AKSHAN TS The Unforgettable Night last part chapte3 Pg 3 Nov 4 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Just read the 2nd part...OMG. ..it's perfect. ..more than to my expectations. ...when I was reading this I was feeling it yaar and I was literally in tears...I was imagining real AKSHAN in this scene. ...thank u so much dear...nd one more thing plzzz send a copy of this to the creatives of Guddan serial...bcoz its PERFECT and outstanding. ..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Thank you aaone hame likhne layak samjhaa👏👏 and I am badly waiting to read next part of the same story
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Beautiful update dear
Just loved their confession scene
Waiting for next part
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Thank you for writing such a beautiful love confession😳 👏
I love how Akshat counted Guddans galthi that made room in his heart.
Please write soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
Akshat's confession was beautifully written🤗
The way he confessed in Guddan ki galtiyonn wala style was nice.This is the kind of confession i'd like to see, from AJ's side.
And Im waiting for next part..post soon🤪

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Awesome update
Love it
Waiting for next update
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
nice update ⭐️⭐️⭐️
exited for next 😛

continue soon dear 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please update soon . can't wait.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ok so guys Dil ko thaam k baithiye kyonki now it's show time. It's a request that kindly pls play Kailash kher's saiyyan song when I indicate in the update u will feel it guys. So here we go

Chapter -3


Chapter -3


After the conversation was over they went to their home.every one was very happy for both of them. All went to sleep n they went to their room.

fter the conversation was over they went to their home.every one was very happy for both of them. All went to sleep n they went to their room.

AJ hold her hand n said thank you


She ask kisliye he replied MERI Zindagi me aane k liye. She replied aap phir shuru ho Gaye. Main change Karne Ka Rahi hu.


After when she came AJ went to change his clothes. When he came back he saw she was sitting at the window n was watching the sky. He asked kya Dekh Rahi ho aasmaan me aaj to amavas hai or Chand BHI Nahi h Jise tum niharo. She replied ye zaruri h kya ki ham sirf ek Chand k na hone ki wajah se itne Sare khubsoorat taron ki maujoodgi ko nazarandaaz Kar de. Aksar aisa hi hota hai ham is ek chand k liye in chhote or pyaare taron ki ignore Kar dete Hain. Jabki ye taare tab BHI aasmaan me hote h jab Chand hota h or tb BHI jb Chand Nahi Hota. Ye aasmaan ki khubsoorati ko Kam Nahi hone dete. MERI maa Kaha Karti thi ki ye chaand to sirf ek badi Khushi k symbol h jabki ye taare ye to dher sari chhoti chhoti khushiyon Ka symbol.


He replied Jaise tum MERI Zindagi me le k aayi ho dher sari khushiyan. Guddan main sach kahta hu tumhare Bina Zindagi jeene k bare me sochna BHI mere liye namumkin h or jis pal mujhe yah khayal aayega wo Mera akhiri pal Hoga.


Just then she kept her hand on his mouth and said that dobara aisi BAAT Kabhi mat kijiyega aapki har saans MERI saans se judi hui bhagwaan na Kare ki apko Kuch hai warna main BHI Nahi bachungi.


(Guys pls play Kailash kher's saiyyan song now )


AJ replied waada karta hu ab mera har pal tumhare naam hoga.

He hold her hands n kissed them they were looking at each other eyes. There was lot of love n emotions for each of them. AJ cupped her face n pulled her closer he kissed her forehead n then her cheeks n was about to kiss her lips when guddan moved away shyly Akshat smiled n then says " I love you" guddan shyly just hugged him and buried her face in his chest. Akshat held his face up by her chin guddan's eyes were down she saw Akshat for once n then they both were in a deep passionate kiss. When they moved apart guddan again try to run just then Akshat hold her n pulled it was her back on his chest. Akshat opened her hairs n drag them in front n kissed her shoulder then her neck. When guddan couldn't bear it she just ran this time Akshat allowed her to run as it was their first intimacy ever in this way. It was first experience for guddan n Akshat knows that how does it feels. After a moment guddan runs to him n hide herself in his chest they were in each others embrace then guddan moved her face n said to Akshat " I love you". Akshat again kissed her this time it was a long one then he started kissing her downwards her neck this was something guddan couldn't understand it was a feeling of love n shy both Akshat hold her dupatta to move it but she turned for a distance when Akshat said " mujhe haq hai " she just again hugged him. He picked her up in his arms they were staring at each other both were was so happy as it was the consummation of two souls not the two bodies .


N when they were done they both slept in each others arms.




Sorry for the 18- content but couldn't write it nish I request you to pls write the ahead content in 18+ manner if u want other wise I am done with it


Warna ham so Nahi payenge.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful update dear
Loved it
Finally they consummate their marriage
And finally Guddu is back in her home where she belongs

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