MG:FF- LOVE..REVENGE.......REGRET!!! Part 5 PG 15 - Page 10

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Posted: 3 years ago
#91

and the wait for updates just continues

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Summary

Maan A man of word from him everything is fair in war war n war. He lost his family but at the same day he got best gift his little sister. Whole world show their back when he n his family need him n which thing made him a stone. He lost his childhood to protect his dadi n siblings.

On other side a girl lost his mental ability the reason is still unknown. Her brother is ready to take revenge from the person who destroyed his gudiya life. She get while when she didn’t get her angry bird n to make her stable he have to inject her.

At the same time a girl came to india to take revenge from maan.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sorry for too much late update hope u all like to





Part 4


She close her eyes tightly remembering each and everything.

One week before

At xyz coffee shop in London

A girl is sitting in a lone coner of a coffee shop.

She is a dream of every man to have her in his life. Anyone can loss himself in her beauty.

She is sipping his coffee when a cold breeze making her a shiver but the hot coffee and her anger doing there magic giving her a warmth.

She is waiting for someone from past hours and soon her wait is end when she saw him in front of her.

A man came toward her.

U took to much time a girl said standing from her sit and hugging him

Dont ask yaar...!!!a man said hugging her back

Both took their seat

So did u find each and every information about him a girl ask him furiously

Yess... a man said with a big smile on his face

Hope know one saw u there a girl ask him lil tensed

A man shook his head in no while sipping his coffee

Thank god for a second i thought he caught u a girl said taking a long breath

Girl: If he didn't caught u then y u took so much time

Dont ask me yaar... a man said taking a deep breath

She is again getting a wild he said sadly

What the f*** a girl said loudly and because of that everyone in the cafe start looking her

A man wind his eyes and said sternly language

Girl close her eyes n inhale sarply n ask him how.?

A man close his eyes guilty n said i use his name so that i can get inside bro study room to collect his information

Girl look at him angrily n said r u out of ur mind u know because of this they have to.......

Ya i know..!!!! man cut her but i didn't have any other option

Hmm......she shook her head in negatively

Relax babe she is fine don't worry about her I'm here for her so u just chill he said holding her hand.

I know thats y I'm going to India she said putting her hand in his hand

When ur leaving he asked her

Saturday 8:30pm she said with a smile

U know what ur this smile always took my heart he said sitting beside her

He pick her lips n he wink at her

She smile shyly....n shook her head looking here n there

Don't smile like that ... u know u can't resist u he said naughtily

She gave him a bright smile, he again kissed her but this time passionately forget their surroundings

Both parted away when they r breathless

I will miss you she said hugging him

I will miss u to he hug her back...


Present

In airpot

Sameera dii... a girl call her bringing her back in her thought

Sameera gave a smile to a girl n went toward her

Both hug each other

How are you di..a girl ask hugging her

I'm fine u said meera Sameera ask her breaking the hug

I'm also good di...she said giving a big smile

Both went toward the car n took their sit n drove toward there destination.

Hope you done everything here, what u have to do..?? Sameera ask her in hope of positive response

Yes di everything is done as we plan meera said with a bright smile.


In Khurana Mansion

Love you mom and dad a girl said looking a big portrait in hall with teary eyes. Sorry mom dad, I know today I have to first come to both of u ,to take your blessing ,but I went to bhai because I love Bhai more than u both . I never saw you, but bhai always tell me that u both love me a lot she said wiping her tear. But I know u both also can’t love the way bhai love me , the way he took care of me mom.

Happy birthday Aanie...!! A man said hugging her side way

And Yes mom and dad bro just spoiled her if u both are here u both know how much bro spoiled this lazy lizard a man said pulling check of girl.

Aanie twisted her nose and pouted. Don’t call me lazy lizard bro girl said lil angrily.

I will..!! a man said naughtily.

I will tell bhai that ur teasing and that too today girl said with smirk

Go and tell bro, I’m not afraid of anyone. I’m Dev Rishab Khurana, The Maan Singh Khurana’s brother okk… Dev said proudly folding his hand near his chest

Hmm…… girl mumbled

Bhai you...before she said any thing

I didn’t do anything bro she is just saying dev turn with his close eyes and said in one go..

