Mortal Promises!#T6!*UPDATED CH64@PG 125 ||23rd Nov 2021

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#321

glad my comments were appreciated! will read Chap 58 now!

thanks for the pm... did reply to u!

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#322

Ch 57

Most beautiful thing in this part was how beautiful ly they were sharing their thoughts...u could just write this part only telling that maan told everything to geet as we already all knew maans side of story...but how awesomely u told everything with adding maans POV ...n geets reaction n their sweet romance...so both were thinking y sam was accusing maan...

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#323

I was just assuming that dadi kbew about maaneets marriage...but very nice... how elders were teasing them...dono ki jald se jald shadi ho jana chahiye...i m eagerly waiting how their marriage truth will b come out

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maneetarsh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#324

Long and superb update, loved the way Geet took whole sernario and supported. But still don't understand Sameera's plight. And I think Maan also left their conversation in mid wanted to know what happened after he raised the toast st her home. Loved the way Maan twisted things to say he wanted marriage to be as early as possible.

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
stupendous precap...already waiting!!!

Let's see how fast the target gets completed!!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

yep you can... just think of all those readers who are waiting 😃

Yesss... 😆 I thought very few would be waiting but amazed so see so many!!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: maanshi
part 58

superb update

geet said so sincerely that she is proud of their relation n also add her naughtiness in it... lovely

oohh... geet is so sweet she is thinking all about sam n her care, her pain

geet want to set aryan n sam love story by her filmy gyan...LOL

love geet every gesture u wrote... simply amazing

geet comment on maan's star ... HAHAHAHA... so funny... loved it

maaneet got interrupted by vijay's call... still maan manage to do some romance with his little wifey

maaneet with elders... family time... i like that
maan star at geet n give her tuff looks ... geet is so shy ..ooohhh

love madhu nature... she is more like geet
in madhu's talk geet also say about her views without thinking... hehehe

dadi want to pull maan's leg but maan being maan did reverse ... poor dadi...
maan left everything on dadi left n geet did same

superb updates
thanks for double updates
update next part soon

Another fabulous comment!! 👏

The best thing I love about your views is that you do not narrate or give summary but express your lovely views!!

Underline - I didn't get it...Maan's star???

Extremely happy that you find Geet cute and loved the way how the whole update has been shaped up.. I was a bit apprehensive about these two updates..As it's a quite complicated matter to begin with!!!

Madhu - Like Geet?? Hahaha.. Kind of maybe...

Glad that you liked the family convo..

Thank you once again for your superb comments!!! I loved your comments!! ❤️ 🤗

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#328

Part 58

Part 1

super duper gif!!! 👏

Beautiful update! superbly written!

Geet is grateful that Maan trusted her enough to tell her everything! indeed some credit goes to Geet!

Admire Geet! she is a gem of a person with a big heart! despite what Sameera has done, Geet knows Sameera is a nice person and how she was there for her (Geet)! she feels sad for Sameera! she wants her to be happy and wants wants Maan to call Aayan to India! Geet thinks of everyone!

Maan drools on his Angel, his Mishty!

Geet is so mature!

Maan lucky to have such a life partner! ha ha Sameera should not trouble Maan - Geet has a rakhi ready!! 😆 Maan already thinks of her as his sister!

glad seeing Maan so happy! he is so relieved after telling Geet everything!

Fabulous Maaneet moments!

hmm the elders call Maaneet...

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#329

Chapter 58

Part 2

phenomenal gif⭐️😃

entertaining update! brilliantly written!

finally Maan's bday party and Maaneet's engagement being discussed! adore the bond between Geet and Madhu. liked that she leaves the decision to Geet!

oh Maan making Geet nervous! Loved that Geet knows Maan so well!

Maan acting indifferent as he is shy! Maan scrutinizes his mom, dad and dadi! Dadi teases Maan and suggests a date for March next year! Geet in flow agreed and then realises!

Liked how Maan twisted dadi's words and says the date is so early! he says that they can chose - the one that is two years later!

Maan taking sweet revenge. he is at his sarcastic best! 😃 But Geet understands him!

nice reaction from SD! enjoyed Maan and Dadi's banter!

great that he left the decision to dadi and subtly adds to chose a early date!

sweet of Geet to defend Maan! Madhu teases Geet! as expected Geet makes an escape!

Madhu happy for Maaneet! she is right that Geet is perfect for Maan!

Madhu already planning grandchildren lol!

awaiting next chapter!!!