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ja1970

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Interesting prologue .concept is good waiting for the first update .

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pop77

@pop77

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Interesting story!! Maan try to reidoff Sam.
Are u going to update in forum or blog?

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nadia khan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

congrats on new story nice prologue maan is married to sameera but he hates her for Sam her son dhruv is a mistake and maan couldn't wait to get divorce from Sam dhruv had heard his mom talk to her bf calling her own flesh and blood a mistake maan made him understand to stay away he was amused how his son used Sam lipstick on his dog though maan wanted to tell Sam just to see her expressions but he avoid it his first pirorities was to get divorce from Sam and kick her out

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Piaa21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

It's a bit complicated...I m loving it...But I m not able to understand who the real mother is??Nd what does title mean??

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Awesome pro

Loved to read it

Maan loved his son but can't give him his mother love sam didn't care abor dhruv

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pari_DD

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

amazing pro

maan love his son BT for Sam dhrus just a mistake.dhruv is sooo cute he used sam lipstick on puppy.maan want to get rid of sam by divorcing her.waiting for d nxt updtee

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Krupa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

very intresting start- Again s usual same is beach here who dont have any mercy towards her little innocent son, what type of mother she is?

so their divorce is on final stage and maan decided never to enter another relationship ever, poor dhruv because sam told him a mistake he also calling sameera as sam,rather mom, very insulting to mother which is not presant in this creature.

she alresady have boyfriend too.

some diffrant concept, i will read this if u will give regular updstes, pm mre the updates.

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suhaaana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

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Are you done , I need to go and check on Dhruv. Maan said while putting his baby's toys away.

Dhruv , dhruv, Dhruv , he is all you think of.. not anyone else.

Maan glared at the woman infront of him and answered her.

Someone has to look after our son Sam when you are so busy in sleeping with your boy toy sam. Since you don't do it , it naturally falls on me.

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Have you thought of divorcing her Maan. You and Dhruv will be better without her presence on your life , said his father.

I know dad but i can't rob the small connection he has in the name of motherly affection. It is the least I can do for him even if I have to stay married to Sameera.

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Part 1
Will be up soon

Edited by suhaaana - 7 years ago