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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Iptida

Your comments are getting shorter hmm!!😭

sorry will amend

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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please change Maan's grandfather - do not like that pic

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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updated comment!

Captivating update! wonderfully written! Geet was so dominating! she is indeed a dayan! her friends have to do her homework! so Maaneet met in their childhood! Oh no! Geet called Maan bhai!

and then they meet years later...

It was sad that Geet was brought up by her maid as her mom was working! but Sushma trials and tribulations influenced Geet! Geet fell in love but he was already taken!

Geet now getting engaged but she she does not like the guy! he does not appeal to her! Mohinder reveals his qualities but Geet unimpressed! like that she is career focused! Geet is all he has as Rano died! Maan mom is so sweet! like how Geet cribs to Madhurima!

So Geet is geeting enaged to Maan's cousin!

hmm Geet and Maan are opposites! he is shy and she is bold! can understand why Maan was surprised when she called him!

eager to know why Maaneet get married!

shall wait 4 next

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
updated comment!

Captivating update! wonderfully written! Geet was so dominating! she is indeed a dayan! her friends have to do her homework! so Maaneet met in their childhood! Oh no! Geet called Maan bhai!

and then they meet years later...

It was sad that Geet was brought up by her maid as her mom was working! but Sushma trials and tribulations influenced Geet! Geet fell in love but he was already taken!

Geet now getting engaged but she she does not like the guy! he does not appeal to her! Mohinder reveals his qualities but Geet unimpressed! like that she is career focused! Geet is all he has as Rano died! Maan mom is so sweet! like how Geet cribs to Madhurima!

So Geet is geeting enaged to Maan's cousin!

hmm Geet and Maan are opposites! he is shy and she is bold! can understand why Maan was surprised when she called him!

eager to know why Maaneet get married!

shall wait 4 next

Aww...🤗 That is really sweet of you dearie... But I hope I am not exhausting you!!

Thank you millionth time for this updated comment!! But I meant to notify you only... However my greedy heart can never have enough of your awesome comments!!
So I am extremely humbled by this cutesy gesture of you!! ❤️

Coming to your comment,

Well They are indeed poles apart as I have stated in the plot summary, But is Maan really shy?? 😉

Maan - He is a complex yet the most simple character here!! Once I shape his character up more you will understand better...There is more to him than the shy reserved simple old school guy!!

Geet - She has a clandestine side of herself apart from the vivacious confident strong girl!!

Their Marriage - That reason is very simple... Will be put in the next few updates!! 😳

PS- Thank you so very much for this awesome reply!! I understand the whole update is in narration mode of basically telling about Geet's life so there is not much to say...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Iptida

Aww...🤗 That is really sweet of you dearie... But I hope I am not exhausting you!!
Thank you millionth time for this updated comment!! But I meant to notify you only... However my greedy heart can never have enough of your awesome comments!!
So I am extremely humbled by this cutesy gesture of you!! ❤️

Coming to your comment,

Well They are indeed poles apart as I have stated in the plot summary, But is Maan really shy?? 😉

Maan - He is a complex yet the most simple character here!! Once I shape his character up more you will understand better...There is more to him than the shy reserved simple old school guy!!

Geet - She has a clandestine side of herself apart from the vivacious confident strong girl!!

Their Marriage - That reason is very simple... Will be put in the next few updates!! 😳

PS- Thank you so very much for this awesome reply!! I understand the whole update is in narration mode of basically telling about Geet's life so there is not much to say...