(MG-OS) AT TEA HOUSE-IV LAST PART/PG 39 (July 16th'2K17)

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custodian75

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

What fireworks. You could literally feel the heat. Geet is under some misunderstanding. Waiting for her reaction when the misunderstanding cleared.

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Akku

@akkub.92

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Awesome concept...maaneet as rival waiting to read more

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Priya21

@priya_21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

rival based OS

good concept

and am waiting more

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Leenu

@Blossom_29

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

very interesting story maaneet are rivals
where Dev and meera love each other
both are high on their attitude
loving the update
can't wait for next

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

interesting very interesting start...

geet had a crush on maan...wonder who and why this MU was created btwn maneet...

waiting for nxt part...

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

tea house belongs to man

if not hot tea she sure is too dam hot temper wise 😆😆

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Jayeeta Paul

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Congrats 4 new story dr...🥳...

lovely start...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Geet is so irritating...😡...why she doesn't find the truth first...😒...Dev is such a fool to take such a drastic step for a girl...😲...Maan is right to yell at him for his foolishness...👏👏👏...so Dev has fallen in love with Maan's rival Geet's sister...😛😆...Maan refuses at first but for his brother he agrees..😎...Geet comes to his office to meet him and just accuses him for no reasons...😡...don't like this Geet...😒...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...

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saf24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Loving the start of this one. I like the intensity of the rivalry between both and the way Geet lets it slip that she had a crush on him at one point in time. I also liked that she left him surprised when she just walked out after their meeting. Fantastic job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Fourth in the series and totally different one again. Loving it.

Started as a professional fight and going on to college days. Geet confessed so easily. Waiting to see what actually happened during farewell like Maan.