O Saathi Re rewritten COMPLETED - Page 48

Originally posted by: mayyo

Chapter 11:

And the pain is back again... but I'm glad Geet was around this time to give Tara the shoulder she needed the most.

Although Maan being a man of actions and not words is a good thing but there is always a point where words are more soothing, more healing that actions are. I hope he knows the trick or he learns it soon enough.

Maan is going to ask Geet to go to the camp, right? In place of the doctor who couldn't make it.. I don't know if having Geet out of Tara's range would be a good idea or not.

It was absolutely disgusting, the way the policemen questioned Tara and Dev in the name of filing a report. It is really pitiful of our society to have such menaces amongst us. Instead of living up to the promise of support and help, the policemen take the dirty path down. Totally unacceptable! But can we really blame the policemen here? It is the thinking of our society where we tend to blame the victim for the crime committed with her. Or, like they've done with Dev, they drag the one who helps, into a swamp of problems. Nobody even cares to think what the victim must already be going through in her mind, what her feelings might be, how broken she could be. It is the sad reality of our life.

A question. Earlier Tara says she wants to go home. Which home exactly is that? The hostel or her uncle's place?

Maan being there in time was a blessing, indeed. I couldn't possibly waver my mind off the girl who committed suicide because the world couldn't treat her well...

And Maan's own memories swirl back. Did Maan forget these moments too? Of Kiran and Raj when they were washed away by the stream?

I am glad there was at least on honest officer, the commissioner, to treat his subordinates a good lesson. We need more of them in the world.

A huge tragedy had been averted indeed. Can't really question Geet's nervousness or fear, nor Maan's blankness. But the outcome of it was beautiful, without a doubt. It's true that when one feels they've lost someone, or when someone comes very close to the brink of losing someone, their emotions can not be reined in. They flow freely then, and you realise what you really feel... Maan's heart can sense what Geet is feeling and his heart is also feeling the same but the kind refuses yet. Surely, with time, he'll come to know why his heart is drawn towards Geet so strongly.

And that dialogue is one of my favourites too. ❤️

Avi, without any exaggeration, this update was one of the most wonderfully depicted ones. It felt like I was in the story instead of reading it. I could feel all the emotions in this chapter, rage, helplessness, fear, loss...everything. Hats off to you for penning this one down!👏

Originally posted by: ArchanaRoy

Awesome update

Maaneet❤️

AWW lovee maaneet moments sooo muccchh and their passoinate hug heeyyyeee dreammyy❤️ !!

Maan is struggling and puzzled with his feeling

still he consoled geet who was hell scared for him

he feeling different with her closnes and he not able to pin point

it why??? he was like is he with her before he wanted to know whether

it was truth but geet avoid him as usually ran away from

there without answering him but this time maan wanted answers

and he won't let her go easily 👏...

now geet realization he dont forget her intentionally

thank god that she got to know that he s suffering from ML now she

try to find out more n try to know about his life after her

departure 😎...

Dev

he was really worried about tara n blaming himself for hurting her..

but geet told him he did good thing by bringing tata here

as she has no one to take care of her and made him understand

it wasn't his fault...

waiting for next

<font color="#ff0000">Special Mention</font>

<font color="#ff0000">and and here come like a knight in shining armor Nakul</font>

<font color="#ff0000">mein bhi sochu Avi k story or nakul na ho ye toh ho he nahi</font>

<font color="#ff0000">sakta😆 .. ooohhh u knew that we miss Maan n Nakul's Eternal Love🤣🤣...</font>

<font color="#ff0000">oohh Locket k Maan n nakul epic clash🤣</font>

Originally posted by: hira2010

Part 12 was really amazingly written

It had maan confusion and questions about why he attract to her

And geet complaint how could he forget about her when he promised her he will Wait

Dev he was worried about his action

And after that he told her maan previous injury

Geet want to know more

Here are nakul came

Originally posted by: mayyo

How would it feel if you love someone with all your heart, and they have loved you back once, but now act all strange? I'm sure it's not a feeling one can easily digest. I feel bad for Geet. Not knowing he had been in an accident and going through the agony of him having conveniently forgotten her, must be tough to deal with. But really, did she not even consider that something like memory loss could've happened. Well, still not her to blame.

And I feel bad for Maan too. The confusions between the heart and mind is a tough battle for him too. His heart knows him hugging her is the most natural thing, his body knows her place is in his arms, but how to convince the mind without hurting Geet in the process!

Dev, here, is a gem of a person. I haven't really said it before too much, but I really enjoy reading Dev Tara in your stories. Dev more than Tara. Probably because I so wished that Dev had been positive in the show. Abhinav Shukla, that is.

I'm glad though, that Geet now knows Maan hadn't forgotten her of his own free will. It'll be interesting to see what she does to make him restore his forgotten memories.

I do have a confusion here. Raj and Kiran were going back from Madhavpur when they met tragedy, right? And they had come to Madhavpur for the wedding where Maan introduces them to Geet. Correct me if I'm wrong. And you said they didn't meet the accident when they came back after meeting Geet. I don't know if I'm making sense anymore. Gah!

Maybe I should just wait it out until the story plays itself.

Thanks for updating. And thanks so much for putting up with my irregular appearances. You have no idea how grateful I'm that you let me read the only story I come to IF for now.

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Ye bhi 😆

Destructive Love

Originally posted by: dqno1

ye nahi padhi hai maine 😃 TFS Sheen 🤗 aaj kal likhne ka ya padhne ka time nahi mil raha hai but I will bookmark it 😃