Ok So again read chapter 33 but this time I was little nervous and tensed as your warning was running in my mind
The 1st portion Where you were Describing the surroundings and about the atmosphere of season also I really Like that part... Whenever Any Writer Write like this I mean Their environment it help me to feel more for them... And you are one of them Who write everything so beautifully
Playing hide and seek with sun...I've done that but..In all this I was missing one person very badly... Mr.Maan then got to know he didn't come with them and will join latter...They start to play... But geet thought of Maan and about his likes and dislikes... Well will she any soon realize the change that has come in her...I don't think that will happen cause feel like she gonna hurt Maan very badly.. Again your another zone and prologue is troubling me...
Who is calling geet and why was she tensed for that?? And then he came... From the start of this part I was feeling some thing is missing but with his Entering got to know it was him whom I was missing... My sensible Mr.Khurana **hides face**
When I read the line that Maan is walking towards to join them...A smile was playing in my lips it feels like I'm meeting him after ages...huh...me and my feelings are just impossible for this Man
Ana and Kabir totally tired after eating good Now I'll get some more amazing conversation between Maan and geet
The special thing was walking with each other at same time...one thing that shocked me From their talk Maan and getting bore from meeting...it was really difficult to believe if we thought of earlier Mr.Monster Khurana And After hearing the discussion oops correction reading
I had the urge to call Geet as Ms.Sensible I call Maan already Mr.Sensible... It will be good na...wait how about Mr.And Mrs.Sensible ???What do you think Aishwariya Kawaiii sis do let me know
I think that will be best writing this I got some memory of Muskan di's story ohh The puchki and mistimia where in club they both introduced each other as Mr. and Mrs. Stranger.. Did you read that story?
Ohh the rain scene And weeping Willows we got again Was a good chapter but those thing you have written in last not giving me any peace... I know sad moments are coming but we can have same time few happy moments right???
When I read 1st time this chapter I was in more thoughts but only these were present now in my mind when I'm here to write this... Waiting for next part 😊😊😊
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