9th NOV written update - US

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys ,

I M AVANI

well this is my first update ... hope u guys like it.. feel free to comment...

OK here we go:

** scene continues from yesterday.. Baa , and the dad r sitting on jhula in chowk. Maasi and savitri walk in holding each other's hand. menka is standing there giving milk / water to her husband. Maasi walks and puts the bag full of jwellery. she says: my mother gave me all this jewellry when i got married and now i want to give em to saraswati.. Every body is shocked.

Baa says we dont need ur gift. savitri is sad

Baa: take this away.

Menka as usual interrupts: chanchal ben i told u before that this is our family matter, and if u stay away from this good for u.

Chanchal maasi: Menka ben i also told u that saraswati's maasi is still alive to take care of her niece. this is my right.

baa: we all r here to worry about saraswati. we can give 10 times more than what you brought.

Dad :Pick this all away before it throw em away. no more discussion.

Maasi : throw it , but i wont touch this jewellery.

savitri: dont be angry i will calm my sister.

dad : u dont speak in middle , savitri. chanchal r u taking this away or not

chanchal : no

dad : i know what should i do for my daughter. i m her dad and i m alive not dead. i dont wants any alms. saraswati's bidai will happen and that to with all jewellery. and this is my decision

Menka is shocked. Baa is shocked. savitri is very happy.

all sisters r happy . chanchal maasi grins and is happy.

Baa: suryakant, the decision to send saraswati without jewelery was not made becoz the garodia family ( iguess thats the family name) doesnt have enough wealth. that decision was taken so that girls realize their mistake. But then if this is ur decision then i agree with you.

Menka is shocked. they all look to chanchal

Baa: we dont want any ordinary person to point on us talking about jewellery which is very mamuli. we helped a beggar , so now the beggar wants to help us!! Saraswati will get new jewellery and we dont need any body's interference in it!!!

chanchal joins hands and leaves

all sisters r happy but saraswati is thinking of something.

Next scene maasi and all 4 sisters r standing and gauri says maasi u r wonderful. I have no doubts about it says maasi..

every body laughs.

Maasi : didnt i tell u ? dont worry as long as u have your maasi. i m therefor u. and remember one thing. Maasi is just like mother.And can a mother send away her daughter without any jewellery??? No isnt it??

lakshmi: maasi u r the queen of jhansi today!! didi! do smile now!

saraswati hugs chanchal maasi..

Maasi : Remain happy always! i will make a move now!

she leaves and all sisters chat.

Later in evening. in room saraswati is doing something. lakshmi come sto her and asks her what was she doing??

saraswati: Embroidering a kurta>>

lakshmi: oh i can c that but for whom??

saraswati: for yuvraj

lakshmi: for yuvraj?

saraswati : yeah He saved us and kshitij from bapuji's anger. can we get more lovable brother than him?? Besides i will be ging away in a couple of days. so i want to give yuvraj such a gift that he remembers me ever after i have gone away.

lakshmi : didi this is very beautiful yuvraj will always remember. Idea!! why dont we all contribute the money to by him one more kurta?? all sisters r happy.

saraswati: even if its becoz of kurta atleast i will be here with you all even after i m gone!!

all sisters r sad....

Lakshmi: come lets collect money to buy him a kurta..

she brings a box. all sisters gather around

they have money in them

they r counting em .. gauri takes out only little monry from her box.

lakshmi: i think this money will not be enough..

gauri : ok i will give more today. ok take all money from my box.

lakshmi: now we will get kurta

gauri :yay we will get kurta tomorrow.

saraswati: quiet now .. we will get it tomorrow. dont make noise every body will wake up.

savitri is standing in window thinking about her daughters. sad music is playing( i feel bad for her yaar)

saraswati walks in her room.

savitri : you r to go away from this family, this atmospherein a couple of days so u r not sleepy?? mee too >> i m also not sleepy i was praying god..

saraswati: maa would i be able to manage that house na??

savitri : yes ofcourse!! I f the plant i have raised into a tree with such care that tree can give such a soothing shade to her father's home , it will sure ly do that in her husband's home. I trust my daughter.

saraswati: Mom please sing that bed time song for me.

savitri sits on bed and saraswati sits on floor keeping her head in her mother's lap.

savitri sings beautiful lori

"nanhi pari sone chali hawa dhire aanaaaaa....."

