SaiRat OS - Another battle after the calm - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Optimist_d

Oh my gosh!!! Hahaha!! I love this Virat Chavan!! Superb, amazing!! I'm still laughing and blushing simultaneously!😆

I am waiting to see this Chavan sahab 😳

Subah subah mujhe itna muskurane ke liye, shukriya!❤️

Glad I could bring a smile on your face 😊

This is so in character for them, I can imagine our SaiRat all the while! I also love the way you have brought in the head massage wala scene.

That's one of my favourite scenes. Very simple but was very cute and romantic too . Aisa scenes kyun nahi dete. Separation ke baad shaayad milega 😆


He realised the next day that he was a stupid. He indeed is! Kitna acha chance miss kardi. But it's so soothing to sleep like that with your loved ones, isnt it? So that brings a smile on my face 😳

😊 Chance toh miss kardi par sukoon se so paya. Ab woh khud head massage de rahi hai aur woh bhi jhooth mooth ki headache ke liye 😂😂.


Waise I think SAI Joshi yeh sab sache doshi pakadne ke liye hi karrahi hogi🤪☺️Warna Virat toh bina bhaang ke kuch karega bhi?

Ha ha ha, liked this 😆. He might not get too bold but he will certainly flirt. He might make excuses to make her stay close to him 😉.


Thanks for the comments 😊 ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

I hope Sai jaldi se sache doshi ko pakad le.😆😆


Its awesome!!❤️


Ha ha ha

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Wow.....very nice......loved it....👌

Bechara Virat how much torture he will bear....... he is also human being na.... Sai being innocent could not understand his behaviour......

🤣🤣 Viru ka haal toh. Woh toh gaya, Sai ko waapas aane do 😂😂.

Seriously it is another big battle for him to control his thoughts, emotions and desires.....

Definitely, will be a treat to watch ❤️

Sincere request is that please write the next part to it..... it is very beautiful.....

😆😂 sure dear, thank you so much


Thanks for tagging me.....

Keep writing more and more....


Thank you 😍


These are things we wish to see

Hope they give us something in these lines. I am sure they will give us the best scenes .

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: linakusharberry

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Awesome awesome awesome

Loved it

Viru toh bada sanskari nikala 🤣 bahoot zyada self control hai

Thanks for tagging me


Ha ha ha woh toh bahut shareef hai 🤣🤣

Hum dekhne toh waale hain ki uska self control kitna hai

Thanks dear 😍❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ShipIsSailing

Thiscwas so great😍

Bechare virat ka to haal behaal ho gaya


Ha ha ha


Thank you 😊 ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: maahi11

Pard kay maza aa gaya

I hope we see this, how viru is latoo on his wife, and see her everywhere


Thank you 😍


Woh toh hai, latoo toh ho gaya, ab kaam shuru time 😉

I hope we get a lot of good scenes after separation 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Rosekutty12

This is such a well written piece, totally in character for Sai and virat. Sai unaware and Virat madly in love. The frustration and tension seemed so real. You are very gifted to convey the right emotions. Please please please continue writing a next part for this. Need to stay away from online and offline toxicity


Thank you so much 😍


Sure, will continue soon 😆. Yeah, has become too toxic 😒. Another reason why I finished this yesterday 😆.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waise,while reading this,I was like ,isse ab control chootega, kuch toh karega yeh ab, ab kuch karega, ab toh pakka karega,aisa karte karte OS hi khatam hogaya🤣

For lord sake ,yeh Ninu ka beta kitna masoom hai yaar, itna control, mein baaki sab keliye control gaana likhti rehti hu,par shayad seriously yeh leta hai.

Bhai,tujhe jo karna hai woh kardena bhai, koi kuch nahi kahega, vaada bhi nahi,woh bhi mukt hojaayega tujhse. 🤣

Awesome one yaar.

Absolutely loved it❤❤🤗

Pls continue karo, zara control kam karvaavo🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Nice update 😊


Virat frustrated & not able to control his feelings☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Waise,while reading this,I was like ,isse ab control chootega, kuch toh karega yeh ab, ab kuch karega, ab toh pakka karega,aisa karte karte OS hi khatam hogaya🤣

🤣🤣 Kitni masoom ho tum

Mere OS mein itna hi milega 🤣

Control isliye nahi choota kyunki mein likh rahi hoon 🤣🤣

For lord sake ,yeh Ninu ka beta kitna masoom hai yaar, itna control, mein baaki sab keliye control gaana likhti rehti hu,par shayad seriously yeh leta hai.

🤣🤣

Bhai,tujhe jo karna hai woh kardena bhai, koi kuch nahi kahega, vaada bhi nahi,woh bhi mukt hojaayega tujhse. 🤣

Agli baar ek line add kar deti hoon ki sab ho gaya hai, bas 😛


Awesome one yaar.

Absolutely loved it❤❤🤗

Pls continue karo, zara control kam karvaavo🤣

🤣🤣Badmassh



Thank you Masoom Shristhi 😉

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