JUNOON - Pyaar ka... updt Part 100 on pg 148 Jun 26 - Page 96

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Posted: 2 years ago

maan u know ur geet na...........jhalli hai woh............plz usse maaf kar do aur wapas ajao geet k pass.....................


lovely update...............


loved it..................

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Posted: 2 years ago

hi there

please update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part – 83

Maan feels bad for Geet…

Maan lifts her in his arms…

Geet keeps chanting while he carries her to the lift, “I’m sorry Maan, I love you Maan “..

In the lift….

Geet looks at Maan, she giggles…

Geet: Maan, tum phir mere sapne mein aagaye?

Maan: Geet, chup ho jao

Geet: kyun? I won’t until I get what I want

Maan: what do you want?

Geet looks at him giggles again…

Geet: kissie

Maan doesn’t know how to handle this tali Geet…

Maan: ok, you will get it

Geet closes her eyes and waits….

But Maan is not going to kiss her now… they have reached the basement, the lift will open anytime….

Geet opens her eyes….

Geet: Maan, yahan, come on, I’m waiting

Geet shows her cheeks….

Lift opens….

Maan closes it back…

He looks at her, she is looking like a little princess, the one Maan is always fond of…

Maan kisses her cheeks…

Geet is so happy that she faints again….

Maan opens the lift…

Maan takes her out and takes her to the car….

Maan puts her in the seat and tries to step back, but he couldn’t ….

Geet is holding his hand tightly….

Maan slowly gets her hand off his …..

Maan puts the seat belt for her…

Geet hugs him this time….

Geet: I’ve got you, now you are mine, you can’t escape Maan

Geet is taking in her intoxicated state….

Maan: Haan Geet, you got me, I’m always yours, I don’t want to escape

Geet then happily falls back and sleeps…

Masn then goes to the other side….

Maan gets in, looks at his baby Geet sleeping happily…

He starts to drive….

they go to the apartment for they can’t go to KM like this….

Maan takes her to the room…

Geet sits on her bed and keeps looking at Maan…

She then looks around and realizes that she is in her room…

She is holding Maan’s hands?

Geet is surprised to see Maan there with her…

Sge then realizes who it is…

Maan tries to leave…

Geet won’t let him go…

Geet: Kahan Jaa rahe ho hugsy?

Geet has a hugsy teddy(the one Maan gifted her) that she uses to cuddle with and sleep…

She has the habit of talking to hugsy and sharing her mind with it whenever she feels lonely and needs her family….

Sometimes hugsy becomes Darji, sometimes Maninder and sometimes Ranno ….

Today Geet needs to talk to Maan and so hugsy becomes Maan for Geet tonight…

That’s what Geet thinks while Maan is actually there with her…

Maan: mein yahi hoon, tum sojao Geet

Maan tries to make her lie down..

But Geet won’t …..

Geet: nahi, mujhe neend nahi aarahi hai, mujhe Maan se baat karna hai, mujhe Maan se maafi mangni hai, abhi

Maan closes her mouth with his fingers…

Maan: hum kal baat karte hai Geet, abhi sojao

Geet: nahi, abhi baat karni hai

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet: tum baat bhi karte ho hugsy?

Maan tries to stop her….

Geet: chup bilkul chup, Aaj mein baat karoongi hi karoongi, aur tum hamesha ki tarah chup chap sunte rehna, tum toh sach mein apne aap ko MSK samajh gaye ho? Tum MSK nahi ho, tum hugsy ho, mujhe patha hai

Maan goes silent… Geet is not going to stop…

Geet: toh Mr. MSK, aap toh meri baat ko sunoge, teek hai?

Maan just nods his head, he is hugsy now and he can’t talk …

But he is ready to listen…

Geet: patha hai ki kal meri birthday hai

Maan knows that….

Maan just nods his head again…

Geet: tumko patha hai, Lekhin Maan ko yaad hoga ya nahi? Yaad hoga, he just said he could not forget everything, he remembers everything, so he would remember that time when I was waiting for him on my birthday, haina? But he never came? It’s all because he left me alone that night

Geet suddenly gets angry…

Geet: I was crazy, I was stupid, I was confused

Maan: Geet, that’s enough, abhi tum sojao

Geet: no Maan, tum baat mat karo, mein hi baat karoongi, samjhe Maan?

Maan: hmmmm

Geet: patha hai ki ye sab kyun hua?

Maan: nahi

Geet: it’s all because I was all alone, far away from my Maan, it’s because I was missing my Maan so bad, the hatred grew as I realized that I have lost my love , as I thought I lost my Maan , now I understand why I went mad, it’s not because I lost the baby, it’s because I lost you Maan, I can’t tolerate the fact that I lost my Maan, it’s all because of your mistake Maan that we had to suffer all this

Maan: my mistake?

Geet: if you were with me that time all this would not have happened

Maan: when Geet?

Geet: on my birthday, how desperately I was waiting for you Maan

Maan is shocked to hear that…

Maan did go but he was a little late….

Geet: where were you that day Maan? Why didn’t you come to take me? You know I can’t take care of myself without you by my side, then why did you leave me alone? Why Maan why?

Geet holds Maan’s shirt and asks him fiercely…

Geet: you know, from the moment Annie told me that you got a ring for me and you are going to propose me, I have only been thinking about that Maan, because you know how much I love you, haina?

Maan hugs her tight hearing that….

Geet: then as I was thinking about how you are going to propose me, you came, you proposed and I surrendered myself totally as I had been waiting for that only, then I don’t remember anything that happened until I realized the truth

Maan: hmm, it was all your dreams

Geet: nahi, this time it was for real, it was all real, it all happened for real and I realized that only when it was all over

Geet starts crying… she is crying non stop…

Maan is confused….

Maan: Geet, kya hua?

Geet: mujse galti ho gayi Maan, will you ever forgive me? I said yes to Dev thinking that it was you, and then I don’t know what happened until I realized the truth and started to run away from there not knowing what to do

Maan: it’s ok Geet, it was not your fault

Geet: that was not it Maan, I kept making mistakes and I kept hurting you

Maan: chup bilkul chup, I know you love me, that’s it, I don’t care about anything else, I love you Geet

Maan starts kissing her ..

Geet forgets her worries in that moment and feels relieved that her Maan forgave her…

Maan then let’s her sleep peacefully cuddling with her to comfort her….

He then leaves placing her hugsy right next to her ….

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Posted: 2 years ago

83

great update

geet in her taily state confess her love to maan n everything that happened in past thinking maan as her teddy with whom she share her everything imagining her loved ones

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice update

Waiting for next update. . .

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 83

Amazing update... impeccably written

Geet was drunk

at least Maan managed to take her to the apartment

glad that she confessed

liked that she opened up with Maan

now he knows her feelings

so her forgave her

will they start afresh?


update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

superbb

geet told her feelings n what happened n how it happened to maan thinking him to be hugsy... now i hope maan fits these puzzles n no.more distances bw maaneet... hoping for the besht

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 83


Fabulous and Surprising Update


Finally Maan hears just how much Geet truly loves him

and in her love she had mistaken Dev to be Maan

so its all clear that her love was and is only for Maan

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Posted: 2 years ago

The drunk Geet is thinking she is dreaming. But he is there for real.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Now he is the teddy. Not too bad Maan. She loves that teddy.

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