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Posted: 7 years ago
loved the update...
It is a really difficult journey for maan and geet. As none can start falling in love with ones brother in law or brother in law falling in love with his deceased wife's sister.Geet had her own dreams but she had to leave all this for her sisiter's child,so that she can be a mother to the child. For geet this a big sacrifice and it will take her time to get used to the life she has agreed to live. It is sad how maan and geet used to have a friendly realtionship wth each-other in the past but now the new relation has made things awkward between the two.. Geet never paid attention in the past to all the house chores but now she is learning. She questions herself as she is not the best person to take care oh her niece as she doesnt know things about children where as maan is hands on wth the baby. The awkward part for her is when her mom ask her about her intimate relationship wth maan, she is not comfortable wth maan how can she do that with him. They still havent come to the terms of husband and wife as they are not acting like one.
Update soon...i hope maan listened to their conversation and should start treating her like a wife rather that his sister in law..
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Posted: 7 years ago
I guess geet never had any bf or something
N she had a dream .. the sleep n steady dream n here everyhever came like a blow!!
That last part was so saddening :(
Maan avni has so much dream n where as geet was cluless n witnessing their intense love
N at her wedding... Both of them were like a dead soul :'(
Btw I know u r watching bepanah.. these scene was like this current track of adi joya marriage :P

Well initially geet was heart broken as she couldn't even handle mahika but the ending part she was all eased up :)
I loved that small part of mahikas giggles :D
N I love lovee baby parts <3
Plz plz write some more n more mahika parts :D
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan knows about Geet wish lists and he also not ready bz he loved his wife
It's totally elders decision to safeguard mahika
But they know after some time they will forget their sorrow and accept each other then both will say that was wise decision of elders properly I saw many couples whom were firstly sil and bil and now happy in their life
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for updating!

Chapter 4

glad that Namita is so caring! Geet yet to adjust and needs all the help! liked seeing Maan teasing Geet but then then the uncomfortable silence prevails!

nice that Geet is so honest with Ananya! Its now easy for Geet to be a mom! admire that she is willing to try!

Maan should have taught Geet how to change Mahika's nappy! Hated that Geet felt so useless!

loved that Geet was able to share her feelings and thoughs with Ananya!

I agree with Ananya! Geet should take it one day at a time! great that Maan understand so well!

Geet's dreams will defn come true... though this is a marriage of duty, I am sure it will soon turn to a marriage of love!

Maan will support her to achieve her success with her business!

wonderful moments between Geet and Mahika!

I can understand Simran's worries! but Maan and Geet need time... he has just lost his wife, the love of his life while Geet was not ready for this!

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Everything is complicated... they relation that geet and maan shared is no more...everyone expect from them to change from relatives to couple...welli think it takes time..maan tries hard tokeep geet away from any responsibility but hurts geet unknowingly. ..truthfully I dont know if I would manage if I were in their position...that is why iam waiting to read more!!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey guys, okay I'll be rewriting this FF having discussed it with a friend. There isn't much to work with here, this story could end up going FFY way, A chance to love again way or like other FFs here therefore as you know me - I'd like mine to be different 😆 and I don't like a repeat of scenes or story plots 😆

I didn't want them eventually slowly falling in love like FFY, I didn't want them becoming friends again and falling in love accepting one another as I did for a chance to love again with lots of other usual stuff.

Hence, I am rewriting this and thank goodness it's only a few chapters in to this story 😆
I will try to keep the essence of it being a journey of showing this MG in a different light and bringing them together eventually.
As most know by reading FFY, BNB - it may take some time as I like ensuring the story and characters are developing at a realistic pace.

As my laptop is soon to be going for servicing rebirth 😆 I'd be typing and posting on my blog as it is way easier for me.
It's going to be open and I would appreciate people commenting either in blog or here.
As long as the comments are plentiful and not one liners or two words - I will keep this FF open to all readers.

Considering the way IF is going and the amount of posts being lost, I would appreciate comments being posted in blog as it would be remaining there for good.

Please note, if you're going to comment in BLOG please post your INDIAFORUMS username if you're using IF for links.

If you're using Facebook and would prefer receiving links/passwords - please add your FB username when commenting in BLOG

Posting links in IF may be delayed due to how IF is currently operated (hoping the app would be easy and developed nicely) and the amount of time it takes just to post one link via phone.

Anyway, once again PMs are going unanswered. I've attempted to state everything in this post, however if you've got questions and you're looking for answers, it's worth checking out my FFY thread 2 page 89 as I have mentioned everything regarding blog there. Thanks.

I'd like to thank each and everyone that have comment on the 4 chapters and given me your views, suggestions and love for this. And I'm glad that some were even able to relate to this Geet of helplessness of losing her dreams for a moment (I wouldn't have made her lose anything - most of you know that 😆 I'd have made her selfish and put herself first 😉 )
Anyway, thank you for your views and love and I'd hope you'd follow FY on blog and share them in the new storyline.


P.S - I recently changed my BLOG settings therefore to comment you do not need a account.
As long as you post the comment with your IF username - if in the near future I decide to make it password protected I could easily find your comments and add you to blogging group.
Edited by LilMissBossy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi,
Read your note first... thnx for giving us updates... now to the story even though you are going to change it I still am amazed hoe you write about the different characters ... Geets character and Maan's complicated relationship yet binding them together... the symbolism the comparing and contrasting of situations especially when Maan was with Avni and now when he is with Geet... her dilemma of not being able to do anything perfectly... her inability to understand the need of this relationship between them where she really is not contributing anything... yet she is tied to him... in a nuptial bond...
Thnx
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Posted: 7 years ago
I know you do justice with your all fictions . I am exited to read the new version.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the note
I like the present story too but if u feel a need to add few changes...we will wait gladly
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the note.
Will wait for another version.

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