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Posted: 7 years ago
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this os is written on GHSP celebration thread u all must read it already

if anyone get miss than this is for them


hope u all enjoy it



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Move on ...

Maan hand shake when he put key to open the door of his house their house their dream house .His gaze went to name plate of door.

MR.Maan Singh Khurana MRS. Geet Maan Singh Khurana

He never force her to change her name but she is always bolati thi muje to apke rang main rang jana hai MSK..maan somehow open door of house their house they make it with their love ..when his family refused to accept as bahu and his wife .tab muje aur geet ko papaji (geet father ) ne hai bahot suopport kiya tha ye chotasa gharonda un dono ke sapno ka ...banane main

He remove his shoes out itself a soft smile appear on his face He remind how geet hide his shoes when he don't removed it outside of house .after her strict instruction . ... Maan ki rukhi suhki zindgi main she come as beautiful song but today he lost ...he gulp in pain he feel his heart having immune pain.

He walk to A big window of living room its geet personal space she want this big window ...where she can seat and usko waha time bitna ya fhir u kahu mera intazzar karna bahot acha lagata tha ...kintne baar (how many time) he saw her sleeping in there in that window edge with waiting for him...he touch that place he feel his touch there...do u he feel this touch again maan ( maan heart ask him)...few tear gather in his eyes but he control that and move on from that place ...he while seat on sofa ...two seated sofa its her choice so whenever they seat their There should be no distance between them they can seat very closed to each other .. don't know kaha se idea aate thei uske dimag main ...lakin abhi jo distance aa gaya hai uska kya maan ( again maan heart ask him)...he stand from sofa that touch burn him.

He went to bedroom side their bedroom full of red and black combination its he think always its world verse combination for Bedroom but black is his fev and red is her ..he is ready for adjust but she not she want their bedroom should be both choice ... Both choice like now situation also both choice ...it's their room where they become one in all sense two body one soul. he chuckle with memory of their first night ...he

He seat on bed and lost in past ...how much she make fuss ...she is hell nervous ..thou they have love marriage but she always be shy for intimacy so maan also never push her ...for that he wait for the day their first night ...She almost get terrified when maan removed his cloth and she watch ahem ahem ...maan almost coo her like small kid who is terrified with unknown fear ...She so much scared but want to fulfil their dream of one soul she want to become one in all sense ...she almost cried in his hug ...that night he love her like he loving some delegated flower ...but after that night she took perfect u turn always demanding ... Demanding ...maan come out from past ...that time her demand was Love and today her demand was ...move...he stand with shock ...he almost run out from room.

He took deep breath ...he feel thirst he went to kitchen side and took glass of water his eyes land on her radio ...kitchen she and radio deadly combination ...he took that in his hand and start it ...there start her fev song ...Arjit singh ...

He stand their ...

Tenu itna main pyaar karaan

Ek pal vich sau baar karaan

Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke

Maut da intezaar karaan

That songs lyrics make bleed his heart ...he is going away she is going away ..fist he always make fun on this sentence that its not practical aisa nahi hota but today he get the true meaning of this words

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake (x2)

Yes he also do same thing na for their love he refuse khurana empire for their love ...fhir ajj kya ho gaua ye itna bada Ego kaha se aa gaya his heart again ask him..

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan

Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan

Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

Is he really live without her ..jo uske zindgi ke har ek pal main sama gai hai uski jaan rooh tak chu gai hai is he really going to move on...

Just then his eyes land on calendar he so much laugh on her when she put calendar on wall ...he called him outdated ...he never saw that ...now he saw some word on it something written on it .he took that in his hand and move to living area he seat and look in it so many notes ...milk ,newspaper ,gas ,society maintence ..he flip to each page ...last 11 month ki each and every things ki ..note it's like diary . Unki marriage life ki dairy 11 month of their marriage ...he went to first page ...on one date she circle in red but no note on that date ...and date is 25- he try to remind that date kya tha us din unki shadi ko 10 din hi hui thei why she circle like that ...

