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Suddh Desi Love

"Some Old- Fashioned things like Fresh Air & Sunshine are hard to beat ."
Introduction ..

It's a very common tendency that ppl from big city or who moves in high society doesn't think nd look good at villagers nd small town ppl ,, they treat them low nd backward as compare to them , though they r more rooted nd simple heart than city ppl ,, what'll happen if a rich nd arrogant boy from Delhi forced to marry a simple village girl ...

Small town girls have big hearts with small town values . They are forever loyal to their family , friends nd roots . Small town girls keep their feet planted firmly on the ground no matter where they end up .
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Part - 30

Next mrng V left early with his friends nd then Maan too came down with his packed bag ,, he informed DM that he too left for camping after office ,nd going by his Jeep not with his Merc ,, A didn't have any big plan ,, she wanted to spent her time with friends in spa nd then they to wd visit fashion show by N*** students in their campus ,, DM was relieved nd went to meet Geet in OH ,, then they went to NGO where Geet spent some time with kids ,, DM felt that Geet was still upset bcoz of her college incident ,, DM's eyes went on a big photo of her NGO's kids ,, that was taken when their NGO organized a trip for kids nd took them in a fort lil away from Delhi ... Neemrana Fort , d place was away from city crowd ,a Fort in Aravalli Hills ,, she too like that royal place ,, something hit her mind ,, make a call for booking nd then called Geet .

DM: Geet beta lets go , we have to go somewhere .

Geet: where DM ?

DM: will tell u later , 1st have to go home .

Geet nd DM returned back ,,DM told Geet to pack 2-3 dresses for her in a bag nd required things for study bcoz they wr going to visit a place ,, Geet was shocked , nd DM didn't give her much time ,, DM packed her bag ,instructed nakul nd all srvnts ,nd called Geet .

Geet : DM why so sudden nd this time ?

DM: trust me u'll like that nd help in ur study work,come .

Geet: did u pack ur meds nd kit ?

DM: smiled : yes nd don't worry d place was not so far nd have med help in emergency .

Both settled in their car nd drove off ,, they was going towards Jaipur ,, it took almost 3 hrs when they reached Neemrana Fort .

It was a fort turned into a royal hotel ,, DM & Geet checked in nd hotel attendant took their bags in a family suit ..

Geet was awed seeing d beauty nd royalty of d place ,, all around hills , greenery nd between d hills this fort ,, d rooms nd deco was from that Rajasthani era ,, she peeped out from d window nd got a magnificent view ..

Then she went in balcony nd got more beautiful views from there ,, d sun was near to set nd sky was turning in red hue ,, birds wr returning to their abode nd d sound of their chirping making d atmosphere pleasant .

DM ordered tea for both nd driver went to their place which hotel provide them ,, DM nd Geet freshen up nd then enjoyed their tea watching d sunset ,, soon d whole fort illuminated with lights nd looked more beautiful ..

Geet was in good mood nd DM thought to talk her ,, she ws not only DM but a mother too ,, she knew Geet wdn't voice out her wish nd demands , so for her she had to take steps ,, how cd she left this innocent girl to bear all alone ,, if Geet was thinking for her nd her family then she had to thing for her .

DM: Geet beta ,I told u that u r more than my G children nd cn share anything to me , but u didn't , don't u trust me beta ?.

Geet hesitated : it's not like that DM , I trust nd shared everything with u .

DM : No ,u wr very tensed ystrdy ,faced a hard time in college , but u didn't tell us .

Geet nervously: DM ,V told u something ? ( she felt bad that V told DM but didn't try to talk her )

DM: yes , nd u don't have to think low , I liked how u behaved ,when u r right then why to fear ,, tell me d name of that guy , i'll make his life hell if he tried to harass u in future .

Geet: DM , in co-ed college these things cn happen for girls ,that is why I want to study in girls college .

DM:but that didn't improve ur confidence to face all type of guys ,, here u'll see d real side of boys nd girls ,, u urself cn see a differences between good nd bad students ,, though most of d students r good in study nd belong to well off families ,but all have diff nature nd thinking , nd how they behave with others ?

