MG FF- Riyasat- Part 19-Page 66-29/05/2018 - Page 18

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the pm 😊. Update soon. Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very Intriguing and interesting update buddy
The mystery surrounding Maan's dad's death
Now this ...why is his chachu lying to Geet
Thankfully Geet met Maan
cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
maan is confused with tejs behavior
geet called maan
he didnt pick up
so she called ll
n tej s answer made her que him back
she kind of guessed something fishy
he trembled with the way she talked
she informed maan too to not say about her
she came to meet maan
security n his chachu tried to stop her
but maan came at time
are they behind maans money n properties
lets see how geet n maan comes across the truth
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice part
tej is so arggghhh
geet wants to meet maan
i think geet have doubt
cont soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
this maan's chacha is a villain i guess he is the one who is scaring everyone away and he is the one who is responsible for maan's misery.. why did he say when geet called that there is no one here by name .. he is strange
i am glad that geet thought abt maan and is meeting him .. hopefully she finds out and helps maan abt Tej..
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Posted: 8 years ago

WOW!! Beautiful update...

loved it dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Geet wanted to meet maan
Tej said there is no one by this name😡... Hearing geet's reply he started sweating 😆
Maaneet convo nice
Guard not allowing geet inside... Thank god Maan came there
Will Maaneet be able to find out what tej has done
Sorry for the late comment 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

RIYASAT


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Recap

Geet: teek kai...koi baat nahi mein Maan ko call karungi ...saying that she started searching phone in her bag

The person got scared and was trying to stop her at the same time Maan came out talking on his phone and saw Geet near gate. He immediately disconnected the call and rushed towards Geet and said "I am waiting for you inside and what are you doing here?"

Geet looked at the person and security guard sharply and pointing fingers towards them said "if these people allow me to come in then I can enter right?"

Maan glared at security guard and looked at the person and said "why you did not allow Geet inside chachu?"

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Part-6


Tej looked at Maan face and wondered why Maan was angry for this mere girl?' and said "aisa kuch nahi hai Maan, just wondered who she is that all...has this is the first time someone came here asking for you so we were cross checking for your safety"


Geet was boiling listening to Tej and said "I can understand your concern sir, instead of saying there is no one by name Maan resides here you would have asked my name and informed Maan whether he wants to meet me or not, then you would have known about our relationship...please tell your workers to get full information of the visitors before giving wrong information"


Tej and SG looked at Geet angrily but Geet cared dam and said "Maan why did you lie to me AE is yours?


Maan: what??? I did not lie to you? It is my Estate and it's in my name


Geet: really? When I called here a person said AE belongs to him and you are not residing here...aise log ko kaam se nikalna chahiye Maan...how dare they are? Raj Singh Khurana ka beta se punga lena ka himmat kiya hai


Maan looked at her in surprise...Tej glared at Geet and understood she is the one who called and fooled him...but Geet cared less. Tej with sugar coated voice said "may be our workers thought you are troubling their chote saab so they might have done that"


Geet: how can they talk like that Mr.Khurana without knowing about the person or they are doing because they boss said them to do so...as far as I know Maan he won't do that...may be you????


But Tej interrupted her and said "dare you talk to me like this...then he looked at Maan and asked "what is this Maan, your friend is insulting me in front of you and you are not saying anything...looking at Geet top to bottom your friends were from high society how did you make friend with low class people like this


Maan roared in anger and said Chachu??? But Geet hold his hand and said "I am from low class only Mr Khurana but I am far better then you...you will get to know about me later no need to worry...you can't shut your real face for long"


Tej stomped his foot and went inside glaring at Maan and Geet...SG glared at her and went to his place...Maan rubbed his forehead and looked at Geet apologetically and said "Sorry Geet hai sub mere wajah se hua...if I responded to your call then these misunderstanding wouldn't have happened...pata nahi hey sab kya ho..." but Geet interrupted him in middle and said "itne dur se tume milne ke liye hayee hoon...instead of inviting me inside you are making me stand in front of gate like this"


Maan: sorry Geet...come let's go inside


Geet: hello...mera bag toh le lo yaar...I am already tired


Maan shook his head and took her bag in his hand but Geet made in to keep bag down and pointing towards SG said "why are you paying for them...let him carry my bag inside" Maan then called SG and informed him to keep bag in guest room...SG looked at Geet in anger and took her bag inside and Geet smirked looking at him and then said "I am sorry Maan, I know mein ne todha over react kiya hai...but what to do when I see these kind of people I lose my control...agar mera wajah se aapko taqleef hui toh I am really sorry for that"


Maan nodding his head said "no Geet...you no need to ask sorry with me, actually everything changed here and everything is mystery"


