Sai Kamal Joshi OS- He is back (last part) updated page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Though I have written this piece a long back but then I start disliking Sairat alot because of the male character 😊...Now I only love SAi KAMAL JOSHI and someone yesterday Dmed me too write something so it's an old 2 part story.


Please bear it as I haven't proofread it.



Everyone was happily dancing and enjoying after Dahi handi. Sai was too enjoying but suddenly she felt someone's touch on her shoulder,she immediately turned to see no one around but she can feel his inconvenient touch. She ignored and started once again. Eating and monkeying around but then again someone touched her by closing her eyes on her waist. Now she is horrified to see again no one.

But this is not new from past few days she is thinking someone is stalking her and eyeing her. She isn't feeling safe ,so she went to Virat to talk but he was too busy then she said to Aai that she is going back to her room and she is not feeling well. But in her mind and heart she is getting tensed because of what's happening around her from past few minutes.

While entering her room,she again felt someone's presence and the similar sort of smell and when she reached her room,She saw it decorated and her GADCHIROLI MEMORIES of kidnapping were back with her candid photos hanging around and even some of the photos were so casuall like when she is sleeping and studying.

She is about to turn and go when someone pulled her towards himself.She is disgusted, horrified, tensed, and started panicking and shouting JAGTAP leave me ? How the hell you are here? What you are doing?

Jagtap-Kyu tera pati to ja rha hai na. Ab tujhe mai le jaunga,tbhi to itni decoration kr rkhi hai and he start manhandling her.

At the moment Ashwini entered and screamed Viraatttt but because of loud music no one is able to hear but she decided to fight back for her daughter. Ashwini started slapping Jagtap and Jagtap thought to leave and Sai- Dont worry BAIKO I will take you very soon. Sai saw her Aaba's photo fallen down on floor with blood. All her old memories came back and she sat on corner crying,sobbing . Ashwini was trying to console her but the flashback memories were overpowering her. She was murmuring something inaudible. Ashwini decided to inform everyone but before Ashwini went downstairs she put the duppata on her teared up clothes as during fighting with Jagtap her dress got teared up.

Shr went downstairs to inform everyone. Everyone gets into shock.Virat gets dumbstruck as he thought whether Sai was about to tell him same few moments back. He run to his room and what he saw was a devastating SaiJoshi. A SaiJoshi whom he saw after her Aaba's death. He couldn't move inside.

While everyone started questioning what happen ? How it happened? Who was the person but Sai was not in the state to revert back any questions ,she was holding her Aaba's frame where some blood spots were there.

Virat immediately called GC police station to inquire about JAGTAP and VITTHAL.He got shocked when they told him he ran away from jail last week. He scolded them for not informing him about this because of which Sai is in trouble.

He told everyone about this,suddenly Ninad spoke - Oh that's why this fearless girl was asking me to drop her to the college yesterday. Samrat too joined yes she asked me too 2days back. Virat felt guilty as she asked him to drop but in his ego he denied.

While Ashwini and Shivani stayed back with Sai,everyone gets worried but went down to their rooms.



Hope I will end this part as soon as possible as show is unbearable and torturous,its Sai aka Ayesha Singh who keep me hooked but now that too phase is going.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am crying😭You have written it very nicely

Atleast here her past is being addressed, show meiin toh they pretend as if nothing happened. Her traumas need to be addressed, par nahi hoga kyunki Leena aunty ne KD ke plot meiin aisa kuch nahi likha tha aur apne CVs sirf naam ke CV hai.

do continue this one

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's beautiful dude 🥺🥺❤️❤️

I literally started crying when I read this 😭😭 I just imagined this happening infront of my eyes 😖😖

I really want to slap Virat for not listening to Sai in his ego 🤬🤬 stupid idiotic son of a beach ball 😠😠 I really really wish Samru got to know that and beat him to a pulp he really deserve it right now.