U wr right at ur place beta nd u saw that all supported u so why this tension ?

Geet sadly : DM all wr looking at me nd talking about me ,, what prof nd Sr think about me ? I became a matter of gossip.

DM cupped her cheek lovingly : don't think to much about it ,, none cn harm u if u r right ,, never leave ur innocence nd keep ur feet rooted on ground ,, be honest nd thankful to ur well-wishers nd give 100% to ur work ,, I m also demanding like ur darji .. make ur mark with ur ability .

Geet: I promise DM , nd thanks u don't mind what I did .

DM: why sd I , actually I enjoyed when V told me , don't bother about those crap guys ,give me that guy's name , I have to know about him .

Geet: Arjun Rathod ,, DM I made few friends in college nd all r Srs , they r very nice nd helpful ,, will u like to meet them ?

DM: of course beta anytime ,, why didn't u call them here for an outing with u ? I cn arrange for them too .

Geet smiled : i'll call them .

Then Geet told DM about K,GJ nd Jn , how they met nd starting mixing ,, how K treat her like her lil sis nd took extra care .

DM was smiling nd listening Geet talks ,, she liked that Geet was opening up with her ,, then both went to take their dinner which was organized in open air ,, Geet gave DM her tab , than they enjoy their royal dinner ...

V called DM nd informed her about their reach nd place ,, Maan went to Rishikesh bcoz he nd his friends made prog for water rafting ,, nd he was on way when he called her nd asked about her health ,nd to take care of her nd A ,, DM already told A that she was also going to spent some quality time with her close friend nd when Maan called her she told him too d same words ,, Her all G children wr busy in their lives nd didn't bother once that she cd be alone ,, she called A nd told her to go home on time nd informed nakul to take care of all .

Geet called K nd GJ to join her for outing but both excused saying that they already had some commitments , all of sudden they cdn't change that ,, but next time they wd deffo go with her , after that got busy in her study , nd started working on her proj work ,, it was d 1st proj of 1st sem ,,she wanted to do that well ,, there wr 2 more students in her competition who stood above her ,, Geet didn't want to lose her place .,, she talked to K to ask some doubts related to proj ,, DM slept after reading few pgs of her book .

Next mrng Geet nd DM take a stroll in fort ,, Geet like d place very much ,, then her eyes got a shocking view ,, it was Zipline Adventure ,, Geet showed DM too ,, both wr watching from down with wide eyes ,, young boys nd girls wr doing that ,, they wr sliding down slowly from a high hill to another hill with was lil lower , but they wr at very high place nd sliding on a rope in air .

Geet's breath stuck in throat seeing those daring girls , nd felt weak in front of them ,, in college too she was observing around her how girls faced boys with high head , roamed nd talked with them freely ,, wore jeans nd shirts like boys nd some smocked with boys too ,, few things she didn't like but few wr eye opener for her nd that was .. confidence nd their competitive thinking ,, a determination to stand on their feet ,, in her college she saw some girls wr singing nd dancing in lawn in front of students , may be a kind of ragging by Srs ,but at last they wr laughing nd students wr praising them ,, everyday she was watching nd gaining a new experience .

That day passed in peace ,rest nd study ,, Geet almost finished her proj work ,, there was wifi facility in room so to get matter from net was very helpful for her ,, d peaceful nd beautiful place refreshed her mind ,, DM was in touch with her G children through phone ,, they nd she called them after 5-6 hrs.

Next day DM booked a spa for both ,, they had massage nd relaxing bath , nd then sleep for few hrs after light lunch ,, Geet enjoyed it a lot ,, this trip brought both more close ,, both wr taking each other care ,, Sunday mrng they check out after BF ,, on d way near Delhi border they stopped for some shopping ..it was A******* Mall ,, it has everything ,, lots of famous brands thigs ,, branded household things , food places, multiplex , child zone ,etc , etc ,, ,, DM insisted geet to buy some western dresses for her like other girls , but Geet refused ,, she was not getting courage to wear them , DM bought some trendy kurties nd matching churidaars for her nd few party wear dresses like long kurtas with palazzo nd skirts ,,,, they reached home near lunch ,, DM was taking all d news of KM from Nakul so returned when A went out ,, Maan nd V wr on their ways nd hopefully wd reach at night .

