Maaneet-OS Nafrat Ka toufa - Part 1/Page 1

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Part 1

you love me na
one boy asking to confirm

apne aap se jaida... iss jindegi se jaida she said without second thought ...her eyes showering eminence love for him but after brain washing by his dear friends he turned totally blind and dumb also...


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Maan ...Maan Maan stopped hearing his name turned out only to see one girl with curly hair ...he again started walking seeing that she ran to catch him and did...

Kya hai? his tone as usual rude with attitude mixed still continued his walk as he knows she is still following him like a glue

I want to say something...suno na...Tum Dad se milne kab arahe hoHe stops her query like an idiot...

what do you mean Sameera ? thinking her as one of a donkey he is staring at her like dumbfounded

Aise behave kar rahe ho jaise ki tum kuch jante he nahi Maan saw his confuse starr she continued with her still baby voice and with pouting lips

arey hum dono ki shadi ki baat karne...tum arahe ho na apni family ko laiker mere mammi-papa se mera hath mangne...waise toh bachpan mein he suddenly she saw him standing like a statue without feeling so she jerks him slowly

Ha ha ha ...ha ha ha...hu..ugghh he coughed trying to control his laughter...hahaha...hahahanow he holds his stomach after so much laughing session its started paining

Shadi aur tumse ...puuuhh...kisne kiya yeh mazak tumse...hahaha


She confuse first later she got he is mocking at her ...Suddenly she seeing their surrounding... she got conscious all students are surrounded them and some of looking at her with mockery

yeh mazak nahi hai Maan tum toh jante he ho na ki hum dono ki families mein kitni purani dosti hai...aur isiliye papa ne meri shadi tumse karwani ki sochi rakhi thi...aur yeh abse nahi balki jab hum chote the tabse aur


He cutted her words in middle lekin mai abhi chota baccha nahi raha miss sameera shergil so apne parents ko bhi yeh samjha dena ...I love someone very special

She unfinished his words Geet ...hai na? Maan dekho woh ladki tumhe phasa rahi hai ...she knows that you are heir of Khurana Empire ek lote waris ho ...isilye woh tumhe phasa rahi hai samajhne ki koshish karo...

SAMEERA ...I love Geet and ...only her... his voice like thunderstorm...

mujhse bhi jaidashe asked slowly after breaking so many illusions yes it was illusions from her childhood to now that Maan will be her one day ...now it's broken brutally by that person whom she loved from childhood and he was thinking it was friendship...


Haan tumse bhi jaida ...aur meri ek baat kaan kholke sunlo agar hum dono k bich aney ki koshish bhi ki toh mujhse bura koi na hoga tumhare liye...mai yeh bhi bhool jayunga ki tum meri kabhi dost bhi thi

Thi...thi...Thi ka kya matlab hai Maan ...tum uss

Before she finished Maan leaving

Tum mujhe aise chod k nahi ja sakte Maan ...uss do takey ki ladki k lite mera pyar thukra rahe ho ...SAMEERA ka pyar...And he vanished


...''''


He almost half an hour after searching geet saw her garden talking with someone else and hugged also ...when he come close that man left from there



Koun tha woh Geet Maan asked looking at her face that showering nervous

Koun Maan...arey woh ...woh ...haan mujhe yeh book lautane aaya tha ...mere ghar k pas he rehta hai bas...ss she finished with lots of stammer

Tum

Kuch kehna tha aapko Maan she saw his face that showing little insecurity

nahi kuch nahi



...'''''



Agar woh book lautane aaya tha toh geet ne ushe hugg kyu kiya...chupa kya rahi ho mujhse geet
that scene coming in his thought like clutching his breath...he is trying to breath but feeling like its impossible for him...thinking sometime sitting sometime walking in his luxury room...later he slept away with tiredness

After few days

In KM


Maan was about to leave Maan baba aapke liye kisine yeh gift darwaze pe he chod diya Nakul gave that gift pack to Maan ...Maan took that slowly thinking who send this to him ...Nakul left after his receiving


He opened that gift wrap but that isn't stay in maan hands for long time as it's slipped From his hand...his hands trembling so as his soul...like someone choked him death his face lost all the color as someone sucks all the blood from his body...