Where is ur bro dev beta a old lady said looking dev oddly…

Dev slowly open his one eye n look around when he didn’t saw his bro he almost shouted

Aanie Ki bachi you... he said looking Aanie who is already hiding behind dadi

Dadi bring aanie front and kiss her forehead wishing her

Happy Birthday beta....!!!

N why ru shouting her today dadi said with fake anger she know its there regular dram to pull each other leg

And she alway love that because of them somewhere this house is still alive. She always wish she can see her maan same like them...who can tease his sibling, share his problem, go out with them , but unfortunately which somewhere lost...for god know when he went away from us. He is alway there for us but we are never their for him.

Initially i dont know y he blog himself from us, but now i know why..? Because to make sure his siblings childhood alive, there humanity alive....he never allowed to cross a sing pain to us but he took himself everything alone... i don't know how many night he didn’t sleep for us, for business n sadly for his parents love, their soothing word.... his Maa's loury which nake him a good sleep, his dad stories which he heard ever night befor going to sleep.

I was always there for him but I'm failed to fill his parents place n i alway thought it is true which is impossible to fill that place in anyone life but he prove me wrong in my ever aspect because today ,i have a live examples in front of my eyes his siblings. Yes Dev & Aanie , I don't remember when they ask me about their parent.... may be months or years ...i still didn't recollect... leave them i also didn't recall in my heard time as my son place was took by my grand son.

(she didn't remember his son n daughter in law in her hard time because maan is always their like a strong pillar but yes she remember both of them in her happiness which is rear for her as seeing his maan like that)

He tooks both place in their heart.. no matter how much he is busy but he always took a time for their needs ,study, making them sleep when they are small...

I know he love us alot but he never experienced himself. He is alway busy to bring Khurana industry in number one and he succeeded. He dont want his sibling is suffered the way he n me suffered for each rupees. He dont wanted his siblings to see the hard time for there basic needs.... and for that he lost his childhood, his affection...or his love....

Dadi chain of thought broke aanie teasing voice


Sorry for grammatic mistake do like n comments.

N plz motivate me to complete this ff.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wonderful update dear

After long time

Dev and anni scene are to cute

Dadima worried for maan

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 3 years ago
#95

Part 4


Awesome and Heart Felt Update


Is Sameera the girl coming from London to India ?

Maan on the other hand gives his family everything they need

while Dadima is very proud of him

but also sad that he lost himself during all hardships

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Posted: 3 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Charanjeetkaur

Wonderful update dear

After long time

Dev and anni scene are to cute

Dadima worried for maan

Thanks for pm

Watting for update


Thank you dear 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 4


Awesome and Heart Felt Update


Is Sameera the girl coming from London to India ?

Maan on the other hand gives his family everything they need

while Dadima is very proud of him

but also sad that he lost himself during all hardships


Thank you 😊

Yes dear its sameera.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#98

So Sameera is coming from London and other girl is also with her

Dev teasing Annie and get afraid of Maan Dadi to wish Annie for her bday

Maan is very soft with his siblings they don't remember their parents in present of Maan but he didn't let anyone know about his problem he lost his childhood for giving happiness to his family

Dadi proud of him and for his achievements

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Posted: 3 years ago
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4

superb update

maan is successful n performing parents role in his siblings life but never express his love

dadi is worried for maan as he distance emotionally from his family

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Maanheart

Summary

Maan A man of word from him everything is fair in war war n war. He lost his family but at the same day he got best gift his little sister. Whole world show their back when he n his family need him n which thing made him a stone. He lost his childhood to protect his dadi n siblings.

On other side a girl lost his mental ability the reason is still unknown. Her brother is ready to take revenge from the person who destroyed his gudiya life. She get while when she didn’t get her angry bird n to make her stable he have to inject her.

At the same time a girl came to india to take revenge from maan.


wow... welcome back

thanks for the summary

shall read the update and comment

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