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Posted: 4 years ago
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In Nasik,when his battery sank,

A girl saved him, Shivani bua her power bank,

The 'junoon' girl danced as if she had drank,

Still he lost heart, at just '2 day wala' camp.


He thought it's a 'true love', an illusion to be frank,

Left the hotel room, with her number on his hand,

Matured, the girl was, as much he could understand,

But the girl was a narcissist, had lot on her demand.


The girl blocked his number when he did not identify,

In anger the girl said, she would marry another lad,

Douchbag, he thought, their love was all grand,

Promised he would preserve it till life has an end


Then he met a 'muffat' girl who had got first rank,

'Connection' he felt with her, that 'Kaynaat' had designed

Married he got with the girl, saying it is just 'farz' errand,

Nothing just a 'deal' he said, leaving the girl almost blank.


His heart started beating, seeing the girl,all saree clad,

Enjoyed he lot with her, leaving the other girl in angst,

Soon to realise the other girl was not the image he had,

But real mature was the girl, everyone thought was mad,


Started he falling for the girl which he never had planned

Ignoring now what he feels, burring his head in sand,

One day he would know the 'True love' after a lot of pang.

What he then does is to see,to have happy end with a bang.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyThoughts

In Nasik,when his battery sank,

A girl saved him, giving her power bank,

The 'junoon' girl danced as if she had drank,

Still he lost heart, at just '2 day wala' camp.


He thought it's a 'true love', an illusion to be frank,

Left the hotel room, with her number on his hand,

Matured, the girl was, as much he could understand,

But the girl was a narcissist, had lot on her demand.


The girl blocked his number when he did not identify,

In anger the girl said, she would marry another lad,

Douchbag, he thought, their love was all grand,

Promised he would preserve it till life has an end

Then he met a 'muffat' girl who had got first rank,

'Connection' he felt with her, that 'Kaynaat' had designed

Married he got with the girl, saying it is just 'farz' errand,

Nothing just a 'deal' he said, leaving the girl almost blank.


His heart started beating, seeing the girl,all saree clad,

Enjoyed he lot with her, leaving the other girl in angst,

Soon to realise the other girl was not the image he had,

But real mature was the girl, everyone thought was mad,


Started he falling for the girl which he never had planned

Ignoring now what he feels, burring his head in sand,

One day he would know the 'True love' after a lot of pang.

What he then does is to see,to have happy end with a bang.


👏👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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👏👏👏 Arre koi award toh de iss khurri nu ❤️👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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so beautifully written!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyThoughts

In Nasik,when his battery sank,

A girl saved him, giving her power bank,

The 'junoon' girl danced as if she had drank,

Still he lost heart, at just '2 day wala' camp.


He thought it's a 'true love', an illusion to be frank,

Left the hotel room, with her number on his hand,

Matured, the girl was, as much he could understand,

But the girl was a narcissist, had lot on her demand.


The girl blocked his number when he did not identify,

In anger the girl said, she would marry another lad,

Douchbag, he thought, their love was all grand,

Promised he would preserve it till life has an end


Then he met a 'muffat' girl who had got first rank,

'Connection' he felt with her, that 'Kaynaat' had designed

Married he got with the girl, saying it is just 'farz' errand,

Nothing just a 'deal' he said, leaving the girl almost blank.


His heart started beating, seeing the girl,all saree clad,

Enjoyed he lot with her, leaving the other girl in angst,

Soon to realise the other girl was not the image he had,

But real mature was the girl, everyone thought was mad,


Started he falling for the girl which he never had planned

Ignoring now what he feels, burring his head in sand,

One day he would know the 'True love' after a lot of pang.

What he then does is to see,to have happy end with a bang.


Beautiful 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow, it is very different, awesome, wonderful

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyThoughts

In Nasik,when his battery sank,

A girl saved him, giving her power bank,

The 'junoon' girl danced as if she had drank,

Still he lost heart, at just '2 day wala' camp.


He thought it's a 'true love', an illusion to be frank,

Left the hotel room, with her number on his hand,

Matured, the girl was, as much he could understand,

But the girl was a narcissist, had lot on her demand.


The girl blocked his number when he did not identify,

In anger the girl said, she would marry another lad,

Douchbag, he thought, their love was all grand,

Promised he would preserve it till life has an end


You gotta kiss many frogs before you get to kiss your prince. Quite similar situation hai yahan bhi, not literally though. 🤣


hen he met a 'muffat' girl who had got first rank,

'Connection' he felt with her, that 'Kaynaat' had designed

Married he got with the girl, saying it is just 'farz' errand,

Nothing just a 'deal' he said, leaving the girl almost blank.


Reminds me of PC: "important encounters are planned by souls long before the bodies see each other." The dandelions landing on them and this para too: apt reminder of the same.

Sai and Virat individually are everything that the other wanted, but didn't know that they wanted it. They fit together like pieces of puzzle. And when they met, time didn't stop, for it began since then. Time, that would witness them becoming beautiful part of each other's life.


His heart started beating, seeing the girl,all saree clad,

Enjoyed he lot with her, leaving the other girl in angst,

Soon to realise the other girl was not the image he had,

But real mature was the girl, everyone thought was mad,


Started he falling for the girl which he never had planned

Ignoring now what he feels, burring his head in sand,

One day he would know the 'True love' after a lot of pang.

What he then does is to see,to have happy end with a bang.


Lovely write-up! You summed up all of it so beautifully. Always a pleasure to read.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awwiieee!!❤️❤️loved ittt!☺️👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RadhaChauhan


Lovely write-up! You summed up all of it so beautifully. Always a pleasure to read.

Reminds me of PC: "important encounters are planned by souls long before the bodies see each other." The dandelions landing on them and this para too: apt reminder of the same.

It is a force that overrides the rational mind...Virat somehow had to convince his rational mind while doing what kaynat was propting him to do...rightly so but no one was convinced with his logic..but there was no other way for bothe of them...two selfless, righteous souls..one with a force and other with patient strategy...


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Posted: 4 years ago
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So glad you liked it...❤️🤗

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