Mortal Promises!#T5!*CH54&Note@Pg130,140[THREAD 6 opened]

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#301

Awesome update
Loved jhalli Geet Jo Maan ke pyaar mai sab khuch bhul jaati hai
Loved the way she claims on Maan
First Maan was amazed than he accepted her claim
Geet talking was so adorable
Loved the jis tarah she said Pinky ki tum piche mat mudna Mai inhe pehle thoda daat lu
Haaye Maan kyu na deewana ho jaaye apni iss cute si wifey ke innocence pe
Loved Maan and Pinky's bonding
Beautifully written

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#302

nice

maan came to her wife village

geet welcome her husband beautifully

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Missing me? ?

What do you think you devil!!😭

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#304

Beautiful update dear 🤗

Loved it!! Flawlessly penned.

Geet's gestures shows how much she missed Maan and was yearning for his presence besides her. It's shows how much she lives Maan from within that she forgot her ambiance and was lost in Maan's warmth and love. Maan and Geet's lovable gestires depicts their love and imcompleteness without each other. Geet's saudade well protrayed !! Loved Geet and pinky's innocent deportment and their acts were cute and lovely. Geet and pinky's convo was filled with naivety and sweetness. Low BP !! Down look here want to scold Maan. Lol !! Maaneet were bavk to their cute banter. Their cute banter adds to their relationship goals and makes their equation look more beautiful and adorable. Liked Maan and Pinky's rapport with each other. Could sense bro and sis camaraderie from the rapport they shared and the easiness they felt around each other. On other hand Dev was lost in his own miseries that he failed to acknowledge happenings taking around him. Handa s shares a beautiful bond with Khurana s and their trust on Khuranas with their daughter. So, Handas too were intersted and were looking forward to bond with khuranas in emotional way and strong relationship.

Looking forward to the next update

Thanks for the pm!

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#305

Intersting precaps dear

Waiting for next updates...

:))

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#306

NOTE : Though promises are mortal yet as Promised I have been updating pretty frequently!! 😆

So the next update is all ready!! But would be updated only after Chapter 48 and 49 would cross 100 likes!!

Till then enjoy the Sneak Peek!! 😆

Sneak Peek~~~

"Maan...choriye naa...Kisine isstarha...umm... Dekh liya toh pata hain naa kiya hoga!!" As he was busy licking her throat and imprinting his touches all over her body Geet spoke with great effort!!

But that just made him go more berserk as he held her hand, raising both her hands upwards and pinned them to the wall. Gazing at her crimson lips avidly!!

It's been at least half an hour that he has been kissing her intensely yet with every gaze at her voluptuous lips Maan felt he has not savored anything till now!! There is a full ocean of love left to quench!

Actually, when he pulled Geet who is looking ravishing in that blue Salwar Kameez and pinned her down next to a huge pillar, his plans were just to tease her a little!!

Like how he teased her in the evening when she was working in the kitchen! Seeing none around her he hugged her from behind and nuzzled into her with sheer amour!! But then seeing her endless wriggles and pleading, had to let her go!!

Just like that incident, he loved teasing her all the instances. Plus that brazen kiss from the noon that is still lingering on to his avid lips. Therefore his mischievous mind was in full form seeing that cutesy doll walking by, all lost in her world!! His universe!

He just wanted to adore her vehemently for a few moments in secret.

But when she yelped in surprise and started protesting with her shy expressions it just turned Maan on instantly hence his lust demons were in full swing pestering her soft flesh by all his erotic inklings!! Moreover, her seductive fragrance too started creating devastation on a whole other level into his consciousness!!

He blamed her blamelessness for turning him into a sex raging beast who is not getting enough of her innocent moans or those eager dilated hazels!!

With her dizzy perception, she sensed his fierce fingertips trailing on her navel and then burning every inch of her skin going upwards, gradually!!

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Thanks for reading!! 😃

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago