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Priya21

@priya_21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

good start

and banner is also nice

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Nice start 👍🏼

A girl is being abused by the people who adopted her

Maan is trying to find his sister... Hmmm

Geet can't be his sister... Will wait for the story to move ahead 😊

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nibi_suchi

@nibi_suchi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Something totally different.
Would love to read more..
Maan saw geet but couldn't recognise and after seeing her pic he was determined to find her.
Really intrigued by this concept..

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Awesome part ..
Maan searching for his sis and she is none other than Geet ??
I hope he is searching for some other Geet not this one ..
Warna love story kaise badegi aage ??

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

awesome start!

but I seriously cannot see maan as geet's brother...LOL! even if it's a lie

cont soon

thanku 4 the pm

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

A very good start to an intriguing storyline. God poor Geet what kind of torture is she suffering over there in the hands of that abuser? How can the family so cruelly let Geet be abused & tortured? I wish Maan would just kill him:):):) Geet managed to escape from there so that she can run away. Maan feels a connection to Geet & wants to save her...too bad Yash came at that & missed her. I am very sure that Geet is not his Sister...how can it be possible yaar:):):) That is the beautiful lie I guess :):):)

Edited by Nefret19 - 8 years ago

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

wow lovely omg shocking update..te way my maaneet ki entry was rocking,geet was been tortured by her adopted family and other side my maan searching his sister and both talking with they family pics.. omg my maaneet ki meet and geet asking my maan to kidnap but shocked wen my maan said geet is his sister,omg i fainted.. i love te update yar

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Wonderful concept. First part was intriguing. The girl who is suffering at the hands of her so called brother is apparently Maan's sister and her name is Geet. It's different. There must be some solid reason why Maan's uncle doesn't want him to come and look for her. Maan missed her by a whisker. Superb. Loved it. Will wait for next.

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drrose31

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Congozz on new story dear ...

prologue nice...

ch sk...i would say its gonna make me confused... 😆

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drrose31

@drrose31

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

part 1

Well, i never had thought to read something like maaneet being siblings,which ch sk already has given away ...but, reading this part, i liked it ...😆

so maan in search of his sister who is being adopted and abused by her brother... poor her...

geet escaped from there and right bumped on her bro...

both exchanged words and she left, only then maan realized who she was ...

thanks for pms sweets