Update soon please , can't wait.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinafans

Though I have written this piece a long back but then I start disliking Sairat alot because of the male character 😊...Now I only love SAi KAMAL JOSHI and someone yesterday Dmed me too write something so it's an old 2 part story.


Please bear it as I haven't proofread it.



Everyone was happily dancing and enjoying after Dahi handi. Sai was too enjoying but suddenly she felt someone's touch on her shoulder,she immediately turned to see no one around but she can feel his inconvenient touch. She ignored and started once again. Eating and monkeying around but then again someone touched her by closing her eyes on her waist. Now she is horrified to see again no one.

But this is not new from past few days she is thinking someone is stalking her and eyeing her. She isn't feeling safe ,so she went to Virat to talk but he was too busy then she said to Aai that she is going back to her room and she is not feeling well. But in her mind and heart she is getting tensed because of what's happening around her from past few minutes.

While entering her room,she again felt someone's presence and the similar sort of smell and when she reached her room,She saw it decorated and her GADCHIROLI MEMORIES of kidnapping were back with her candid photos hanging around and even some of the photos were so casuall like when she is sleeping and studying.

She is about to turn and go when someone pulled her towards himself.She is disgusted, horrified, tensed, and started panicking and shouting JAGTAP leave me ? How the hell you are here? What you are doing?

Jagtap-Kyu tera pati to ja rha hai na. Ab tujhe mai le jaunga,tbhi to itni decoration kr rkhi hai and he start manhandling her.

At the moment Ashwini entered and screamed Viraatttt but because of loud music no one is able to hear but she decided to fight back for her daughter. Ashwini started slapping Jagtap and Jagtap thought to leave and Sai- Dont worry BAIKO I will take you very soon. Sai saw her Aaba's photo fallen down on floor with blood. All her old memories came back and she sat on corner crying,sobbing . Ashwini was trying to console her but the flashback memories were overpowering her. She was murmuring something inaudible. Ashwini decided to inform everyone but before Ashwini went downstairs she put the duppata on her teared up clothes as during fighting with Jagtap her dress got teared up.

Shr went downstairs to inform everyone. Everyone gets into shock.Virat gets dumbstruck as he thought whether Sai was about to tell him same few moments back. He run to his room and what he saw was a devastating SaiJoshi. A SaiJoshi whom he saw after her Aaba's death. He couldn't move inside.

While everyone started questioning what happen ? How it happened? Who was the person but Sai was not in the state to revert back any questions ,she was holding her Aaba's frame where some blood spots were there.

Virat immediately called GC police station to inquire about JAGTAP and VITTHAL.He got shocked when they told him he ran away from jail last week. He scolded them for not informing him about this because of which Sai is in trouble.

He told everyone about this,suddenly Ninad spoke - Oh that's why this fearless girl was asking me to drop her to the college yesterday. Samrat too joined yes she asked me too 2days back. Virat felt guilty as she asked him to drop but in his ego he denied.

While Ashwini and Shivani stayed back with Sai,everyone gets worried but went down to their rooms.



Hope I will end this part as soon as possible as show is unbearable and torturous,its Sai aka Ayesha Singh who keep me hooked but now that too phase is going.



Its beautiful

Please continue soon

Can't wait

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome chapter! Heartbreaking. But well written. Look forward to reading more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is damn good❤️ Sai’s fear and Virat’s regret.

Please do write the next part soon.. eagerly waiting for it😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautifully written👏

My heart broke🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is damn good dear!!!👏

Wonderfully penned! This fear of hers needs to end up fully but instead of this she is being manhandled and abused on daily basis.. 😔

Looking forward for next parts!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome story

Hope this brings Virat and Sai together

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I m really sorry for being so dramatic but I m not watching the show anymore so I have changed the storyline too.


If you dont like the chapter...you can throw me out haha....

Just a random chapter in progress.Sorry if you find any grammatical errors .


Brave and Shot


It's being 3 hours ,Sai isn't getting normal. They called Usha Maushi from GC also.