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Rest of d day went well ,, DM was got busy in her work nd Geet in her study , then at night she talked to her family nd cover up DM lie with semi truth that they ( she& DM) returned back at AN,, she asked about Pummy's health , then she slept with a contented heart ,, her these 3 days went very well nd ginger up her life.

Precap --- Geet got a shock ...


Part - 31

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One side Geet was relieved that she didn't hurt DM's feelings nd escaped to lie to her family ,, other side DM was happy that Geet was fasting ,,if she didn't then it wd be an Upshagun , bcoz she was a married girl ,, she prayed to God for keeping d value of that innocent girl fast nd blessed her all d happiness ,, with happy heart she prep sargi for Geet very early in d mrng ,, called Geet to wake her nd then went to OH ,, Geet was ready ,,she touched DM feet nd thanked her for taking that much pain for her ,, DM handed her d decorated plate of Sargi,, made her sit in bed nd fed her sweet kesar Sewai with her own hand ,, then insisted Geet to eat all d things , DM left coconut water for her to drink after few min nd left ,, Geet forced her to take proper rest bcoz she knew that DM woke up very early to make all that,, bcoz of this love nd care of that elderly lady Geet bent down nd accepted to do anything for her happiness ,, her this KC fast was for her not for that Mr Attitude ,, she slept again for some time .

It was a very pleasant mrng ,,Maan wake up nd went for his regular exercise ,, he peeped in DM's room as he did everyday but that day he find DM sleeping ,, gen DM woke up at that time ,, he became tensed nd went in her room , placed his hand on her forehead to check temp ,but she was fine nd woke up with his touch .

DM: Maan ,u here , what happened ?

Maan: that I want to check , u r still in bed , r u not feeling good ?

DM tried to sit nd Maan helped her : relax , we r fine .

Maan : that's good , but let me check ur sugar to assure me .

DM: no need beta i'll do that , u r getting late for ur Gym ,go .

Maan : i'll ,, DM r u taking regular med check up ? Sorry bcoz of business I m not able to take u for check up nd told V .

DM smiled : I m taking beta , don't worry ,, I know u r a very busy person ,, have many commitments nd ur own life too ,, any way what is ur today's progrm , it's Sunday today ?

Maan checked her sugar nd gave a satisfied nod nod nd look to DM ,, kept d kit back nd sat near her on d edge of bed .

Maan : I m free today nd want to spend d day at home with V nd A , will talk to them at BF .

DM gulped hard ,, her own plan to spent time with Geet was going to flop ,, she has to think something .

Maan saw her tensed : DM what happened , don't u like my plan ?

DM fake a smile : no it's good that after age u think for this , otherwise u nd ur siblings prefer to spend d weekends with friends ,any way will talk at BF about V nd A program .

Maan : Ok , see u there .

Maan left nd DM sighed sadly ,, today she wanted her all G childern to go out so that she cd spend time with Geet nd in prep for d day , but to spoil d fun her dear G son thought to be with her , but why he was not going anywhere ? even last weekend too he spend his all day locked in his study ,why this change ?

D whole khurana family gathered at BF table nd wished each other , as usual Maan asked about V nd A's study nd Sunday plan .

A: bro ,DM , today I have planned with friends ,, we all r going to attend a party of our Sr friend who is engaged nd celebrating KC along with her newly wed bro nd bhabhi ,, they throw a party for this function , DM I m just leaving after BF ,, we all apply mehndi nd dressed up there , may be i'll stay there over night .

D words celebrating KC gave a blow to Maan ,, DM nd V looked at him nd then at each other silently ,,, Maan too observed that nd then fixed his eyes at his plate ,, he felt a void in atmosphere ,, d coldness in their relations pinched him .

