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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Sonia..
Thanks for pm..
Maan was so broken and helpless,dadi was helping without her son notice..
Why maan dad was soo mean and ignorant to Maan .
Geet feels attached and attracted towards maan..
Nice
Willb waiting

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Geet shows such curiosity in the stranger but she also notice though the man does not talk he is well build well dressed and also has money he isno beggar

Maan as a young adult his father dictated what he should do and wanted Maan to marry so his fathers business can prosper and when Maan rejected his father threw him out as if he is no one , the saddest part was that he had nothing and nobody on his side but it also seems like he made either a grave mistake or committed some crime

something that has probably made him the person he is at present as he waits for someone so maybe he wronged someone

Maan's character is so mysterious , waiting for next chapter

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lakshmisalvadi

@lakshmisalvadi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Nice update

Geet wants to know more about Maan. Maan is quite older than Geet n zindagi se hatash hai. Very interesting story. Dady always there for Maan n dadies beta mean. Would want to know more about Maan dear. Thanks fr new concept

Lakshmi

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Tune Kya Kar Daala

Marr Gayi Mai Mit Gayi Mai

Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago

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@simi91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Congrats dear

Lovely & fascinating both parts

Wow Geet obedient child & know her dad grieve for his home we without fuss accept the new place

Great Geet thinking about the stranger

Love it

Thanks

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

maan k aise halat...kya usne kabhi geet se mila tha...kya kiya usne...kyun hai woh aisa?...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Awesome update
Geet is curious to know about the stranger
Isliye wo pinky ko kehti hai ki wo khudh ghar chali jaygi aur wo maan ko stalk karne lagti hai
Geet and maan dono ek hi bus pakdte hai but maan next stop par uttar jata hai
Geet mehsush karti hai ki stalker ajnabi nahi balki apna sa lagta hai
Maan's past was very painful
Why his dad is doing this to him may be ki usne apne dad ki pasand ki ladki se ussne marriage karne se inkaar kar diya ho
But his daadi ma is helping him
Beautifully written 🤗

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umaa

@uluvmg

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Congrats on the new story.. with super intriguing..Prologue is Captivating...👏
part 1 geet was living in small village of HP with her parents & a sis... one day her father got transferred to big city where she completed her education in B.Ed & got teaching job... but her father wanted to be live in his own land so he got chance to his land in HP... geet also got job in her school only where she met her friend pinky...one day both went to eat samosas she came to know about a stranger who full day ordered tea & samosas... when both went there pinky called him psycho but geet denied it to see his tears...!!

part 2 geet followed the stranger...he got in the bus which geet got in...to see him near her hearts bits were rising fast.. he got off & went to a big house where he welcomed by an old man called mohan chachaji by stranger as maan none other than actual heir to Khurana Empire.. Onee of richest clan in whole country..owner of Khurana Construction....when chachaji asked why he didn't eat food & was playing with his life...then he was in past days when he was young with lots of dream but his father who was gambler,womanizer forcefully asked him to join his co. & to marry a girl for money...when maan refused it he throw him on road & also blocked his & family's account... maan canada returned had no moeny & no job then chachaji asked by dadima saved him rom his father & now he was working in the shop..excited for the crime committed by maan to leave his business.. !!