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Twisted love

Maan never liked Grey much because she used to call him with names in childhood.

Dadimaa bought Geet back in his life after her parent's death.

They fell in love with each other but Geet was already engaged.

Ending was bit confusing, unable to understand what really happened with them.

Tum bin

Geet always helped Maan by acting like a mean person and Maan loved her like anything.

One misunderstanding caused a rift between them but they finally got engaged at the end.

Whispers in the rain

Maaneet met each other at a wedding and got attracted towards each other but Angad was part of her life.

They met again and now are together.

Beyond the distance

Beautiful one

This story depicted the long distance relationship very beautifully.

Maan took Geet's love for granted by following only his dreams and not caring about Geet.

Maan got his senses back in time and he came back to her

Entry 1

Beautiful song

Amazing OS... greatly written

Feeling for Geet

Sad that she is all alone and cannot go back to her family

her life has drastically changed….

Of cos she misses her family and wishes to go back

alas it’s impossible

she had no choice but to leave

Past well incorporated

as expected Geet was the dutiful daughter

so her future was already planned by her family

everything was going smoothly until she fell in love

love is unplanned and just happens

she could help but fall in love with Maan

however her marriage was fixed

so she felt her feelings were one sided

her reaction was reasonable when she got to know that Maan was her fiancé bestfriend

well she decided to confess her feelings for Maan

Gosh she ended confessing to her fiancé instead

Angry that he hit her

Not surprised that he told her family

Dismayed how her parents treated her

Cannot blame her for leaving

call it fate or destiny she met Maan after 10 years

her reaction was reasonable

glad that he was adamant that she meet him for coffee

her thoughts were understandable

hope that the writer continue and we get to know what happens….

Entry 2

Lovely song

Touching OS…. beautifully written

sad that Maan is no more

feeling for Geet….

well she only has their memories

she cannot help but think about the past and the good time

glad that Meera came there

Meera is a wonderful friend

great that she made Geet talk about Maan

Geet needed this and finally broke

of cos Meera consoled Geet

pleased that Geet opened up with Meera

its not easy for Geet

after all she lost the love of her life

so she went to the park that she and Maan visited

hmm Maan told Geet to live for them

liked that she decided to celebrate Maan’s life

nice that learned to carry Maan’s love as source of strength

good that Arjun’s words had a positive impact on Geet

Maan was not there however was there guiding her

Loved that she realised that love truly does not fade

Entry 3

Fabulous song

Heartwrenching OS... superbly written

so Geet's family want to move on

Geet's thoughts and confusion were reasonable

hate how Maan treated Geet

she was indeed shocked hearing about the marriage proposal for her

her pain was understandable

hate how Brij treated Geet

of cos she reminded her family that she is already married

Darji's response was anticipated

as expected Geet refused

but Daarji was adamant and gave her a choice

she was clearly helpless

despite everything she loves Maan immensely

glad that Maan regrets his actions

he did realise what he lost

angry that he insulted Geet

however how can he get her back

Maan's mom was the cause of all this

oh that's how Maan married Geet

Geet was clearly grateful that Maan saved her

not surprised that Maan fell in love with Geet

at least now his mom supported him

oh Geet agreed to get married

her heart belongs to Maan

great that Maan got to know everything and went there

Gosh she tried to commit suicide

Thank God Maan saved her

Geet's reaction seeing Maan and his mom was justified

pleased that he confessed his feelings

upset that Geet suffered

she will now have all the love and happiness that she deserves

Entry 4

wonderful song

Magnificent OS.... tremendously written

well Geet loves Maan so much

of cos she is waiting for Maan to confess his feelings

one thing for sure is that he does love Geet

sad that Maan lets hisfears get the better of him

while he feels that he love has to be shown and not spoken

his each and every gesture shows how much he loves...

Geet patience wore thin

as expected she confronted Maan

she certainly knows he loves her

but wants to hear it

she did make one last effort

alas Maan was adamant

her frustration wasjustified

at least she made anlast effort

Geet's outburst was reasonable

however Maan was unmovable

not surprised that Geet decided to leave

pleased that this impacted Maan

great that he went tofind Geet

liked that he opened up to Geet and confessed his feelings

her love won.......

Entry 5

Sad OS..... finely written

Gosh Maan has cancer

Geet was indeed shattered

can understand why Maan did not tell her

great that Geet was determined to fight this

glad that he is getting treatment

now Maan has two months

all their dreams are broken

pleased that Geet is with him

while she wanted to get married he refused

Gosh Maan died

of cos Geet was inconsolable

well Maan left leaving Geet with their symbol of love

he was not there physically with her but still there for her

it has a hard pregnancy

Geet gave birth to an Angel

liked that she decided to live for Maansi

Entry 6

Majestic OS.... wonderfully written

well Maan does not seem to like

hate how Maan treated Geet

dadi's anger was justified

great that dadi told Maan what happened to Geet

sad that she lost her parents

she indeed suffered so much

at least Maan shifted to the guest room and let Geet sleep in his room

liked his care for Geet

past well incorporated

ahh she called him motu and rejected his friendship

Present

glad that he went to speak to Geet

her outburst was necessary

pleased that he consoled her

good that Geet is slowly coming out of her grief

nice that Maan wanted Geet to join KC as an intern

not surprised that Maan and Geet are falling for each other

Thank God Maan saved Geet

feeling for Maan .....

he did not get to see his mom before she passed away

so Maan and Geet get closer

alas Geet is engaged

Maan was really hurt hearing this

Geet does not like Abhishek but it was her parents decision

oh no she got married!!!