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Posted: 7 years ago
So they united
All the emotions got into place with the confession
But Geet was being too stubborn then. Can't blame such a tender age and then her hormones and feelings
Loved the way you have written buddy
Fabulous👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
whoww!!!! after reading parts for some sec i cnt blink my eyes. that amazing the last past was. finally maan confessed and geet take out his love for her !!! though behind idea is really scarry and the way geet behave maan ka darrna jaruri be tha. bt i m happy at last they united n hope maan could work on geet temper in future nahi to everytime he will get heart attack like i get seeing this geet😆
bt i loved parts
waiting for nxt
thanks for pm!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 28
Parts 1 & 2

Both Parts were just Fabulous

Maan has been always careful and he did hide his true feelings from Geet
but today it came out whether out of fear or concern but it eventually came
out in front of Geet
When Maan first phoned her the stubbornness the determination to stay angry at him
was scaring him and even he realizes staying away from Geet has just caused her to
believe he dislikes her
Maan reaching Geet and she is at the Ferris Wheel , his anxiety to reach her , speak with her
his feelings were so beautifully portrayed
while Geet is saddened with his behaviour and I suppose her teenage heart gives in to stubbornness
she clearly wants him by her side but she been a teen also wants him to prove that she is important to him
the entire scene crossing the hectic traffic street just added a whole new dimension , here
Geet wants to show Maan that she means nothing to him she is tired of his lies and behavior
while Maan is filled with fear of losing his love
he tries confessing his love and Geet rebukes him telling him she is not interested in his lies
but then he changes his talk and he becomes possessive too letting her she loves him
he mentions this few times when she finally says no he too does the similar act of crossing the street with his eyes close causing Geet to panic
this is there pure love their care for each other though Maan has been keeping it safe and distance himself from her but now he too is afraid to lose his love and he tells her that he loves her
they do love each other
Maan now will have to proceed in a way that Geet will understand and maybe he should tell her
at least one day per month they can spend together
otherwise I just feel Geet will start dating someone else thinking she is making Maan jealous
and he will fight for her but it could cause a huge rift between them
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Posted: 7 years ago
Precap is Captivating

Seems like they will have a lovely moment between them
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous updates maan who always avoided geet now he realized her importance in life may be now everything will be fine
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

wonderful update

immature geet truly love maan n force him to accept it
maan was very much fear when geet was not ready to come home
maan cried when geet is not ready to listen anything shocking geet

😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan


Its for Part 2 Iptida... and thanks for reply to comments 😊


Oh ok...

Reply - My pleasure!!! Writers block ka effect!! 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nysa123

Superb finally Geet got what she wanted.maan confessed his love for her.waiting for the next part

Shall update soon!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

Both r so much madly in love at their teenage intense period...there is no condition in love...no status or anything cant come between love...if it comes then its not love...hope that maan wont loose his focus now...wonderful update


Love can work as destruction. Also can be the reason of motivation... It's up to us what we elect!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
wonderful updates ..loved both the part
the way u described maan's longing , fear , anxiety , desperation was just beautiful ❤️ loved it. ..he wanted to stay away from geet despite his love for her because of his hesitations , insecurities ...but now he understand one thing. ... nothing else matters when hearts involved ..he breaks free from all his inhibitions ..now he is completely ready to embrace the love of his life ...
but one thing here I want to say ...geet's behaviour was very immature ...like she was completely possessed by maan ...like she wants to prove something ...I don't know why I felt that ..
I just hope geet will not make any stupidity in her teenage immaturity ..
till now maan was holding himself ...but I guess once he fall he will fall hard ...
the last part ..maan's confession ..was so cute
precp was beautiful ..can't wait for it .
thanks for the pm dear

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