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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#681

u are afraid of creepy stuff ye jaan k im super pleased!😃

I'm so glad i made u read this one🤣

next time I'll keep in mind tot to give u any kind of hints regarding the plot!😆

even though u didn't enjoy reading it im glad u gave it a try!🤗

next story me na maan ka plastic surgery karwak re entry karvayenge😆

even though geet isn't a ekta show we will plan all the plot twists

waha geet would defo be a ghost i promise😉

thanks for reading and also taking ur time to comment Sophie😊

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#682

@Bella - here they are, using Spoorthi's thread..

Raaz 1 : Kalyug Ki Cinderella

🤣 It was like a spoof..

Geet waiting for her Prince to come riding Audi..

and there he comes in Audi...i n - a - s l o w - m o t i o n 😆

not just that, every thing about him is in slow motion..that was the highest rofling moment

just imagine, the hero is so filmy that he acts everything in slow motion..

the end 😲 he asks for aloo and pyaaz..😆 I can imagine Geet's stunned expression...

expectation vs reality

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#683

Raaz 2 : Dil Diyan Gallan

It is a nice song, and the start of the story was as soft and smooth as the soft music played in the background..dreamy, but turned out to be a dream only.

I liked how Maan and Geet became friends and spent time with each other, it was very much unlike to the relation he had with Natasha. In a busy schedule, he had her thoughts always and managed to take out time for her. He did hurt her, but came out to be courageous enough to oppose his Dadi when he realized what he was going to lose and how it had hurt her.

all well that ends well and a very catchy title and the lyrics complemented the turn of events and the feeling they felt.

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#684

Hayee!! Meri itni bakwas likhawat ki itni taarif

Dil garden garden ho gaya..😳😳

Waise in dono raaz k peeche ka raaz bhi bol deti hoon aapko ki mujhe ye likhne ka keeda kaise padha..

Dil Diyan Gallan song I had sung for a dear friend who is unwell.. She has a life threatening disease & was undergoing treatment at that time.. It was the occasion of V-day & she was upset coz uska koi BF nhi hai to gv surprises.. Toh maine uske liye ye gaana gaya... tab uske dimag mein ek idea aaya, she said me to write a story based on her idea & give the name dil diyan gallan.. Toh mine ye likha for her & posted in MB forum on V-day evening.. Yaha kuch logon ko pata chala toh they asked for Maaneet version.. Main aise toh likhne wali thi nahi in a separate post, is liye un logo k liye anni thread pe de diya..

Second wali toh certain someone by name Sabina forced me to write, to give for anni thread..

Toh maine apne chutkulo k khazaane se ek chutkula nikaala aur usey ek chote se comic story mein convert kar diya..

Iske baad I dont think kuch likhne wali hoon. kyuki mujhe likhna bilkul nahi pasand( Except writing jokes) aur naa hi mujh mein ye talent hai..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#685

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
Hayee!! Meri itni bakwas likhawat ki itni taarif
Dil garden garden ho gaya..😳😳

Waise in dono raaz k peeche ka raaz bhi bol deti hoon aapko ki mujhe ye likhne ka keeda kaise padha..

Dil Diyan Gallan song I had sung for a dear friend who is unwell.. She has a life threatening disease & was undergoing treatment at that time.. It was the occasion of V-day & she was upset coz uska koi BF nhi hai to gv surprises.. Toh maine uske liye ye gaana gaya... tab uske dimag mein ek idea aaya, she said me to write a story based on her idea & give the name dil diyan gallan.. Toh mine ye likha for her & posted in MB forum on V-day evening.. Yaha kuch logon ko pata chala toh they asked for Maaneet version.. Main aise toh likhne wali thi nahi in a separate post, is liye un logo k liye anni thread pe de diya..

Second wali toh certain someone by name Sabina forced me to write, to give for anni thread..
Toh maine apne chutkulo k khazaane se ek chutkula nikaala aur usey ek chote se comic story mein convert kar diya..

Iske baad I dont think kuch likhne wali hoon. kyuki mujhe likhna bilkul nahi pasand( Except writing jokes) aur naa hi mujh mein ye talent hai..

toh phir chutkulon ke khajane mein se aur motee bikher do..😊

It was written good, Bella !! Talent toh hai tum mein and with time it will keep on going to the next level. 😊

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 7 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#686

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Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 7 years ago

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#687

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
u are afraid of creepy stuff ye jaan k im super pleased!😃
I'm so glad i made u read this one🤣

next time I'll keep in mind tot to give u any kind of hints regarding the plot!😆

even though u didn't enjoy reading it im glad u gave it a try!🤗

next story me na maan ka plastic surgery karwak re entry karvayenge😆

even though geet isn't a ekta show we will plan all the plot twists
waha geet would defo be a ghost i promise😉

thanks for reading and also taking ur time to comment Sophie😊

Ur pleased, yeh kaisa emotion hai😲

Ur mena be lyk sos man, nahi maloom tha 😆 but yaha to opposite hai😕

exactly had it been someone else maybe i would have not returned lekin i did promise to read, yeh baat alag that i offer to read alot story and half i've forgotten myself 😳

Oh damn Maan ka chakal atcha hai, whats the need for plastic surgery 😆

Geet as ghost, although pretty ghost hoga but i aint interested

to bhool jao mein wapas nahi a-oongi 😉

u are most welcome Spoorthi