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Posted: 2 years ago
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Satya watched as Sai fell to the floor, broken. He knew what that felt like, having your heart ripped out and just crushed infront of you.

He knew that Sai loved Virat, it was in her eyes. Her eyes never lied. They were like the reflection of her soul, which was now shattered. He wished he could do something for her, say something, but his experiences told him that no words could heal her, no words could fix her. She didn't need anyone to tell her to be ok, because saying "All will be ok" is easy, but figuring out how to make it all ok, was the toughest part, and even Satya hadn't figured out it, how could he expect her to do so?

So he sat there, for her, his friend, his colleague, his Doctor Chidku, hoping that that would suffice, for now.

Broken people are the strongest, and Sai was one of the strongest people he had met, she would be ok, but till then, he hoped he would suffice, for her.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Sometimes all you could do is wait🤗

Loved it. Keep writing more❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Okay, I liked the title of this drabble 👍🏼

Something about doing little by little in support or moving forward in life was conveyed beautifully. Hopefully you continue

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Posted: 2 years ago
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You picked the scene which is very beautiful and special. Some times only presence matters and not words ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow this is sooo beautiful

Do continue this 🤗

Two broken people 💔 will heal each other🥳

Yesterday episode was really emotional

You penned down those emotions soo beautifully

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: DJ_3

Okay, I liked the title of this drabble 👍🏼

Something about doing little by little in support or moving forward in life was conveyed beautifully. Hopefully you continue

Sirf title hi pasand aaya?🙈 Not continuing this one, but Ik SaiYa will give me more excuses more write🙈

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: badgarlriri

Wow this is sooo beautiful

Do continue this 🤗

Two broken people 💔 will heal each other🥳

Yesterday episode was really emotional

You penned down those emotions soo beautifully

Thank you, but itna hi tha🙈 I love writing drabbles because they help explore more without the characters speaking (and at times they do) and I get to explore what the CVs left for imagination 🙈

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Sirf title hi pasand aaya?🙈 Not continuing this one, but Ik SaiYa will give me more excuses more write🙈


I liked the scene too, but the title was a great hook 🤣. As a writer, I appreciated that.

Obviously the support provided to Sai would suffice as they meet together.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Omg, i loved this, it has to be the best drabble ive read so far In such few words, you made us feel so much with your writing

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: la_Reine

Omg, i loved this, it has to be the best drabble ive read so far In such few words, you made us feel so much with your writing

Thank you🙈

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