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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: jasika08

Nice teaser

Waiting for update

Let's see.

Updating in few hours..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 10

Sameer saved her but he seems to be an obsessed type of person. He already decided he will have ger as his girlfriend, without even knowing the full circumstances. She is not even in her senses and he kissed her.

You will see more of him in future story😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Shocking tsr

Geet allowing someone else to touch hr like that if she doing to make Maan jealous thsn its bad idea their is many more ways fr hurting or fr revenge

Let's see..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Sam is back. Anna is out of the game. Sameer is also there waiting to get to Geet. The complications are endless. Looks like Anna will be the one person to help Geet. She is the only one who knows Geet is pregnant and has cancer too.

Let's see..šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Teasers 1 & 2


Is it someone's dream ?


Geet loves Maan , so she will not be with Kunal in any way


let alone dance with him


true he maybe a good guy , and can be Geet's friend but surely


she will have to end up with Maan


Its time for Maan to get jealous but not Geet been with another man

Let's see..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Well Well Well..FINALLY!


Read all the 11 chapters till date + The mysterious teaser šŸ˜•


Coming to the updates....its Fabulous šŸ‘and I so instantly got glued to the story that I read all 11 chapters in one go which I thought would take atleast a week.


Well... I understand Its not Maan's true nature to torture anyone like this to this extend...but he is doing to Geet Just because his assumptions and Mindset that she came in between him and Sam. He didnt try to figure out how could Sam so easily walk out of this relationship by giving Geet's love for him as a reason? It would have been well off he would have left Geet in isolation than torturing her so much physically and Mentally and inturn mentally torturing himself.


On the other hand...Maan has started developing feelings for Geet which he is out rightly denying it. In this process he has been torturing her round the clock... I understand Geet was working in KC before her marriage too and she is continuing to work after marriage as well...


My heart really goes for Geet...she has been bearing so much just because she loves him so much. and how much it would have hurt her to learn about his latest girl friends and he shamelessly asks Geet to buy gift for his girl friend and later blames her too... and inbetween all this ... This Sameer aka Kunal's entry...who saves her from an accident and kisses her when she is unconscious.. My goodness...its really too much of pain and pressure in Geet's life.


Now, Maan blaming Geet for taking Gift for Anna... huh..feeling like killing him with my bare hands...

He tells her again to give her a return gift for Break up...Geet is so delighted like a kid listening to this...but he also tells her that Sam is back and that too with a smirk... How could he do this? Cant he even think for once if sam had to come back like this then why did she leave from his life in the first place? She is come back with some master plan for sure.


Anna blaming Geet for coming between Maan and Sam? How did she know all this? Geet's reply to her was really heart touching.


Thanks to Anna for taking Geet to hospital on right time...OH its really really sad that Geet is pregnant but she cannot go ahead with this pregnancy as she has a gastric cancer.


Waiting to read further .... (Very very curious 😳)


Now coming to the teasers...its completely contradicting with how Geet has been portrayed so far in this story and how she is mingling with Kunal so comfortably. Again Waiting eagerly for the updates.

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Posted: 5 years ago
Just cannot tolerate geet with ANYBODY except maan😦😢😢😢(How dare he kiss geet i m puking...want a scene where geet pukes too and cleanses herself😨😷..if maan is a beast let geet stay alone but not with anybody....kunal can be with nandini but can NEVER be with geet....pls mugdha baby don't torture us with sameer since he had home I m dying
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Posted: 5 years ago

Please don't let Kunal Or Rahul whoever it is tough Geet. She only maans. Not only Maan l am also possessive about Geet. May be Maan is ruthless, mad and misbehaving with Geet but don't let Geet go beyond the limits.

Dear writer this is my humble request. I was about to post when he kissed Geet but she was not in her senses .so I gave it up.

Sorry if I crossed my limits.

