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Evening 6:30

Mumbai...

Geet come out of bus, she look around.

Hope I meet him soon...she think and take a taxi to her friend Mansi house. reaching there she find lock on door, she ask someone about Mansi and the person inform her that Mansi went to her sister marriage and will come after five days. Geet get tense.

Now what I do ? mistake is all my why I didn't inform Mansi before coming here...she cursed herself, move ahead from there she call Paridhi her sister.

Geet Di ...Paridhi take call, Geet told her that she need her help and she don't have that much money to pay for hotel room.

Di you don't worry I give you my friend Prateek address he is manager of a hotel so you can ask him, he can give a less you costly room ...Geet happily thanked paridhi for her help.

she reach the address look for hotel then she meet Prateek and he told her that she come on right time because just now someone checked out from a room. he give her key, she went to the room, when she was about to open door, she heard some noises from room next to her, she look there is a man who throwing all thing here n there in anger, she move back in fear and saw the man turn after hearing her anklet sound.

Who are you ? ...he shouted in anger take steps toward her, she move back until he corner her to wall.

Why are you fearing from me ? Are you too think that I only can hurt people...Geet look down scared to speak anything.

I want answer... He demand make her face him. she looked his face and don't know how but she know someone close to him hurt him.

I don't know...she spoke and he feel good that there is someone who don't think bad about him.

Who are you ? ...he ask again but this time calmly.

Geet ...she told her name, he smile after hearing her name.

Maan bhai what are you doing ? ...They both heard Prateek voice,

Leave her ...Prateek said pulled Geet away from Maan. Maan stare his hold on Geet hand, Geet see Maan eyes on Prateek hold so she instantly pull her hand out of his hold.

I'm ok ... She told to Prateek but Maan still looking Prateek angrily. she run to her room.
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Next morning...

Geet open her eyes and find Maan there sat on her bed.

How you come here ? ...she almost shouted sat on bed, he put his palm on her mouth. she look him with her widened eyes.

Shuhh...he removing his hand away.

What do you want ? ...she ask coming out of bed scared.

Is this yours ? ...he show her ring and key, Geet look her engagement ring n key in his hand.

Yes but how come I lost them ? ...she said think maybe in hurry she drop key out side but how come she lost her ring.

I find your ring and key out side your room...Maan told remember her ring is actually out side his room n key close to her room.

Please give me back now ...Geet forward her hand.

What you will give me in return ? ...he ask Geet look him don't know what he want.

Whatever you want ...her bold sentence made Geet herself uncomfortable she look down, Maan come to her hold her hand.

Be my friend ...Maan spoke made her face him holding her chin. She don't know if she can trust him or not.

Friends ? ...she question with doubt all over written on her face.

Yes ...Maan said slid ring in her finger, she looked him stunned.
******************
Afternoon...

Geet come to her balcony thinking how to meet her fiance ? when she saw Maan in his balcony. their balcony is just next to each other. she find him turning to her but she instantly hide behind door before he can see her.

Geet I know you are here ...she heard him, she don't know how he can say so surely ?

Come out now ...she heard his angry voice. she nod no still hiding behind door and after this she not heard his voice then a knock come on her room door. she open door without seeing who is on the door. she move back when she saw Maan in front of her, he take steps toward her like an angry loin and she move back like an scared lamb then her back slammed on wall behind her. she try to move away from him but Yash put his both hands on side of her head.

Just listen to me carefully ... When he spoke she look up to his face.

I don't like when someone ignore me ...he said and she stare his eyes n know he is saying this because she ignore him.

Do you understand ? ...She nodded yes looking down, he made her face him holding her chin.

Speak ...he demand put hair behind her ear.

Yes ...she spoke fearing from him.

Then why you didn't come in balcony ? ...he ask playing with her ear ring.

I was not there then ...she lie then she feel his hand move into her hair, she close her eyes with feel of something different she never feel before.

Don't lie to me ...he warn holding her hair into his fist.

How can you say I was there ? ...she moaned in pain, he leave her hair after seeing her tear.

I can feel you ...he whisper lost in her eyes, he bring her face close to his holding her nape.

How can you feel me ? ...she murmur and he just stare her innocent eyes filled with questions but he don't have answer.

Leave me ...she spoke and when he did, she feel like moving again into his arms. he take steps back. she look him until he reach door.

You didn't tell me your name ...she spoke don't know from where she get the guts to even ask anything from him.

Maan Singh Khurana ...he stop on his place and Geet stand there shocked, she can't believe that he is her fiance Maan Singh Khurana.
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Evening...

Geet sat in her room balcony thinking about Maan. she finally meet her fiance.

yeah her engagement happen but he did not come to his own engagement n she still think why??