DM listened but didn't react ,,Maan looked at her nd then at A ,, he realized that now a days DM wdn't try to stop them ,, she only listened nd said OK in a casual way ,, they all wr living their lives in their ways .

Maan : V u too have any plan or staying at home ?

V: sorry to say ,but me nd Meer also going for dinner .

A: aaww cool, I m sure she is keeping fast for u , right ?

V rolled his eyes : girls nd their endless demands.

A: dare u curse us .

Maan : ok leave this , d main point is that u both r going out .

DM : u too cn go Maan .

Maan: no ,I m fine at home , have work to finish .

DM: from many days u r not going out , is everything fine with ur friend circle ?

Maan : yeah , all fine nd busy in their lives .

DM: so what ,u too had ur life but u didn't corner them .

Maan : DM , not only they but I m too very busy ,so avoiding outing .

DM: oh , any way , I m also going to my frnd house ,, she invited me on her G DIL's 1st KC ,, i'll leave after lunch,, Maan beta , i'll instruct Nakul for ur dinner .

Maan nodded pasting a fake smile ,, but this word 1st KC was pinching him ,, from last 2 - 3 days he was listening this KC word in his office , from friends nd now in KM ,, he finished his BF nd left from there ,, DM sadly looked at his retreating figer , on d day of celebrating this day together at their home d whole family was scattered diff sides leaving this house in silence ,, she sighed nd mumbled .

DM: don't know when this house'll get back its lost happiness .

V nd A looked at her ,, they understood where DM was hinting ,, it was Maan & Geet's 1st KC too , but ...

DM got up nd left from there aftr her V nd A exchanged a look nd left to their respective rooms .

Maan was in his study with spoiled mood ,, he thought to spend a day with all after long but all went their ways nd sply to celebrate KC with others ,, he knew this fast is very spl for newly wed couples nd married ppl ,, it cd be spl for his family too if he nd G e... ,, damn, why I m thinking about that girl ,bcoz of her he nd his family lost d happiness ,, he looked at his parents smiling pic.

He remembered how her mom prep for this day ,, DM ordered to deco d KM ,, his dad never missed this day nd gave half day leave to all employees if it fell on a working day ,, they all celebrated together at terrace ,, how beautiful wr those days.

Maan sighed sadly nd thought.. don't know how this KM'll get back its happiness ? may be V nd A will bring bcoz he was loosing interest in girls nd married life ,, d truth of his forced marriage was not leaving him nd soured his heart,, this loneliness was better for him ,, he was happy with his files nd work .

Maan opened a file infront of him to work nd stretched his hand to pick a pen from pen holder ,but pulled back with a feeble cry .. d lil open ppr cutter cut his palm nd blood started coming out from that cut ,, Maan saw that nd some images from past started flashing in his mind ..

D day was very long nd tiring for him ,, hardly he concentrated in his work , had his lunch alone bcoz DM went to mrkt then again locked him in his study ,, d slight pain was still there in his palm ,, DM came in his room nd both took their coffee/tea together with lil business talk then she excused herself for leaving to her friend's home insisting him to take his dinner on time bcoz she cd be late nd took her dinner with them ,, Maan assured her nd DM left .

DM cdn't escape from KM so easily bcoz his G son cd find out that easily seeing her car there , so she sand her car with driver to her NGO with sweets nd snacks for d kids nd others staff ,, she told him to return when she called him ,, she left for OH nd met with Geet who was prep dishes in kitchen ,, DM adored her nd helped her ,, both prep d dinner nd then took lil rest ,, it turned dark nd Geet started burning candles in OH ,, nd then she went at terrace ,, deco that with flowers nd candles for pooja ,, lastly she went to freshen up nd to get ready for pooja .

She was looking breathtakingly beautiful in that lahanga ,, DM adored her nd made her wear all jewellery ,, she took many pics with her nd Geet's phone,, then both went on terrace ,, Geet did pooja nd DM told her d KC story ,, it was not that much grand which DM dream ,,no one was there to exchange d thali between d story ,but Geet did d ritual nd then they started to wait for Moon for final rituals .

