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abazehere

@abazehere

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Posted: 8 years ago

#501

Ch-13

Oh no...Tara wants to go home.Earlier also family of Tara(distant uncle)was not treating her well and now Tara is not in the position to face humiliation once again. But loved the way Dev was making effort to convince Tara. Of course we fear more from our daily guest like spiders and cockroach rather than rare guest like lions and bears!!!

Maan and Maan's dream...what to say. Poor Maan...he doesn't even know why he's so attracted towards Geet. Jitna dur jaane ki sochta hai utna apne aapko uske paas paata hai. Geet plz talk to Nakul. Maan you can never resist Geet so don't even try. Try different ways to get answers from Geet.

Awesomely written.loved it thoroughly.

Precap very interesting...

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#502

Ch 13
Tara trying to run away but Dev wouldn't let her
He very sweetly scares her with cokroach
Tara
Fearful runs inside with Dev's promise
That he will take her to her home
Here
Maan babu dreaming the wildest dreams ever
Tip tip barsa pani
Aur
Aankh khulne par
Sapne sach huye
Glimpse of nymph
Mermaid
Jalpari
Beautiful romance
With beautifully written love scenes
Khoobsurat lafz bhi chhota hai taarif ke liye
Outstanding narrative

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#503

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! well written! Dev assures Tara! Feeling 4 Tara! she has suffered so much! Maan dreaming again abt Geet! hot dream! Maan berates himself! Maan admires Geet! she wants 2 get to the truth n get his memory back! Geet teases Maan! he thoughts well portrayed! superb precap! update soon

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@_CrystalFlames_

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#504

Awesome part...
OMG! Dev gonna take her home...
Dunno how her relatives will behave..
Loved Maaneet moments...
Precap is interesting...

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SGAYATRI

@SGAYATRI

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#505

Dev making Tara understand about her lifes value but she want to go back to her house. Dev promising her to leave her in the morning but Tara doesn't listen it was hilarious he tried to make her scared form animals but when he told about cockroch she flex away .Maan trying to find more from Geet he has promised he will avoid Geet

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
No reply to me 😭
Okay 😲

RES !!

edited

FAB Update Avi ji 😉
Aww love that scene dev trying to stop Tara to go somewhere,, and her fear if cockroaches n spiders 😆
She wants to go home.. that leacher brij's house 😡 😲
Oiii maa,, that dream of Maan, love those gifs,, totally love ❤️ 😳
Tip Tip Barsa Pani,,, Maan ke man me aag laga di 😉 😳
Now geet won't leave him that easily,, Lil tease geet..
Waiting for next.. Precap is interesting
Cont Soon

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#507

Thanks for the likes and comments 😃

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#508

Chapter 13 parhne me do din lag gaye daddy's not well.. Thoda sa..

Anyway WAITING 😉

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#509

Part 13

I would say

Tiger say dar nahi lagta dev babu

Cockroach saylagta hai ;)

Hehehehe

Awesome dewsome update

Maan geet ksapney dekhta hai but he can't tell her

Geet maan par drool kar rahi hai she also can not tell hi

Him ko bus dekhna hai kon kisi say pehley bole ga

Oppps we lagata hai possessive Dr khurana ki Bari hai

Sorry this time am late

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#510

Awesome part ..
Dev supporting tara and somewhere helping her in coming out of that trauma ..
Maan getting flashes of their past and thinking them as his dream ..

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