He closed his eyes and try to remind hardly ...after few moment his eyes open in shock ..her first period after their marriage and his first fight ...he lost in past from more geet behaving different bahot dur dur baahg rahi thi ...and he have holiday that he want to love her only but she is not giving chance ...At last he almost cage to wall and ki** her heard ...he start to lost in her but her body turn stiff ...and he took as insulted ..without any word he went from there ...He have to ask but his nature he went out and come really late in night ...when he come he again found her near window ... He thou angry with her but he took her in his arm and make her lay down on bed ..she carrying a paper in hand ...

With surprised he took that and read ...his eyes winded in shock she written ( sorry maan wo mera wo ...my period get start in morning so ...)he closed his eyes in frustration what he done ...bol deta to ye nahi hota na na saayed tumare relation main bahi wahi hua na MSK , Your so called khurana family say something about her and u believe sometime eyes se dekhi hui cheej bhi sach nahi hoti , do you try to check its true or not or else u discuss with her about that bas khamosh (silent ) ho gaye may be your family is not wrong laking syaaed geet bhi galat nahi hogi to ...u RE THE ONE who brought ego in this beautiful relation than she follow same she is also GMSK na to ego main thodi kam hogi ...maan heart again say yes bola hota to ye hota nahi na MSK saayead

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin

Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley

Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

He again flip other page ...every month 25 ,26 should be circle ...he get that ...he search for ongoing month circle but there is none .. circle nahi tha waha ...he get confused is she forget ...but next moment his eyes winded in shock , reality hit him hard ..he come here to take his certificate and cloth because they are filing Divorce case tom...

He punch some number on mobile and start to wait desperately ...his walking as lion ...fro and back his heart ruing in full speed ..in 15 min door bail get ring ...

He almost run to door and before she react any way he took her to washroom side ...He put somting in her hand and show her washroom side

Thou she is hell angry with him..she don't want to come here but his voice something in it ..and now his face ,eyes saying smoothing ...she once look to her palm that what he put in it ..her eyes winded in shock its pregnancy test kit ...Some tear appear on her eyes she once look to him ...he assured her with his eyes and ...she entered in washroom ..

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

He feel like each moment turn as year ...for him ...he wait for her but door don't get open ..but he heard a cry and next moment he dash inside wash room ...

Her eyes shining she crying and laughing...same time ...song playing in background and maan took his geet in his embrace ..in his hug ...

Aankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein

Ki chehre se teri na hatein

Neendon mein meri bas tere

Khwabon ne li hai karwatein

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein

Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Yes both soul Move on in true manner as would be ma papa ...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#3
Hey mahi dii
It was beautiful , loved it ❤️
Sorry that I didn't visit anniversary thread , thanks for posting it 😳
My favorite song and on the top of It my all time favorite maaneet

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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
terrific OS! wonderfully written! they were gng to divorce but now Geet expecting! this got them back together!
Sonia.KN thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mahi read this on the thread but didn't comment. This is one of most wonderful OS, I have ever read.How this started like Maan is suffering from ages aur Geet ki yaad main aasun bahaa raha hai..How he feels Geet's presence every where remembering her. Yes the union was wonderful
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Posted: 7 years ago
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this is so beautiful
one of my favourite os of farewell thread
its not so easy to move on
glad maaneet together
Keepdreaming thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
glad they couldnt move on
they still have so much love between them
let the love win only
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Posted: 7 years ago
#8
Beautiful os... move on... he don't want to but Geet and situation force him to do so.. but I am confused with the reason of their ego clash...baby..or...Family
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9
Fantastic OS

Maan married Geet against his family's wishes but now they getting a divorce
all because he allowed his ego to enter their beautiful relationship
when Geet comes Maan gives a pregnancy tester and he is happy that
they are going to be parents soon so they reunited
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
I read this one too on Ghsp Anniversary thread...but didn't comment...so want to say that it's an awesome one...they were about to get separated but Geet's news of them becoming parents made them change their decision and they reunited...loved it...thank u 4 pm...

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