Geet didn't have to wait for Maan ,so when Moon arrived in sky ,,Geet saw that through sieve nd did arti nd offer water ,,she touched DM feet who turned very sad again ,but Geet consoled her ,, both fed sweets to each other nd then took their dinner ,, DM showered her love on her nd then called her driver to reach KM ,, she left as they planned ,, after leaving DM Geet went to change nd looked at her in mirror ,, she became sad nd cried out over her luck ,, after pouring out her pain through eyes she changed in her night dress nd went again at terrace to get some fresh air .

There in KM one more soul was restless nd feeling alone ,, none was there to talk nd to share his heart ,, even DM too left ,,nakul asked for dinner but he refused ,, he got tired sitting whole day so at eve did some exercise nd then went on terrace where his family celebrated this day together ,, he came there after yrs , d terrace was same , a beautiful terrace garden was still maintained which was done by his Mom .

He remembered those days again nd started taking a stroll ,, lovingly touched d plants nd furniture ,, came near parapet nd looked at sky ,, d moon was shining in d sky ,, spreading its beauty surrounded with some clouds ,, he smiled thinking that tonight lots of ppl waited for it to get it's first look ,, this day made this Moon so imp that married women first see it nd then her husbands , he left a sigh nd then looked around ,, his eyes saw some lights lil away ,, it was OH lil away from KM ,, there was garden nd pool between them ,, he got confused seeing that light at OH terrace nd thought that OH was closed from yrs then who lit d lights there ? he scanned all around d OH roof nd find a figer near plants in a corner .

Maan self talk : who is there ?

Bcoz of plants nd shade he didn't get clear view of that figure , but his curiosity increased ,, who had come in KM nd living in OH ,, none talked about any guest then who was this person ,, any thief or any servant opened it ? But there r servents qrtr in KM then who is there at this time ?

Maan decided to check nd rushed down ,, he saw DM nd find her in bed ,, all servants had left for their qrtrs , he silently went to OH from kitchen door ,, crossed d pool nd lawn nd checked main door of OH,, unlocked ,Maan pressed d door but that was locked from inside ,, he got more confused ,, looked all around nd went back side ,, find a window open ,, he jumped nd climbed on window ,, get in ,but d room was dark ,, a dim light was coming from kitchen ,, maan went that side ,, again scanned all around ,, checked other room ,WR nd living hall ,, empty then he decided to went on terrace where he saw d figer ,, now he was sure that some one was hiding here .

He was about to took d steps but heard some sound in staircase ,, Maan hide near by nd waited .

After spending some time at terrace Geet felt relaxed ,, she felt cold too in that open night nd moved to come down ,, she went to recheck d all doors before going in bed.

She was in her own thoughts when suddenly felt a tug , she held her dupatta nd turned her face to check where her dupatta stuck , but next moment shout in fear .

Maan too got a shock when she turned at him nd startled with her loud fearful voice .

It took few sec for both to get hold on their shocked nd confused state ,, it was Maan who garnered himself 1st nd came in his real form..

Maan :Tummm,, tum yahan kaise !!!! ( Youuu,, u here )

Geet : ******

Maan : jawad do , eese kya aankhen phaad kar dekh rahi ho ?( reply ,, why r u staring like this ) .

Geet was quiet nd staring at him , but she started running her mind ,, arguing inwardly ...

Geet puttar aaj to tu gai ,,finally esse pata chal hi gaya ki tu yahan hei ,, ab mai kya karu ? DM bhi nahi hei paas mei ,, pata nahi ye kaise behave karega ? gussa to pacca hei , dikh raha hei eski waddi waddi aanknon se ,, agar esne ess waqt tujhe yahan se jaane ko kaha to kya karegi ? etni raat kahan jayegi ,aur DM ,,, DM ko kya aur kaise samjhaygi ...