Aisa nahi ho sakta...geet mere sath aisa nahi kar sakti chanting sitting one of lonely park like trying to assure himself that what is he saw it was just only nightmare nothing else ...but sadly its not as that envelop still with him as it like he is trying to believe its all fake...he Fitch that picks from his jeans pocket and trying to catch some unusual something that will prove his love is innocent

Suddenly he saw something that remember him something yes it was that same man whom she(geet ) hugged that day..."How could he forgot? That means"


Geeettt


...'''''


Maan aapne mujhe yeha kyu bulaya


They are one hotel room

Kyu darr lag raha hai geet

He is looking at her every expression that showing little scared

Not bad ...not bad geet...accha acting kar laite ho...huh ...yakin nahi hota yehi woh masoom chehra hai jise main dilo jaan se pyar karta tha ...haan tha...kyunki ...kyunki ab mai iss chehre se itni nafrat karta hu ...ki pata nahi mai kya kar baithu...


Geet saw him lost somewhere so she hold his shoulder to gather his attention but he jerk that unconsciously feeling like some worm bitten him... Maan's jerking like that weird for geet as he is behaving like that for the first time without knowing how much hatred he is developing in his heart for her


Maan aap thik toh hai na ?


Haan ...haa.
First he stammer later he composed himself mujhe kya hoga...waise tumhe pata toh hoga ki maine tumhe yeha kyu bulaya hai

Nahi Maan
she denied innocently

Accha .?
..he entered both his Palm in his pant pockets tumhe kya lagta hai KM k waije iss hotel room mein...yeh bed...yeh phool...yeh sajabat said without fearing for her heart that will broke after knowing his words


Aap kya keh rahe ho maan. . mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi araha



First he smiled nodding his head like mockery Ok ...he caught her from her arm and pulled her forcefully at him ...she fall at his board chest making both heartbeat increased...Slowly he fingered on her face yehi woh chehra hai na jis pe mai marr mita tha...haan geet ...itni masumiyat...jaisa pehlibaar dekha tha waisa he hai

Maan
she moan feeling his finger touched her lips...he smirked


mai Maan joh mitt gaya tha iss chehre pe Aaj mai yeh chehra he mita deta hu hearing his words she opened his eyes only to see horrible scene...Maan attacks with one knife

Aaahhh


Whole room filled with one scream

After few minutes

He saw her crying sitting on the ground looking totally mad with her messy hair ...maan came close in fear geet backward still in her sitting position...but he hold her...her eyes showering so much fear after his touched...

He dragged her before mirror ...

Geet ...pata hai yeh maine tumko kyu diya...? Kyunki aaj k baad jab bhi tum apna yeh chehra ayney mein dekhogi ,tumhe yaad aata rahega ki tum MAAN SINGH KHURANA KI NAFRAT HO...samjhi...NAFRAT ...AUR TUMHARA YEH CHEHRA TUMHE HAMESHA YEH YAAD DILATI RAHEGAKI YEH MERE TARAF SE MAAN SINGH KHURANA KI TARAF SE "NAFRAT KA TOUFA" HAI...Tum bhi kya yaad rakhoogi Geet
Smirked Maan left that room shocked,and broken Geet...





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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Wow
Awsome
Maan loves geet but feels cheated so he calls her in a hotel
Bt i feel geet is trapped n doing this deliberately
May b someone blackmailed her
Bt awesome os
Eagerly waiting for part 2
Hope u finish piya re 2
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice story..
loved the start..
maan's love turned into hatred due to misunderstanding..
did sameera send those pics??
did not understand last part.. did he destroy her hair or her face??
if by any chance he has hurt her physically,I so want him to be punished..

Hy di.. it's been so long since last time.. hope you update your other stories as well..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update dear, MU between maaneet, it' looks like all done by sameera
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice one
don't think geet can cheat him
hope its all mu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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scary and painful
waiting for 2nd part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Evil Sam ka kaam hoga
Nice start please add me to your pm list
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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very nice
so sam give falls proof to separate maan n geet

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Posted: 7 years ago
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it's heart breaking
did she really cheat on him ?
what he saw actually and why she hide about that person ?
waiting for more

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