REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 94

Sorry for your loss.

More power and strength to you and your family.

wonderful update.. maan asked geet to stay with him which she asked for good proposal and maan somehow proposed with drunken state and geet asked for a kiss...excited for maan's reaction.... very sorry for your loss... God Bless You all ….!!

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He grabs her hand in his

M-marry me

She looks into his eyes

She slowly closes her eyes

G-Kiss me

Maan smiles happily, this is something he can do ver ywell no matter how drunk he is or that’s what he thinks

In hurry to get Geet to say yes and to fulfill her demand; he pulls her hand so that he can reach her lips

Thoda zyada pull hogaya that she almost lands on his lap

Maan’s hand goes around her face holding her cheek

He brings her lips closer to his so he can kiss her, make her say yes

G-Stop

Geet says keeping her finger on his lips

M-but!

He still tries to sneak a kiss as if that was possible in his drunk state

G-First we go into the bed

M-No...first marry me…marry me no 22 years (He says referringt o their first fight in the carnival where Geet mentioned her wait for Akhil 22years)

Geet giggles

G-Now? What’s 22 years? You know…Maan a moment with you…Ifeel I have lived all those 22 years…a moment with you is so significant. Do youthink that’s love?

Maan nods his head vigorously

M-yes yes yesss

She comes closer and softly takes his lip into hers, initiating the kiss

Maan's kiss is a bit sloppy

But he has great enthusiasm and will and eagerness

Geet as feeling passionate due to excessive wait and dreaming

She removes his shirt

He helps her take to it off

She is rubbing and exploring his back with bare hands

He slips his hand inside her shirt too pulling at the hem urging her to take it off

Kahin Maan ke dimag mei lal batti jal rahi warning ki not again wali

Par Maan ko yaad nahi ki not again what neither does he wanna remember

Geet moves a bit

G-No sex…no sex before marriage baby

Maan stops frozen

“sex marriage and baby”

Now the red batti makes complete sense

Geet looks at Maan lovingly

G-I will marry you

Giving a huge juicy kiss on his cheek

M-Jessi?

Maan calls out his dead Fiancée’s name who has died on that fateful day

Geet moves away

G-Jessi?

Maan pushes Geet off and stumbles back 2 feet away from her

Geet is frowning

M- no no noo. not again

He holds his head in his hands, suddenly remembering everything; everything which he had turned into cold revenge... somewhere it all still hurt… him kissing Jessi telling her to show his sister some sense… touching the bump on her stomach feeling a stir there and then the next moment seeing her bloody and torn and dead

Geet moves towards him

G-Maan? Are you ok? Are you sick?

He can’t even hear Geet while he is having his flashback

G-Maaaaaaan....ANSWER ME..WHO’S JESSI?

She shakes him

Maan indeed does feel like puking now

Pulling away from her, he scambles to the bathroom topuke

Geet follows him

He heaves out his dinner and lunch…panting

His head splitting from the drunkenness

Geet comes from behind helping with towel and water

He accepts her help blindly

G-Maan...

She turns him holding his face in her hands

He has his eyes closed but there is tear on his cheek

G-Maan

She is chanting his name trying to sooth him by caressing his cheek

Maan slowly comes out of pain and past pulled by Geet's voice

He opens his eye to look at her

Her worried eyes are on him

He would go mad if she leaves him…he will always behaunted by what happened

He pulls Geet close in tight hug

M- We will marry and you will never leave me

He says with much more lucidity than he had earlier

G-O Maan...

She surrenders herself in his embrace

G-You almost killed me with worry...you know

M- Shh no dying... we'll marry and have babies

He says kissing her hair

Geet giggles

M-and live in big house and big family... and a garden and swing

Geet looks wide eyed

G-Itne saare paise kahan se aayenge? I was thinking of 2 bhk

M- I am rich....midas rich

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New reader here. Just started the story. At least the revenge is against someone who is not a very nice person.

Originally posted by: coderlady

New reader here. Just started the story. At least the revenge is against someone who is not a very nice person.

Hope you like the story.

My deepest condolences to you! hope you are fine?

sorry for late response

Part 64

remarkable update! greatly written!

so Maan proposed and she accepted!

oh no Maan spoiled the moment by mentioning Jessi!

of cos Geet is curious and shocked!

hmm will Maan remember all this?

so he reveals his is rich....

update soon

A drunken proposal and she accepts. Will he still think about his ex fiance tomorrow?

Maan remember his past but when come in sense he want to marry Geet asap so she can with him whole life

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

My deepest condolences to you! hope you are fine?

sorry for late response

Thanks dear. I have come India to to be with my family