Beautiful must watch scene

all sisters come there..... all watch mom sing.

all hug eachother as mother sings... menka walks by savitri's room

she sees and she walks in rudely!!!

Menka: you trouble me all day !! dont do that at night atleast!! i have to do lots of htings in morning. I m shutting off the light!!! Jai shree krishna!!!

she turns off the light and walks away. all sisters and mom r shocked.

In morning they show menka and the rasik are talking.

rasik : so that means jijaji will order all new jewellery for saraswati??

Menka: no we will find old ones

rasik : not bad idea

Menka :Rasik!

funny uncle : can any of her idea ever be bad??

menka: what?

funnyy uncle : did i say something? i dont understand ! khitij was caught with just a earing, so where r rest of jevars?

they all wonder.

rasik bhai is tensed and he says may be he sold em\

funny uncle : but khsitij didnt leave so rest of the jewelleryyyyyy......

menka and rasik r tensed.

Baa: now we will have to make all new jewellery. wonder where could the rascal have sold that jewellery.

suryakant is angry.

in other room gauri and saraswati r talkinng

gauri: one thing is certain kshitij wouldnt steal them, as he was with us.

lakshmi :yes he knew if he steals didi would be hurt. and kshitij would never hurt didi. but then who stole it??

then they show some man holding the bag of jewellery and walking in some bazarr.. he walks in jewellery store and shows to the owner. the owner is shocked ot c and he gives the man money. man puts in bag and is shown walking back. who is he?? then there is a man standing on bank of river the first man walks to him and hands him bag. and guess hwo was the man standing on river bank?????

the first man shows him bag of money he is yuvraj's friednd. and the man on river is yuvraj. he is wearing goggles he takes em off and is happy to c all this money.

yuvraj: mind blowing!!!!

he takes money

and the victory music plays in back ground..

he holdsmoney and is very happy and keeps repeating mindblowing again and again.

he than laughs

Yuvraj: yayyyyyyy i did it!!!

His friend: but how did u do it yuvraj?? it hought u wont be able to do it!!!

yuvraj: No matter whether it is right or wrong yuvraj never leaves his task incomplete. And this was very simple. bechara khsitij

friend: how did u get this idea

yuvraj: when i found about khsitij and saraswati didi!! then i planned to trap kshitij. i wrote a letter addressing saraswati didi with kshitij's name. to call him in garba then i left the note in his front door and then kshitij had to come.

flash backs

Yuvraj: but before i did anything lakshmi saw kshitij so i pretended to save em from dad and told em to leav from back door. and then i wen to saraswati didi's room and got the jewellery. then when i tried ot get out of room. i saw kshitij and lakshmi. i escaped from there and i saw kshitij leaving in other people's dress. i slowly slipped the earing in his pocket. and then later saved him from dad and left him on road.

yuvraj and his friend r talking something .. we cant hear it......

friend: why did u let go of kshitij ??? u should have taken him to police>>.

yuvraj: no yaar then police would do inquiry and if we were caught then we would in trouble .

friend : yuvraj u r genius

yuvraj: i know. now as i let go kshitij.. i m his hero. dad already thinks i m hero. now as i saved kshitij from dad.. saraswatididi will think i m hero .. so who can do all this only me??/ and now we got money and no body even doubts us so i m hero inmy sight too..

friend: yuvraj u r the best.

Yuvraj : (grins evil) I know.

Episode ends...

hope u all like it

i will try to be better next time

please do post comments

Edited by topranger - 18 years ago

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bhaveshavani thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no replies 😭 😭 😭 is it that bad???
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It is anything but bad. That is a really nice and long update!! I hope you continue making such updates.

-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I just read the whole thing, that Yuvraj going is a jerk. I hate him


-Rimpy 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for a good update.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for a good update.
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Sree17 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for a good update.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx 4 the update
i really tought yuvraj was good -- i wonder why he stole the money?? why steal the money if you only have to aks youre dad 😕 who loves him more then everything 😕

i hope kshitij will return for saraswati
bhaveshavani thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah but now is the big game ... i bet saraswati will find about yuvraj and then she will try to prove him theif and then troubles troubles troubles 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the detailed update 😉

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