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Posted: 5 years ago



CHAPTER 12


P.S. - Sameer's name changed to Kunal


Maan was trying her number contiously but it came switch off. He was turning mad with fury.. where the hell are you..Geet.. he pressed the accleter in fury, just then his phone buzzed again showing kunal’s number,why is Kunal calling.. is Geet at his place.. Maan thought as he applied the break, recieving the call immediately,Is it Maan??Kunal..where did you get my number!??..And you know it’s me calling… forget it..I heard that Sam is back.. Kunal was having smirk on his face.Maan wasn’t expecting this, he got out his car, removing his coat he threw it on the seat, as he heard him further,Then is Geet free from you??Maan was red with rage now, Put Geet on phone!! He blasted from other side, making Kunal almost pulled the phone away from his ear.Geet?? What about her..kya Kiya tumne uske Sath.. Kunal asked restless..But the call was dead from other side.Rahul walked up to him, what’s up..are you still thinking about that girl..He asked me to out Geet on phone..but she isn’t here.. clarified Kunal ..What do you think.. is it right to believe the talks of people who said.. she stole her sis’s man away.She doesn’t seem like that girl to me.. he was reminded about the kiss again..so soft and warm.You don’t understand.. we can’t judge people from their appearance..Who had thought You are a famous doctor.. he gives him smirk,Rahul’s face was worth watching . Alright..alright.. woh Sab main bas tumhare liye Kiya tha

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Geet wore white sari, with sky blue blouse, putting minimal makeup on, as it’s needed for the reputation of Maan Singh Khurana. Her hands shivered as she tried to put on knots.Just when he walked out of washroom, wearing white Kurta pajama..Geet gasped seeing her hot and happening hubby through the mirror.

He was lost in her beautiful sight, his legs took him towards her, without his own notice. He touched her Shivering hands, gripping them tight in his own, Geet pulled out softly giving him access, as he slowly started to bind the knots, all the while his intense gaze stay on her beautiful face, through the mirror.Geet looked at him, and both got hooked in eye lock, his fingers started rolling down on her beautiful marble back, feeling her soft skin.He made her slowly turned around, while she oblige willingly.. her hands went on his shoulders, he pressed her body more tight to his own , she downcasted her gaze, feeling mushy..his hands caressed her waistband, tingling her there by.. Geet sighed, closing her eyes. Soon he out his mouth on her, began kissing her softly, cherishing the feeling..something had definitely change from last two days...he continued to enjoyed her sweet lips like a candy.Geet moaned in his mouth feeling his hands cupping her bossom.. he pinch the harden nipple on her cloth, she massaged his nape turning arouse.Both break apart softly, and simultaneously, gazing into each other eyes..Maan was just staring at her, then her hazel eyes which were trying to tell him something from ages it seems but he notice now.He licks her lips again, making her go crazy . Her palm which was rested on his chest, started to caressed him, she felt his open chest, and shiver ran down her spine..feeling him after a while now which left him also on fire.. he clutched her palm to his heart which was beating rythmatically. Geet looked into his eyes, seeing him looking at her only, she downcasted her lashes.. and tried to Wriggle out, but he jerked her back in his arms pressing her small back..


Chodiye Hume..You don’t have any right to order me around..he muttered sarcastically making her shut..He holds her chin harshly pulling her face up, looking into her hazel eyes.. which were doing some magic on him..


Kya kar logi..if I never let you go..he whispered huskily.. blowing his hot breath on her face, she inhaled sharply clutching his kurta in her palms, as she closed her eyes feeling him.. hum toh aapki baahon main rah lenge..aakhri dam tak.. she muttered sending ripples down his spine hearing her meaningful words that he left her in a jerk in next moment almost pushing her apart..Geet gasped , putting her palm on her tummy securing her baby.


She turned to go but he holds her wrist from behind stopping her there by..




kaha ja Rahi ho..Woh..holi party hai na.. downstairs.. she muttered, trying to wriggle out of his hold which tighten, he again breaks her one bangle, making her looked at her wrist painfully then him..He swiftly left her wrist and check on it, thankfully there was no injury..he sighed giving her a look..and who gives you permission..Geet was tongue-tied not knowing what to answer,why is he behaving so today..Answer me Geet.. he jerked her closer holding her both arms, ji..agar aap nahi chahte toh hum nahi jayenge.. she said looking into his eyes, stirring something inside him by her one look.Go..he left her with a jerk again and turned his back .Geet was surprised, she looked at the Colors in thali..as she took that in her hands and then at his back .so much wanted to put Colors on him.. her heart ached . Eyes filed up as she imagined..Slowly walking behind him and Colors his both cheeks making him angry..Geett…

She giggled seeing his funny face with those colored cheeks ..then his angry big eyes..he looks so cute.

Geetttt..


Maan again called her, this time getting angry seeing her lost somewhere, she was as if day dreaming, with that silky smile on her face.


Do read full chapter on blog..as here getting so many errors.. because of long update.šŸ¤”


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Edited by Mg13 - 5 years ago
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