My Innocent Surrender 3 updated LAST PART on Pg 90 / 16-8-2020 - Page 43

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awwww don't be saddy baby... Dekh tere kehne pe maine kitna quickly isko update kiya... Jabki abhi to mujhe dena bhi nahi tha... 😘😘😘😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Commented on blog baby 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: masoomii

Finished reading second chapter I must say u r quite wonderful writer ..I have become fan of ur stories ...abhi to exams k wjh say I'm busy ..free hokr I m going to eat ur head for pwds 😝 next chapter pwd plz or plz 2 chapters ka Dena Mai ek saath reply karugi for both chaps

Sorry replied on part 2 first...and don't write like you do in part one.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Did Maan leave her deliberately or there is another explanation? He now knows she wasn't his father's mistress. Will he ask her to explain everything? Will she do it if he asks? Maybe Maan will ask Samarth.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice pt

Maan geet moments was hot

Maan know that geet is not hi father mistress

Now what will maan do

Geet doesn’t able to trust maan

Hope she understand maan and tell him about Mayra

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks for PM and password.

That was a hawwwt update.

Loved Maaneet moments. Maan got to know at least something about Geet and how wrong was he. I genuinely thought that Maan could not stay away from Geet but it was his plan so that Geet could not meet Samarth.

I guess I cannot understand and under estimate this Maan.

Looking forward the next. Update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 9


Sizzling and Fabulous Part



Maan could not wait for the next day and the signed contract he came to

Geet and though at first , she wanted to stop him but even she like Maan are drawn to each other

the night was filled with passion and the moment Maan realizes Geet is a virgin

he is somewhat shocked , and at that moment he utters to Geet " you are mine now" do you understand . whether his statement meant she was all his to love and be in his life or the fact that

she would still be his mistress but again I feel he meant possessively she is only his

Its Geet's first time and every moment felt perfect .

Geet awaking and finding that Maan has left already now this can mean two things

one that he only wants her as his mistress or the second that he really had an important meeting

Geet wants to meet Samrath at any cost and she also wants to go to London to see Myra

right now I'm not sure of Maan's actions towards Geet but now that he is aware she was

a virgin it means that she never was his father's mistress so Maan is back to square one

but this time its worst as he will not know about the woman

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

Sorry replied on part 2 first...and don't write like you do in part one.

you mean about story line?
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Posted: 5 years ago

The way maan mention about his past infront of geet about his brother nd lover ..I feel he is a type of person who don't trust ppl easily . Bcz of that incident. Nd I think there are going to be lots of trust issues between them ... Nd maan geet ko bcz of that bhot dukhi krne wala hai ..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks for the pm!

Part 9

spectacular update! well written.

so Maan could not wait and made her his!

Maan is shocked that she is a virgin. he now knows she is not his father's mistress!

but Geet wants him....

passionate moments...

great that Maan is possessive of her when he says she is his. as expected Geet assumes this means she is his mistress.

Maan left and Geet feels he lied to her!

why did Maan leave? where is he?

she is adamant on meeting Samarth and then Myra!

looks like Maan will now try to find the truth!

will he get to know about Myra?

update soon

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