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Crystal Saya

@CrystalSaya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#71

I was searching for Falling for U update n here I found about this new story of yours.

I like the concept of this one n really its hard to adjust in this situation for both maan n geet.

Maan is suffocating here n geet is uncomfortable but I know u will write something n make it worthy to read it.

Looking forward to reading more

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Nav2010

@Nav2010

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Very nice one. Please continue. Looking forward to read more.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#73

so much awkwardness she can't even call him by name

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#74

It's hard for Maan to cope up with such lose

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Secret

@Pqwert207

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Geet is totally confused

Its like her life is upside down

She is not able to see maan even as a friend . For her he s still her sisters husband

But this is somthing totally unexpected for her

So it will take time.

N maan

He s still in love with his deceased wife

He hasnt overcome it

I hope mahika will be able to bridge the gap between them and will help to eliminate this awkardness between them

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swetha03

@swetha03

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Nice update...

married to brother in law who is having a baby is so heart wrenching.

Every girl had her dream for her wedding. But geet lost everything here.

It's not easy for her to cope up with baby. Earlier baby was her sisters so she doesn't want to take responsibility but now the role has been changed.

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Interesting concept. Maaneet got married as maans wife and geet sister died. Geet dreams of marriage is shattered. She cant accept maan nor maan can accept geet. Eagerly waiting for next

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#78

New story :o

Well your all stories are beautiful... You balance the story really well

This one no exception

Though I personally didn't like the concept of marrying sister's husband... But I read this type story of maaneet before as well so it doesn't matter for a fiction that much now

But the difference from other maaneet ff of this similar type concept is geet... She's not the expert on family n handling a baby here..

Here she's going to learn how to balance everything

Waiting for farther updates :D

From the past as well

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Nice first update. The awkwardness bet Maan & Geet is well written. Geet is all new to this sort. They have been thrown together for the baby. Felt sorry for Maan in the shower. He was shattered for his wife's loss. Waiting for another update

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alina_ali

@alina_ali

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Superb update...sad to see maan so heartbroken... it's so tough to cope with loss of your loved ones.. and it is more difficult for maan because he has a daughter... I also feel sorry for geet..let's see how both will overcome this difficult time and learn how to love each other