Predestined~Repost~UPDATED Ch19@Pg40[CH18@Pg33]4th June 2019

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Megha

@Maangeeet

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Posted: 6 years ago

#51

Chapter 4

Outstanding chapter...Maan toh hamesha gusse me rehta hai..But geet v kam nahi hai...Their banter was just superb...this is reminding me of the original show...amazing dialogues...

Geet is in hurry to meet dev...she didn't even notice maan. She was about to fall but maan again caught her..

Ha ha...she cribbed that maan makes her brain jam lol😆..good that rajji intervened and ended the tom and jerry's fight though their fight was extremely entertaining...

Maan is so angry that his jeep is not starting...Everyone at handa mansion is nice to him...

Geet is meeting dev... Don't like him...he is care less towards geet but wants to get intimate with her... He gets a phone call and worriedly leaves...

Maan wants to call his grandmother...he asks rano to make a call...

What happens next? Precap seems interesting...

Update soon...

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#52

I did not get any chance to read the 4 chapters

I promise to read them all and comment before this weekend ends

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#53

Wow ... Yu started reposting !! 😳

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RIYA

@RA17

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Posted: 6 years ago

#54

Hi wave

I don't know your real name so that y

Coming to your story hmmm maneet comedy cum romance honestly I wasn't enjoying as I wonder what happened to maan love interest if they r so much in love n married..

Then taddda Ur story begin with hero Dishoom wali entry n heroine in distress... Their nok jhok filmy but extras doing favours to unite them be it daarji asked to stay to Tito spoiled maam jeep

Will come back soon to read Ch 4 onwards

PS please let me know which of your other stories r complete will surely read them.thanks once again.

Edited by RA17 - 6 years ago

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RIYA

@RA17

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Posted: 6 years ago

#55

Ch 4

Hey I'm back

Coming to chapter well ma'am impatient but still feeling bad for him as we know how much workload he has

Geet feeling uncomfortable with dev n yet kind innocent to fighter mode with maan beautifully expressed her character...

Rano epitome of motherhood...

Precap is what I thought that maan will blame geet only for his jeep.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#56

Chapter 1

I believe the starting of the chapter is the future of Maan and Geet

both happy and he teasing his wife

while at present Geet's life is in danger and it seems the goons have given

a beating to her beloved and now they also want to harm her

she seems much more concerned about the man she loves then her very own safety yet she shows bravery when Maan tries approaching her sang not to come closer

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#57

Chapter 2

Maan though heard Geet saying to stay away looked at her gaze

and found the goons behind him

though the one acted as if he knows Geet , thankfully Maan was sharp enough

asking them how can they not see her state and when Geet finally lets him know

that these people are perhaps after her he knows exactly what has happened

and he beats all the goons taking Geet back to his tent but he was highly frustrated

and later when he takes her home he is even more annoyed because now he has to stay at her home

Darji seems to already like this guy that has attitude

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#58

Chapter 3

I actually enjoyed this chapter as Geet stands up to Maan and I'm sure

though he is annoyed with her talking if he takes time and realize

Geet is not scared of him or his rude behavior

oh hell Titto decides to take revenge as Maan speaks rudely to Geet

and he goes ahead to damage Maan's Jeep's engine

Maan had a moment when he thinks of Geet been innocent with her simple elegant pure beauty

but very quickly he shrugs that off saying woman cannot be pure as all they do is hide behind their innocent beauty and scheme

Geet does believe Dev loves her and she knows soon they will marry but now Dev

always pressurizing her to get intimate , this is a time Geet should truly realize if

Dev truly and honestly loves her he will not pressurize her to get intimate before marriage

it seems now the understanding that they once had they no longer have

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 6 years ago

#59

Chapter 4

Maan is angry that his tyres have been punctured and he has to wait for the one

to arrive while been at his Jeep Geet comes by talking on her cell and trips over his tools

once again Maan saves her I'm sure given the chance both would have been lost in each other's eyes but Rajji came thanked Maan for saving Geet

and this made Geet angry that Rajji thanked Maan

both Maan and Geet seem to get lost in their fighting with each other

Geet meeting Dev and strange he did not even ask her about her injuries or how she got away from the goons this clearly shows Dev is hiding something and he cannot truly love Geet

but because she loves him she ignores this fact which is wrong as these are all signs

showing her the man is not good for her