Mom told me he don't like family party's and any functions ...she think then get up from chair.

I have to know him n what he think about us ...she come to room.

But he is really aggressive ...she think and remember how he behave with her.

But he get angry because I lied to him ...she look herself in mirror standing in front of dressing table and blushing thinking Maan is her would be hubby.

Stop thinking about him, I don't even know what he think about me ...she look down at herself.

I'm beautiful ...she remember how he look at her n hide her face between palm cutely feel shy. her mobile ring she take call.

You reach safely beta ? ...shobha asked worried for Geet.

Yes maa I'm fine ...she told but didn't said that she is not in mansi house but in a hotel.

Then why don't you call last night ? ...shobha scolded Geet.

I was tired maa that why ...Geet told because she can't tell her maa that she is so much into Maan thoughts that's why she forget to call her.

Did you meet Maan ji ? ...asked shobha and Geet don't know how to tell her that he is totally different of what they all think of him.

Yeah he is a nice person ...Shobha smile feel good after listening this.

Shobha herself send Geet to Mumbai to know about Maan because shobha and Geet both don't even meet Maan, only Geet's father satya meet Maan and his family and he fixed Geet marriage with Maan without even inform Geet but when shobha told Geet about her engagement after somedays. Geet reaction was same as any other girl on her place will behave who get to know about engaged with someone she don't even know. Geet get angry when Maan didn't come to engagement party. she feel hurt more then anger so she decided to meet Maan and know what his problem actually.
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Maan monologue...

I meet Geet today, my fiancee. she is beautiful but more then her beauty her innocence attracted me to her, she is different from all.
I behave rudely with her but because she lied to me and I know she fear from me but I don't want to make her scare. I'm just like this only, because I never achieve anything. my mom dad hate me for what I'm today a guy who don't know anything other than drinking. they love my younger brother Prateek because he is handling their business and I'm nothing in front of him.

I'm like this because of a girl. her name is ishita yes I loved her so much, not now but five years back I was crazy for her and one day I found her with Aman my best friend. I was too hurt n angry after seeing both together. Aman know I love Ishita still he back stab me, I don't know why he did this to me? from that day I don't believe in friends not relationship but when I meet Geet don't know how she make me feel alive again.

And now I again want to love someone and its her, I wish to loved by someone and its only her!!
I made her wore the ring that she lost out side my room, I'm staying here because I can't bear too much guest in KM so I'm living here in Prateek hotel for some days. I don't know what Geet think about me because I was not there in engagement party.

But I know one thing that she is mine and now no one can take her away from me not even when if she herself want. I know I'm sounding like a demon but after my best friend n my love betrayal me you can't expect me to behave like a normal man.
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Afternoon...

Geet knock on Maan room door and he open door taking his own sweet time. She look him, he is just in pant.

I think he just take bath now ...she think Maan look her confusedly.

Actually I want to talk to you ...she said fearing for his response, he still not moved because he need proper reason.

So can I come in please ...she asked showing her baby face and he almost smile giving her way to room. she come inside and look around then turn back to find him just so close to her.

What do you want to talk ? ...he ask when she look down shying.

Please wore shirt first...she take step back.

Why ? ...he ask smirking know he is too hot for her. she look up don't know how to tell him that she can't handle too much hotness at ones.

Actually I don't like guys without shirt ...she lie looking around for his shirt and finally she saw.

Please...She give him to wear and he wore for her surprise, she smile.

Do you know me ? ...she question, he nod picked up a bottle from side table.

Yes I know, you are my fiancee ... He said opening bottle.

You are a drinker ...she made a funny face and he turn to her.

Yes!! Do you have any problem ?...She nod no meekly and he take two sip.

Next question ...he spoke without looking her, she look him angrily for drinking in front of her. she hate people who drink and here her would be husband drinking. she can't take this.

I don't have any more question now, I'm leaving...she take steps toward to door in anger.

Why can't you say directly that you don't like me drinking ...she heard him and know he is taking steps toward her.

Yes I don't like people who drink ...she told angrily, her breath stop for a moment when she feel his warm breath on her ear.

Then you have to make yourself habitual of me because you are going to live your whole life with me...Maan spoke into her ear, she nod turn to him.

Can't you leave drinking for me ?...she request him, he look her for a moment.

You don't talk with you parents and friends then I can stop drinking ...He said and Geet look him shocked.

What ?? I can't, never ...She almost scream to even think a day without talking with her mom dad, Sister n friends.

