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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#331

Great part... Maan experiencing new things... Loved it... Waiting for next part... Wonderful update:)

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#332

Maan's mom is gonna be shocked with the changes in Maan after marriage. Geet has called Maan to act as her hubby in front of her so called family. But why is she going to her native now.

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@Endgame

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#333

Just noticed i was first :-)

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#334

It's beautiful and thrilling FF

I ask loving every part of it.
It's amazing.

I love the vacaboulary first ly..
And good detailing that you do... Its very pleasing.

Coming to story,
I love Maan for sure... He is such a child...
His mother is definitely a master piece... 😆

I am really amazed to see how the marriage took place...
😲
It's very un believable...

Your story is very interesting and really fantasy types...
I am thoroughly enjoying ...

Also I need to mention ... The title itself is very attractive...

The update ... Its do good...
I loved every details.

The cobra wala was so very hilarious... 👏 😆

Geet us superb 👏

Good job ⭐️

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#335

superb update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Geet asked for Maan's help and took him to a journey on a bus to her hometown that also as her hubby...👏👏👏...Maan thoroughly enjoyed the journey with Geet offering him delicious food...😎...Geet blushing on Maan's compliment on her...😛😉...can't wait 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...

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mardej

@marde

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#336

Nice part dear

Update soon

Waiting eagerly

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#337

Thank you to all those who have come forward to express your feelings about this story. I truly appreciate it. 🤗

As many of you have noticed this story is somewhat unusual. Let me inform you that I didn't write this as an FF based on Maaneet. I wrote it as an independent story. Hence you can see the characterizations don't match Maaneet and the situations are close to real life 😊

Also this story has been published. You can actually buy it on Amazon.

I'm posting it here because I enjoy reading your comments and reactions.

I was hoping for some more comments before posting the next update. Maybe I should wait some more??😕

PS: Not to worry. This story does have a happy ending. I was just saying that right now you won't be able to predict how it ends :)

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@Endgame

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#338

Hey di enjoying this story fullest.. Till now my fav character is Geet she is so different and totally mystery ..good to hear it will be a happy ending:-)..p.s An Incurable Insanity will always my fav..lets see if this story can beat that

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vidyaniru

@vidyaniru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#339

Loved this part! Geet sent one text and Maan went running. He is so intrigued by her, that he cannot stop himself from going with the flow. And of course he wanted to escape from his family!

But taking a US brought up guy, that too a finicky one like Maan, in an Indian public bus! Geet is pushing his limits, but Geet knows he'll be a sport! She's taking him to her home town as her husband. What agenda does she have? Maan is proving to be really naive. He should at least ask her what her intention is!! He got duped once, but he hasn't learnt his lesson. He just seems to blindly believe this girl, and he doesn't know why! Maan's eternally pragmatic intellect has deserted him totally!!

Geet seems to be having some bad past with her family, andn they are probably forcing her into something. And she just wants to use this opportunity to get them off her back, I guess.

But really waiting to see what happens next. I love your writing style. Really like your metaphors and dry humor. Totally enjoying this story.