( Geet puttar u r finish today ,, finally he got that u r here ,, now what i'll do ? DM also not here , dodn't know how he'll behave ,, he is angry for sure ,, his big eyes wr showing ,, if he throw out I out at this time then what u'll do ? where u'll go at this night nd DM ,, how u'll manage DM ?)

Maan annoyed : duffer, say something .

Geet lost in her thoughts ..esne fir wahi drama start kiya to ki mai ye ghar chod kar ja raha hu tab ,,Geet puttar jaldi kuch soch ,, Babaji,, gadhi babaji ke bare mei nahi ess MSK ke bare mei soch esse kaise handle karna hei ,, dekh kaise gussa ho raha hei ,, tere din pure ho gaye Geet ...

( if he started d same drama that he's leaving d home if I m here then what u'll do ? Geet puttar think fast ,, Babaji ,, stupid not about Babaji but about this MSK ,, think to handle him ,, see how he is angry ,, ur end is near geet )

Nahi ,,nahi shant Geet, tujhe abhi bahot jeena hei ,, tu kar sakti hei , soch ,, soch ,, DM ne kaha hei face karne ko jaise pahale karti thi ,, haan ,, haan ,try karti hu ess khadoos ko face karne ki .. Geet halla bol .

( No ,, No ,, calm down Geet , u have to live long , u cn do ,,think ,, think ,, DM said to face him like u did earlier ,,yes ,yes , try to face this khadoos ,, Geet , Halla Bol .. )

Maan got more angry when Geet didn't reply ,, he held her arm nd shook her ,that jerk brought back Geet from her self conversation session .

Maan : ye gunge hone ka drama band karo aur jawab do , tum yahan kaise ?

( Stop this drama nd reply , how nd why r u here ?)

Geet gulped hard nd opened her mouth to reply but voice which come out from her throat startled both .

Geet meakly : maiii,, wo o ,, maiii.

Maan : what ??? Ye bakri ki tarah se mai , mai kya laga rakhi hei ,, theek se jawab dena nahi aata ?

( what ??? why r u doing Mai ,, Mai like a got , cn't u reply normally )

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Geet felt insulted nd thought... he never chanhed .. Dust Danav .

Geet gulped again nd retort : mai yahin rahati hun .( I live here )

Maan : what ,what do u mean ..yahin rahati ho ?

Geet garnered herself : I clearly said , that I live here ,cn't u understand simple Hindi ?

Maan confused : matlab ,I mean I didn't get how u r living here ?

Geet : like ppl live in their houses ,, I live here .

Maan confused : nd from when ?

Geet : from d day one .

Maan shocked : what ???? u r living here from that day ?

Geet :yes .

Maan shocked nd confused : but that day u promised me that u'll leave this house , then how u r here nd we didn't notice ?

Geet boost her courage nd reply : I promised nd did that ,,Mr Khurana I m not living in ur house , where u cn see me .

Maan looked at her in disbelief : what u had said , that is my house not this ?

Geet : yes this is OH , away from ur house .

Maan annoyed : don't play smart with words miss HP ,,u cheated nd broke ur promise , u ..

Geet : dare u , don't call me a cheater , nd I keep my promise,, this place is away from ur house ,, as i promised that night , I left nd never entered in that house ,,I never came in front of u .

With that reality Maan's temper raised ,, he felt that he was in dark nd this Geet nd DM fooled him ,, she was living next to him nd he didn't get ,, even when he asked about her all lied ,, even servants too ,, how V nd A didn't notice her ? What was happening in his house ?


Precap --- War & Peace ...



Edited by singh24 - 8 years ago
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Nice update
Dadi ask Geet about college incidence
And she told her
Later dadi and Geet went for outing
There they had great time
Ab Kya shock mila Geet koo
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beautiful update
daadi took geet for outing on weekend by which both come close more
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Loved it part 30
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can you as well updated part 31 today as well
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Very nice update. Dadi took geet for a short trip. Both came more close and talked freely . Dadi is such a sweet heart. Geet used her time in a nice way. Update soon.
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Nice update
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