Then how can you expect me to leave my only friend ...Maan spoke taking another sip and Geet don't know what to say now.
******************
This is last day of Geet in Prateek hotel and she feel bad that she is leaving tomorrow because mansi is back from her sister marriage.

she think about Maan he don't talk much but she knew he love her without him telling her.
In this one week they spend their most of the time with each other and now she know him better then he know himself.

He get angry on little things but he love me so much. yeah he never told me but still I knew he does...she look her engagement ring and smile thinking how he made her wear it.
*******************
Night 11:30

Where are you taking me...Geet spoke still with her close eyes in sleep.

How you know it's me...Maan ask pick her in his arms kiss her head smiling.

I can feel you...she spoke hugging his neck not in mood to open her eyes. Maan put her in his car front seat.

Look how is this ? ...Maan ask her made her stand on her feet. Geet saw they are on beach with a table for both of them and most important her birthday cake. She turn to him happily.

How you know ? ...Maan smile at her happy face.

Happy birthday!! ...he wish her kissing her cheek softly.

He give her knife and she hold his hand too and they both cut the cake n feed each other. She ask who's this beech ? he told her they are behind Prateek hotel and no one come there in this time. So he plan her birthday here.

I want to dance ...she said then she heard a song playing in background. She smile when he pulled her into his arms like always without asking her. They both move on to the soft music and soon lost into each other, his red soft lips found her soft one and she kissed him back lovingly.

they return back to hotel but this time Maan bring her to his room when Geet told him that she is leaving soon this hotel and Mumbai too. Geet stare his eyes when he open her hair n kissed her neck n she no longer can think anything. she clutch him tight and he take her to a world where no one is other than both of them.
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Bhopal...

After 10 days...

Maan pushed door open. Geet look at him when she heard her room door opening with a bang sound.

You refuse to marry me ...she shockingly look him seeing his anger she thanked god because her mom is out for shopping n paridhi went to college.

Speak up damn it ...he shouted. she move back in fear.

I don't ...She try to tell him the reason.

Don't you dare lie to me ...he pulled her to himself rudely in anger.

My mom ask what I don't like about you so I ...she try to told him tears fell from her eyes.

she remember how yesterday her mom shobha ask her what she like n dislike about Maan so Geet told her that he drink too much and shobha without saying anything broke their engagement.

You are Mine...she stare his eyes when he told pushing her tears away rudely.

Do you got it only mine ...he bring her face close holding her hair.

You are hurting me...she moaned in pain. he leave her turned away kicked glass table in front of him angrily. Geet move back fearing from his increasing anger.

Please stop it ...she cry Maan look her. she is crying standing between broken glass pieces. He walk to her she try to take step back when he picked her up in his arms.

You scare me ...she cry hugging his neck. he made her sit on bed n he too sat hugging her tightly fearing to even think that someone trying to take her away from him.

he remember today morning his mom Gayatri inform him that shobha cancel their engagement. Maan ask why then she told him the reason is his drinking habit.

He can't think anything but to just meet Geet and tell her that she is just his and no one can take her away from him.
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Next day Geet wakeup when her mom come to her room.

Geet today your room look so clean how ? ...shobha asked Geet look floor. she cleaned all glass pieces after Maan leave because she don't want her mom dad to think bad about Maan.

Yes actually I did yesterday... She said again laying on bed.

Geet today we are going for shopping for your marriage...shobha told pulled bed sheet from Geet and fold it.

What marriage with whom ?...Geet asked shocked thinking if her mom dad planning to marry her with someone else.

Of course with Maan ji...shobha think her daughter asking stupid question.

Maan...Geet come out of bed stand in front of shobha.

Yes my doll...shobha said n went out of her room.

What did Maan said to maa papa so they are agree again ? ...she think then decide to meet Maan.

****************
Geet enter in Maan's cabin after knocking. she find him standing in front of window. she remember how hard this for her to make him understand that he have to work and he have to show his mom dad that he is too a Khurana man who have his own name.

What you told mom dad so they again get ready for our marriage... She walk to him n come in front of him.

I told them that I...he leave his sentence incomplete. she wait for him to confess.

You ...she ask when he is just stare her eyes n curl his hands around her waist.

I told them That I want to marry their daughter... He spoke in his husky voice. she close her eyes know he will not confess but she ask herself did she still needs those three words to know he love her.

I love ...she spoke when he put his finger on her lips.

Shuhh ...he stop her. Geet smile kiss his finger cutely. Maan too smile and pull her for a soft hug. Maan remember yesterday evening he meet Geet parents.

Flashback...

Maan ji ...shobha surprise to see him here.

Please be seated Geet is not in home actually she went to her friend house...Shobha n Satya respectfully welcome him.

