MG-Veiled Intentions-Ch-11-Pg-16-(19.7.25). - Page 4

the story is warming up well. Well, Bingley loved parties though Dev here is sharing Geet's view of parties being a charade. Nice shift from the original. Maan already deserves a kick for being so judgmental. Why is Geet wearing a suit to a high society event...just didn't strike the right chord.

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

Its getting intense now! It will be intriguing to see how they fall for each other

Yes, it is getting intense. Let’s see how it goes…

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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maan is unbelievably arrogant n egoistic

maan purposely insulted geet

Thanks for your feedback.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 2

of cos Geet was angry with Maan's comments

her thoughts were reasonable

well Geet encountered Dev

liked their conversation

enjoyed their banter

Dev and Maan are indeed different

hate Maan's accusations

as expected Geet was upset

pleased that Dev intervened

oh Geet heard what he said about her

she felt irrelevant

admire her determination

what will she do?

update soon

Loved reading your comments.

Well he has met his match in the form of Geet.

Let’s see how it goes from here…

Originally posted by: crazymaneetian

the story is warming up well. Well, Bingley loved parties though Dev here is sharing Geet's view of parties being a charade. Nice shift from the original. Maan already deserves a kick for being so judgmental. Why is Geet wearing a suit to a high society event...just didn't strike the right chord.

Well she is not that fashionable in that sense.

And I am taking inspiration from the original giving my Indian touch a bit.

Changes will be there as the story develops.

oh man what encounters!!!

really maan what made you make such statement to dev about talking to geet....seriosly what do you think of yourself....he is so so arrogant....opposite of dev...

waiting for him to hear from geet....please dont back down girl....give it to him....

Originally posted by: Alamelu

oh man what encounters!!!

really maan what made you make such statement to dev about talking to geet....seriosly what do you think of yourself....he is so so arrogant....opposite of dev...

waiting for him to hear from geet....please dont back down girl....give it to him....

Well here arrogance meets his right match.

The clashes are going to be intense for sure.

Chapter 3

Curious Chapter

Geet is once again dragged to the Khurana Estate

however Dev seems like a pleasant person

while Maan very distant so did he recognize Geet or not

but her dislike for Maan is only increasing

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 3

Curious Chapter

Geet is once again dragged to the Khurana Estate

however Dev seems like a pleasant person

while Maan very distant so did he recognize Geet or not

but her dislike for Maan is only increasing

Yes, her opinions are only getting stronger more & more as the prejudice is increasing.