Predestined!#T3!*TEASER @144[CH 43,CH44@pg 99,127]21st Nov

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@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: Iptida

<font color="#009999">Very Soon I shall try!!! Sorry for being inactive these 2 days!!</font>

No prblem i am waiting i know u must b busy
Bt i miss ur stories so just keep asking u know me he he

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jaya343434

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Posted: 7 years ago

#592

Please send me password for 37 part onwards

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@LovelyUmang5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#593

Awesome story didi..👍🏼

maaneet in two parellel worlds..

maan saved geet in that world also.. But geet in love with dev??😲

handa family was very loving unlike in serial

maaneet cute nok jhok😛

devil dev trying to force geet & ran with money...😡

dadi got maaneet married after getting to know of the fiasco.. wah dadi kya mauke pe choka maara hai😉

geet is so naive.. Maaneet in mumbai & poor maan had hard time managing the disaster queen..🤣

Haila geet ko toh kuch kaam nhi aata!!😲

maan was too rude to geet..

ahlam track was nice.. I initially thought she was a villain but she turned out to be nice..

maaneet started falling in love but maan in denial mode..🤔

sameera & dev ka naam phir kyn aaya?? Do they have re-entry in maaneet lives?? If so plz save the poor lovers & punish the villains for their deeds..😈

maan panicked hearing about fire & finally accepted geet..👏

shopping scene was cute.. But i dint like pinky bashing maan!!😒

maaneet lovely moments & romance Was cute..

geet was so scared for maan after the news.. But he reached safely..

omg dadi dreaming to become par-dadi..😆 Maan finally left the challenge thing..

maan ne kya surpise plan kiya hai geetu k liye?? Eager to know..

geet wants hin m to sing for her & poor hubby frightened at the thought..🤣

but he sang nicely.. Well according to geetu kyuki mujhe toh sunai nhi diya!!😛

morning scenes were very cute.. Cute romance with cute fights..☺️

But will you not write about the parallel world?? It's been so long..

eagerly waiting for next episodes..😊

Di aap bengali ho kya?? Coz maine kayi writers ka dekha hai voh jaha k hote hai vaha k language, traditions, etc. Apne writing mein use karte hai..

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#594

thanks 4 da pm! extremely sorry 4 late likes and comments! Chap 40 - perfect update! well written! falling more and more 4 this Maan! he is a wonderful, caring and loving hubby! Maan speaks 2 dadi! Geet faints! he is worried but she wakes up! Maan wants 2 cal the doc but she stops him! liked how Geet calms Maan! Maan makes sure she eats! nice convo between dadi and Maan! he assures her Geet is fine! uff dadi assumes Geet is pregnant! Maan corrects her! admire that Maan wants Geet to study and work! dadi awed! I am glad Maan thanked dadi 4 bringing Geet into his life! he is not upset he lost to Geet! dadi emotional and ecstatic!! she feels relieved as she got Maan engaged 2 Sam! hmm where did dadi see Geet before? how did she know Maaneet were predestined for each other? love the bond between Maan n dadi! happy that Maan puts Geet's health first and controls his desire! indeed they have come along way! he will sleep on the couch but madam upset and ensures his sleeps on the bed! omg she wants him 2 sing! Maan perplexed!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#595

chap 41 - fab update! brilliantly written! Geet adamant and Maan gives in! lovely song which suits the moment! love the song! Geet bowled over! finally got to know something abt mom's family! his mom was Bengali! liked Geet's enthusiasm 2 know some Bengali words! superb moments and interesting convo. loved how Maan insists on putting sindoor and her mangalsutra! its his right... she is overwhelmed! nice definition of love! Geet comments on some guys and shows him the group chat! he sees some male model pics! nice come back from Maan! hmm staring at some hot models... update soon 👏😊

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#596

superb gif... 😃

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: solaceMG

No prblem i am waiting i know u must b busy
Bt i miss ur stories so just keep asking u know me he he

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#598

finally commented on page 94

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#599

Sorry for the delay in posting my comment. Really got held up on too many things

CHAPTER 40:

amazing chapter 👏

So, Geet had faced some changes in her physical well being because of drastic changes in her sleeping and eating schedule...credit goes to her hubby...😆...now worried and covering it up by helping her to eat and sleep on time😛. Daadi thought that she is throwing out and has strange sensations may be initial signs of pregnancy...😆...thank god Maan made her understand she is not and they have certain other priorities in life.

Daadi is initially disappointed but very well understood his point of view and moreover she is happy that how Maneet care for each other.

Love the way how Maan takes care of his Geet...he has some surprise for the next day and hence wants her to sleep peacefully and he prefers to sleep away from her at the couch...but our sherni doesnt allow him to do so...😉...and her take and point of views by explaining him what will he do during her periods and all that was soo very hilariously cute 😆

Now reading the second part...

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

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Posted: 7 years ago

#600

CHAPTER 41:

WOW...AMAZING POETICAL SONG BY TAGORE JI...THANKS A LOT FOR SHARING .

Loved the way Geet demands Maan to sing a song which she had heard him humming...wow...its a Bengali song...his Mom had some Bengali roots from his mom's side...

Really love it when Maan gives in to every kiddish demands of Geet...

The epicenter of this chapter was the Bengali part which I loved it...Even though I do not understand the language but love some of the classic bengali movies, Tagoreji's songs...

Heard Arjit Singh's version of the song...it was very smooth and melodious...👏

Thank you for the double updates...🤗

Waiting for the next😊

Edited by Vaidhumom - 7 years ago