A Fight for my daughter....Part 13 coming up.22dec/2019 - Page 56

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi
Have read all the parts in a go 😊
I wonder why havn't i come across this wonderful story before ?
Spendid concept dear hats off to it 👏
U have penned each and every character emotions so well.
Its so sad that maansi has to go through so much at such a tender age yet she is strong enough and a fighter 👏
Must say what courage and a positive spirit that she possess.
On the other hand is rahul who is trying his level best to be a father to his lil sis and is thinking he din't fulfil his responsibility well.
What so ever geet has done is a past and she really is repenting for the same.
She has single handedly managed her kids and tought them nice values 😊
Maan is the one who suffered so much its really tough for him to forget his past and forgive geet.
Aww maan got to meet his kids but in what circumstance. He would not have thought this in his wildest dreams.
He even read maansi's diary. He is so imotional at the moment.
Lets see how would maansi proceed and react now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice teaser dear.
Very curious to know what would maan do now.
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Geet accept what she did and gulity herself separate her kids from maan.rahul can't her mom crying maan heard all conversation still maansi didn't talk anyone.maan knows how his daughter suffered from childhood yo till now waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
it's emotional pt
geet now feeling more guilty
rahul brought bf fr hr mom
bz he knows hr she didn't have
anything and no one either asked hr
geet breaking down bit by bit in hr guilty but
hr son can't see his mom like that he make hr understand hr mansi's situation maan heard
mother son conversation secretly but left without saying anything they make mansi eat some bites and than again she slept without saying anything maan get emotional while reading mansi's dairies but reading last entry he want to know whom she talking about and rahul must b knowing bz they filed the case before to bz mansi wrote it in hr diary he came back
yash going to attend mansi first session
and soon maan usse ki plastic surgery k liye mansi ko mana ley ga
geet mom dad is alive but they r angry from their daughter's hope this time maan give chance to their relations fr sake of children but after meeta confession he will think wat game played against them
meera geet's real sis or cousin

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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice update
rahul not able to see geet in guilt
maan become very emotional after reading dairies of manasi

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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks 4 da pm! terrific update! well written! Rahul wants 2 punish the culprits! Rahul sad seeing his mom like that! Maan reads Maansi's diary! he is emotional! Maan wants 2 know who is after Maansi! who is Yash is gng 2 treat Maansi! update soon! lovely teaser! sorry 4 late likes n comments
Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice tsr
maan say yes to rahul bz first time rahul demanding something as father he can't ignore it whether it difficult or easy fr him his priority is his children now
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks you for updating for us. Please send me password for 11 and 12. Thanks!!
Edited by Nav2010 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update geet now feeling more guilty rahul brought bf fr hr mom bz he knows hr she didn't have mansi wrote it in hr diary he came back
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Posted: 8 years ago
intriguing story
Geet is too foolish to let her kids suffer
she did a mistake by hurting Maan
but she is doing a greater one by hurting her kids
even when Mansi had face worst she didn't seek for his help
Maan is a fool to he knows he has kids n he let them go just bcoz his wife was stubborn
in their game of ego their kids r d 1 suffering

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