Everyone is getting worried in the hall. Kaku taunted she destroyed today's day also. What an inauspicious girl she is. Pakhi supported ,cant 1 day we can go with happy moments. Virat feels disgusted.

Samrat raised his voice- Are you people out of your mind? That girl is going into so much of trauma and you still taunting blaming her ,Kaku you and patralekha being a woman saying these things. What happen if these things happen to you and Virat instead of stopping them you crying here.

Samrat decided to go and meet Sai and said no one will say anything to her ,she is my sister.

Sai was thinking about her Aaba's death and somehow hallucinating him nearby her.

The room door opens she saw someone entering because of constant crying her vision is getting blurred ,she called Aaba but it was Samrat. She ran to hug him. Samrat was taken aback with the move.

Sai- Aaba where you went.Do you know what had happened.He came back,she started everything hallucinating Samrat as Aaba and she fainted. Samrat called ashwini to put her on bed and make her sleep. He was feeling bad and his eyes welled up because she saw him not as a brother but as a father.

He took pledge now nothing will.happen to Sai, he will take the matter into his own hands. Virat decided to tell Samrat everything about GC ,Jagtap,Kamal Sir,his forced marriage and first Anniversary.

Samrat scolded Virat for being so insensitive towards a 19year old girl who is an orphan living into a forced marriage and get taunted everything she do.

A normal girl of her age lives carefree life ,here she is always being taunted,waking up at early doing house hold chores,studying late night. What's this Virat? you have married her to take the responsibility or just to make her suffer.

But Virat we will talk all this later,I need to see the CCTV FOOTAGE near Sai's college and the stops she wait for the bus as she told she saw someone stalking her . We may get the clue.

Virat took the action and called his officers to track everything happened with Sai in last 2 days from Home to College. Her mobile locations and everything.

They find a man who waits for Sai in Auto daily,Virat suspects it is Jagtap in disguise .


Next day morning- Sai woke up with a jerk and started screaming Aaba,Virat was sleeping next to her trying to calm her down but she keep screaming Aaba please come back. Samrat was the first one to reach and called Sai and jerked her,she came back to reality seek to see. It was her dream that Aaba was here.

She said Jagtap will marry her this time and he will kill Virat sir this time. He is sure ,I cant risk anyone. I dont have anyone to lose.

Samrat said we need to do your help Sai but for that you need to help us. You have to find Jagtap.


They made a plan.

Sai was weak as she hasn't ate anything from previous day but she was adamant this time she will kill Jagtap if he has done anything to her this family.

Samrat and Virat came- Are you ready Sai?

Sai being little underconfident and nervously said Yes.

They said nothing will happen,if you want to come out and save yourself ,you have to do this.

Virat and Samrat before Sai went to the bus stop from where she has to take bus. She missed the bus intentionally and the same auto arrived.She started getting sweaty but calmed herself down and sat. Virat and Samrat followed. Auto took another turn. Sai said you took the wrong turn my college is not there. He was not listening. The auto kept moving. Sh started screaming who are you? Where you are taking me?

After reaching to a deserted place and an old building he forcefully took her out. And shown his real face of being Jagtap. She starts panicking. Virat and Samrat came out and said Jagtap leave her.

Jagtap- Oh! So all this is planned but before you plan something. I have some other plans also for you. He showed them the surroundings now they are surrounded by goons. Virat and Samrat laughed You are still a kid bro. Virat called someone. All the goons were shot by the police officers instantly. Jagtap if she is not mine,I will not let her be you. Sai said this time I will not let anything happen to anyone. She snatched the gun from Jagtap and shot him on head. The blood was on her face.

She felt relieved and kneeled down with a thud. Aaba I killed your killer. I m not a murderer. Samrat make her stand and said Sai we are proud of you. Virat and all the police officers clapped and saluted her for being so brave even after being captivated.





So this is the end, I actually have written something else but due to poor writing shown on TV. I degraded myself too

..You can't throw me out now.🤣




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