Geet: kya hua Maan? You can tell me


Maan: come let's go inside you take rest for few minutes then I will tell you


Geet: nahi Maan before its getting dark I should go back...so no need of rest...you can share anything with me


Maan: what??? You are going back? No way... I am not sending you today; you are staying with me I will show you AE. People never used to miss this chance...come


Saying this he forcefully pulled her inside in house...Geet looked at his house curiously, meantime Maan informed Nakul to serve food for Geet and here she saw Raj photo with garland...tears were flowing out of her eyes, she looked around and wiped her tears immediately...Maan joined her and they both had lunch together and then Maan informed Geet to freshen up and showed her guest room...Geet went quietly inside and got freshen up and combed her hair and came out



Maan was looking at her without blinking his eyes she was looking like fresh flower...Geet came near him and asked "what happened?"


Maan: nothing Geet...you are looking very beautiful


Geet: thanks Maan...now can we go out


Maan was shocked with her response he thought she will blush and will get shy but here she took it very lightly...Geet looked at Maan's confused face and said "Mr dreamy...sapne badh mein dekhna...chalo chalte hai...I am very eager to see Avantika"


Maan shook his head after they went out two eyes was spitting fire...Tej hated Maan's closeness with the girl who insulted him and dare to fool him...he wanted to take revenge from her but did not want to make his dream more complicated


Maan and Geet walked few distance and first took her to the flower garden








It was looking like heaven on the earth...different types and colors flowers...which was showing like rainbow...god in his free time created a magic on his earth lot of colors Geet forgot herself in this serene beauty...there was peace in the air...when came out of thought when she heard Maan asking her "kya hua...itna chup kyun ho gayi ho?"


Geet: what a magic Maan...such mein pheli baar dekh rahi hoon magical world...apne aap ko kone ka mann kar rahi hai...zindagi mien aur kuch nahi chahiye


Maan was not surprised with this because everyone praised this garden...he had seen many of them going crazy over this...he hold Geet's hand and made her sit on the stone bench and sat next to her and said "Mom was very fond of flowers, she wanted all types of flowers and I heard by Dad that she used to fight with him if any of the plant die... they both used to take care and appointed few staff for taking care of garden only...there was lot of demand for flowers...it was her passion and she started doing business when most of their friends insisted and today we are exporting this flowers worldwide"


Geet: it's good to hear Maan...there is peace in this garden


Maan: I will show you other place which was fond of my Mom and Dad...they used to spend most of the time there...par aab sab kuch badal raha hai


Geet: ohh sorry Maan, you wanted to talk to me, I diverted your mind to something else


Maan: its ok Geet...no need to ask sorry, I can understand your feelings


Geet: who sab chodiye...phele hey bataye aapko mujhse kya baat karna hai?


Maan; Pata nahi Geet kahan se shuru karoo...hey sab bahut ajeeb lag raha hai


Geet: Maan tell me what are you feeling now then we can find solution, I dunno whether I can able to give you best suggestions but I will try my best


Maan: I told you already about my job, dream and coming and settling here (to which Geet nodded her head then Maan continued saying) "Actually I was surprised when my father did not come to receive from railway station...this is was the first time he was not there, he never missed it...I used to share everything with him but I was shocked when I came here to see my Dad photo with garland...I passed out, then chachu said they tried to inform me and they came to know that I was flying to London so they sent telegram for me...they didn't know about my arrival so they buried and I am so unlucky person Geet I didn't get to do last rights for him. He punished me for leaving AE (he was crying furiously...Geet took water bottle from her bag and tissue paper then forwarded it to Maan...Maan wiped his tears and drank some water and then continued) mera estate mujhe ajnabi feel kara rahi hai Geet...no workers are allowed to talk to me, if I personally asked none answered...I feel like they are looking me has a culprit...I killed my father with my negligence"


Geet felt bad for him and said "Maan agar aapko teek lage toh kya aap mera kuch sawalonka jawab denge? If you trust me enough you can give correct answer then I can help you."


To which Maan nodded his head then Geet said "instead of blaming yourself first you should go to the depth of the situation and find out the reason for Raj uncle's death"


Maan looked at her in surprise and asked "do you know my father, the way you take his name proudly and the way express him as uncle I feel that you know him personally...please Geet tell me whether I am correct in judging you?"


Geet looked at him in serious and asked "Maan I dunno anything about your father, I just heard about him when I gone for interview that's all...now I want you to answer my questions and not asking with me ok?"


To which Maan nodded his head like obedient student

Mystery continues...

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Posted: 8 years ago
awsm
i lovd it
thanxx for the p.m
conti soonish

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