiss nahi ki.aur dosri baat honay k liye to kiss s bhi agay barhna parta"

Akshat wanted to bang his head on a wall." Tum rehne do."

Guddan tried to protest.
" shhh! Ab tum kuch nahi karogi.yeh situation Ab main sambhalun ga."

Guddan felt a sense of relieve and smiled while akshat now wanted to cry like her " maaa!"

...
" wese to antara Antara kartay hue inki zubaan nahi rukti aur yeh dekho, kia kar k a gyay hain." Sarru couldn't stop herself.

" han Na wohi to. Antara maaji n srf shaddi ka kaha hoga inko.us ki peeche ki khwaish inho n khudi addup karli k antara n Shadi ka kaha hai.shayad kabhi bachon ka bhi letter ajayay to phle se hi tayari karleta hun." Laxmi couldn't hide her anger.here her saasur was having a kid and she only romances with babyboo in dreams.

Daadi and durga were silent. AJ came down from stairs followed by guddan.

" upar Jo bhi tha ,woh 1 misunderstanding thi. Its just a jet lag.or kuch nahi."

Daadi eyes lost its glitters which were there few moments back and she went to her room.akshat realize her position and went there after minutes.

" maa! Ap kun itni udaas hogayi."

" tu janta hai kun hui."

" maa..."

" yad hai jab antara n yeh khabar di thi to tu kitna paglon ki tarhan khush hua tha." A smile touch akshat lips.

" magar maa! Hmarae naseeb main woh khushi kabhi thi hi nahi. Aur Ab, mere 3 bete hain."

" han! Main n kabhi unhn tujh s juda nahi smjha.magar agar tu aur guddan...".

" bass maa! Mujhy dair horahi office k lye." Akshat took long steps and went out of house.

...
" yeh daadi kahan hain. Jab s uncle n baat solve ki ,pata nahi kahan chali gayi.".

"Daadiii" guddan came into room and found daadi crying.

" daadi ,kia hua" she got tensed.

" kuch nahi."

" nahi.tabiyat kharab hai. Main uncle ko phone karun?"

"Nahi.rehne do beta"

" daadi...ap naraz hogayi subha wali baat se."

" nahi beta! Kabhi kabhi dil main koi dabbi hui khwaish upar walay apke samne rakh deta hai aur phir dosre hi pal cheen leta hai."

" daadi...apki batein to mujhy samjh nahi arhi par itna pata hai apki khwaish uncle k bache honge.aur woh hain to apke pas." Guddan provided that solution.

" beta! Tujhay lalla n btaya nahi? "

" kia?"

" saaasuuu maa! " laxmi enter the room without any notice.

" ayay jaldi" she took guddan out of the room and into the hall.

" kahan thin tum? kab se bula rahi" durga questioned her.

" wese sassu maa! Ap aram to aese karrhi hain jese subha wali khabar sach thi" laxmi wanted to remind her.

Guddan felt an unease.

" ap mujhay kun bula rahi thin?
" yeh hall ka haal dekh rahi ho.lag raha sadion s yeh saaf nahi hua hai."

" main abhi kardeti."
They moved aside while guddan started her work.

" kia hua di.kun guddan ko aese kacha chabba rahi ap?"
Sarru questioned durga expressions.

" di apke aur hamare pas chance hai.saasu maa pregnant nahi.himmat mat hariye.hum AJ ko jeetne nahi den ge" laxmi said with full determination.

Durga look both of them with disappointed look. " tum dono shayad 1 important chez bhool rahay ho."

" kia?"

" yeah k guddan n bola tha k " we just kissed." Matlab AJ race mn puri taqat laga rahay hn. Hamain hi pagal banane k lye antara antara hota rehta yahan."

Durga was worried. others too shocked while guddan took her suitcase to room while singing.

" Badhaiyaan bibi tennu badhaiyaan... Ji"

The end😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Hahaha
This was hilarious
Esp laxmi n durga's lines
N guddan ki bhi yahi gaana gana tha🤣
I wish end me saru bolti "lag Gaye"
😆
This was an awesome TS!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Awesome hilarious update
Love it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Wow nice chapter
To guddan ki aj ki beto ki sachai nahi pata
Please update soon
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Hahaha

This was hilarious
Esp laxmi n durga's lines
N guddan ki bhi yahi gaana gana tha 🤣
I wish end me saru bolti "lag Gaye"
😆
This was an awesome TS!



Aww...thank you dear😆

I would have added that if I had known whole song😆

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