I know I'm not perfect for Geet but still please don't separate us...after some time Maan spoke. Shobha look him.

You both can't live happy together. she is too soft for a man like you. please don't take me wrong but I can't marry my daughter to a man who can't even take care of my daughter... Satya spoke hoping that he don't take him wrong.

I knew and understand what you are saying but Geet is my last happiness please don't take her away from me...shobha n Satya both look him know he is a nice person and somehow shobha feel he loves Geet truly.

Ok on one condition...Maan look her. He don't know what demand she has. Shobha looked Mr.Dubey.

Just love her like this only ...Satya said. Maan smile happily touch both of their feet. They blessed him wholeheartedly.
******************
After one month of Maan Geet marriage...

Jaanu where are you ?...Geet spoke on call still laying on bed. she call him when she not find him beside her, when she wakeup.

I'm on my way to Mumbai ...He knew she don't like when he is away from her.

Why ? ...she scream in shock. he roll eyes on her reaction.

Jaan you yourself fix my this meeting remember ...Maan remind her. Then only she remember she did two days back because Maan is still not ready to come out of his honeymoon mood.

Yeah I did...she made a puppy face regretting it.

Hmm now please don't make those puppy faces okay ...he teased her.

Our Jaan missing you so much ...She spoke spread out her hands showing how much she is missing him. Maan laughed on the other side of cell. He knew her too well.

I miss you too and my baby Aayu ...he told. Geet smile closing her eyes touch her flat tummy. She was so much happy when 15 day back she get that she is pregnant. She told Maan n he expressed his overwhelmed happiness by giving name to their baby.
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After two days...

Maan come from Mumbai and first thing he saw his Geet playing in rain in their bedroom balcony. he walked to her forgetting all his tiredness. Geet turn and see Maan there.

Jaanu when you come...she ask in happiness hugging him.

When you are busy playing in rain...he spoke all lost in her wet look, then only Geet notice herself. she is all wet with rain and did wet him too by hugging him.

Sorry ...She move back shying when Maan hold her hand and pulled her back into his arms.

I too want to play in rain ...she look his dark eyes.

Rain ...she whisper. Maan move his fingers into her wet hair.

You love my hair ...he nodded yes. his fingers stop where her long, silky, black hair end on her waist. He pick her up and come into bathroom.

You need to change now...he spoke. she look him naughtily.

You too can change ...she pulled him inside.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice OS dear
Loved it!!
Geet came across maan whilst staying in a hotel .
Geet was scared witnessing maan's demeanor towards her. He just wanted geet to be cordial with him instead of fearing him like others do. Geet realised that Maan is her fiancee who didn't appear on their engagement day vowing to his disinterest and the person he was. Their love increased with time and geet could relate to his behavior better and they never needed words to confess their love for each other and could understand it by their gestures.
Maan's love for Geet convinced geet's parents for their Marriage and were blessed with Aayu in their life
filled with love and warmth for each other.
Sometimes it's not necessary to say I love you , your warmth and gestures reflects ur feelings better and conveys ur heart's message to ur beloved one.
Beautiful ending dear
Thanks for the pm !
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Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago
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Apt title and lovely banner dear
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Originally posted by: anu5

Nice OS dear

Loved it!!
Geet came across maan whilst staying in a hotel .
Geet was scared witnessing maan's demeanor towards her. He just wanted geet to be cordial with him instead of fearing him like others do. Geet realised that Maan is her fiancee who didn't appear on their engagement day vowing to his disinterest and the person he was. Their love increased with time and geet could relate to his behavior better and they never needed words to confess their love for each other and could understand it by their gestures.
Maan's love for Geet convinced geet's parents for their Marriage and were blessed with Aayu in their life
filled with love and warmth for each other.
Sometimes it's not necessary to say I love you , your warmth and gestures reflects ur feelings better and conveys ur heart's message to ur beloved one.
Beautiful ending dear
Thanks for the pm !
:))

Thank you so much dear 😳I'm happy that you love this os 😃
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Originally posted by: anu5

Apt title and lovely banner dear

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Thankuu dear😊
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Beautiful cute os.

So Geet is Maan's fiance who Meets him for the first time at a hotel and Maan being his aloof self didn't attend his own engagement lol!
Geet gets to about who Maan is later.
They fall in love and gets married however Maan was betrayed by some girl named ishita.
Geet is pregnant and Maaneet are expecting. Their love bloomed without words so yeah nice title.

Thank you for this short and sweet OS.

Thanks for the Pm
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congrats for new story
beautiful update
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

congrats for new story

beautiful update

Thankuu dear😊
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Thankuu dear😊
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Thankuu dear😳

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