Knock, Knock! Who's there? Pt 21/22 pg 80, 82 23/04

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Prabh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#391

Superb update.after long time updated...loved the part.geet and maan tense how to go together fo sonography because they feel akwared but maan got agree for give her compney.geet feel shy and happy.next soon

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#392

Beautiful n lovely update

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#393

Maaneet are behaving like real partners now

Maan is being happy and content with Geet

And Geet is becoming shy with his presence

Loved their scenes

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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#394

Will be waiting for update

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sanum23

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Posted: 6 years ago

#395

After rano said about Dr. appointment Maan told Geet he will go wwith hr bz he/she is his their baby

He loved b around hr

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preetidhawan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#396

Lovely Update

Maaneet both enjoying their togetherness and their comforting level is increasing day by day.Maam expressed his wish to join sonography session and Geet agreed happily.loved the way Maan kissed Geet,s forehead and touched her belly and Geet chanting OURS OURS

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CRAZYCUTEE

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Posted: 6 years ago

#397

Lovely update

Hmm maan want be with baby very step be it sonography or yoga class it's seems like maaneet is one step into fall In love with other

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Rashmi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#398

Chapter 15

Nice update Sophie

Poor Maan and geet

both were in awkward condition when Rano asked Them to accompany them to the sonography..They themselves were not sure about that..

Finally Geet tried t divert the mind by setting the channel when maan's fav football team liverpool was playing the match On no they lost the match and Maan wasn't in good mood.. By then everyone was set to say good night..

Sam is such a crazy girl..She wants to change herself for Adi ... Geet was not agree with her so she tried to convince her to value the ownself.. No one should change just because other want..and Sam understood it too

Maan could feel Geet's fragrance in her bed and surprisingly he was missing this since he was staying at his own house..But today he felt good to be back to geet's house and her bed.. he slept peacefully feeling her ..

How sweet that they are understanding each other even without saying a word.. Maan saw her in kitchen at late night and made chocolate milk for her though she did not say anything to him..

Mohinder was impressed when he saw Maan helping geet ..

Now Geet found the moment to talk about sonography..She advised him not to accompany her as it wasn't his responsibility but Maan was sincerely told her that every word he said in the class was true..He was not pretending in front of the people,,He truly wanted to be with geet as baby was not only of Geet but was his too..

Maan is really very sweet here..taking full care of Geet he feels responsible towards her and their baby ..They are moving ahead in to their relation ship which was a good sign.. maan even kissed her goodnight on her forehead.. he wanted to kiss her belly too but he could feel the shiver from Geet when he kissed on her forehead so left the idea of kissing baby on her belly..

Geet was happy after Maan said everything seriously ... She was having a hope now for them.. Maan Geet and their baby..I wish they become a family soon

PS:- I know sophie the standard of the language was not of your standard but I enjoyed reading it..I did not need to rack my brain while reading it..😆 I did not need to stop and search the meaning of words.. I just read it in flow so enjoyed more than last 14 updates😆

and as you said that you didn't like it then write in your style.. Jaisa ki geet ne sam se bola.. you don't need to change yourself for some stupid person i.e. ME🤣

use your natural language Sophie..I just told you that as I felt so😳

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

#399

Congratulations Sophie!!

4 years of writing and also completing all the stories..!!! 👏

and not only writing, I have seen you actively commenting on stories from other writers as well.

Appreciate it...Dil Se..🤗

Thank You !!

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 6 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: Twenty1st
OK DEAD SERIOUS (hence the capitals and no LOLLING lol):

Views before Chap 14: 6608
Current view count: 7560

That makes no sense since the likes are very much within the 40 region, yes granted i have a new reader, Welcome Nohar but guys seriously its frustrating NOW.

I will open up a blog soon and only readers i know will be welcomed.

That's disheartening I know, Some views are due to comment reading. I open multiple pages (some times), but still the views are too large to fit in that calculation. Hope the silent readers to press the like button at least.

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