Something About Us- MG || (Part 60|Page 60) - Page 18

Originally posted by: Mridzy

I have just discovered this story, and read the latest part first - oh my, that was unbelievable! So so so good! ❤️

I adore works that is so beautifully written that the emotions the characters are feeling is transferred to the readers! And from one writer to another I know how tough that is and you did that amazingly with the description of body language and tapping into the emotions!

Also the pattern and style of writing throughout this part - amazing!

I am intrigued and will go read this story from the start now! Thanks for this wonderful, wonderful part!

Oh wow, your message just made my day! ❤️ It means so much to hear that the emotions translated so strongly for you—writing with depth and capturing those little nuances of body language and emotions is something I always strive for, so your words truly mean a lot!

And coming from a fellow writer, I know you understand how tricky it can be to strike that perfect balance, so your appreciation hits even deeper. Thank you for taking the time to share this—I’m beyond grateful! I hope you enjoy the journey from the beginning, and I’d love to hear your thoughts as you go.

Sending all the love and appreciation right back at you! 💕✨

Very interesting update dear Neelu ☺️

Just loved it 🤗

I really loved it how they were happy & carefree for that point of time .. they were not boss & employee but two people who understand each other ☺️

I really appreciate that Maan gave in to his surroundings and surprisingly he liked it which made him concious ... Even Geet noticed that & was happy to see this as she has seen Maan irritated in that fuss of high society parties

There was an awkward silence in night between them & she could sense this deep quite & interesting connection ... Next day seeing this Geet gathering courage invite him to carnival.. as usual Maan brushes it calling himself a boss embarrassing her further ... It made both of them annoyed

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Part 15

Curious and so Amazing Update

Geet seems to be falling once again for Maan

but even he too yet he is holding himself back

like when she asks him about the carnival, he first sees her hands clenching

at the sides then he refuses.

maybe Maan himself is waiting for Geet to make the first move as he is scared

there is great attraction between the two

yet their overlooking it

Beautiful update lovely 🌹 😍 😍 superb super

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geet n maan both sees maan in different way n shade which he never show to any one comes in his life

the way maan act last night geet is confuse but then also courage her self to ask maan for carnival on weekend n maan turn same like before embarrassing geet

Thanks for the update

Part 15

Something much deeper is indeed happening

Maan was correct that the guy would remember Geet

he raised a valid point

of cos Geet does not regret what she did

so Maan does understand Geet

Maan's thoughts were reasonable

he was clearly mesmerised seeing Geet

enjoyed the banter

well Maan decided not to act on his feelings

the night has indeed changed everything

now Geet feels lighter

Geet's thoughts were understandable

as expected she thinks about Maan and what happened

great that Geet invited Maan to the carnival

his question was anticipated

oh no he reminded Geet that he is her boss

Geet's reaction was justified

she was clearly embarrassed

update soon

part 11

When his anger cooled down a bit, he took a bite of the food. It feels like home because that's what it is. A taste of home.

Good job Maan. You got her the pastry she liked. A nice gesture that was well deserved.

The GREEN mask. Had to laugh at that one. She is good. She let him know she knew.

Geet will go the gala with Maan instead of Sheetal. She may be intimidated at the whole prospect of attending such an event with him.