The One I Desired - MaanEet SS

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prologue||

"Watch your tone. Don't forget, with whom you are talking, is my wife now. So you better stay in your limits while talking to her or while talking about her." Maan Singh Khurana roared, hiding Geet behind him.

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"Why did you marry me?" She asked, not getting what exactly made him take the step which he did, without even her consent.

"Because I love you." He answered truthfully, staring right in her eyes.

"But I don't think I will be ever able to love you." She lowered her gaze as she spoke about her insecurity that she may not be able to give him what he deserves as a husband from her, as a wife.

"You will!!! And I know that. One day, you will love me more than I love you."

She looked amazed. "I don't know if I will be ever able to love you or not but I promise I will be a loyal wife."

"I know that." He once again surprised her. "And till then, I will sleep on couch." Once again, a very sweet gesture by him! By letting her know that he would not force anything on her, till the time she wasn't comfortable.

"It's not needed. I trust you. We can share the bed."


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Sometimes I can't think of obvious. Pardon me for the same. I was asking if you people are willing to read and it completely slipped off my mind that there might be several new readers too who haven't had read anything from me. So I am posting a prologue.


Continuation still demands readers. So if you are willing to read more, please make it a point to hit the like button and drop your review.


This one is dedicated to Khwaish. She really has a big hand in pulling me back here. Believe me when I say, I haven't seen a reader waiting for months and years. You are amazing.


Regards

- Harshada

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome prolouge .. 😃
Maan married geet as he loves her .. But geet doesnt love maan .. Why she said that she might not be able to love him ? Does she love someone ? Maan is soo sweet and understanding husband .. Waiting for updates .. Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats on the new story! thanks for posting so soon! appreciate it! superb prologue - Geet and Maan married! he loves her and is willing to wait! he is a wonderful person! why cannot she love Maan??? glad she trusts Maan! looking forward to the story! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice concept...Waiting to read more...
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nice prologue, somewhere where they both started out on good terms. and also married!!!
looking forward to the story. I had backed out initially after reading some other character names, but something made me check this thread once again, and thankfully it was Maaneet this time
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan

nice prologue, somewhere where they both started out on good terms. and also married!!!

looking forward to the story. I had backed out initially after reading some other character names, but something made me check this thread once again, and thankfully it was Maaneet this time


I know right? I did realize after posting that the prologue had names. I have a pretty different way of writing. In my laptop, my every fic is on different character names. I write for the names which appeals me depending on mood and the story continues. I change names before posting. I have said it time and again, I am someone who can write on any names, be it serial ones or random ones.I just need two people to pen down something on. That's how I write.
I am glad you liked the prologue. Thank you.
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thanks for the dedication😳 so sweet of u!
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Interesting prologue ...waiting for their journey...
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Congrats on new story
Interesting prologue
Liked it!!
Maaneet are married. Maan loves Geet but Geet doesn't reciprocate his feelings for her. Is she in love with someone else !? Maan was confident that one day Geet will accept and love him back. He was willing to wait for her. Glad that Geet trust Maan.
Looking forward to the update
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Congrats on your story 👏

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