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A Babe In The Woods

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Lying here in d dark i keep in thinking ...what mistake i have done .. what is wrong with me ...why i m like this ... cursed ..

Is it a sin .. to love .. to live ..why i m not allowed .. to see even a small happiness .. of my own ...

Lying here .. in dark .. give me light ..give me love ..give me happiness .. O Lord .


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Time passes, memories fade, feelings change, people leave, but hearts never forget .

When a day starts none cn predict that how it ended ,, many things cn change in a blink , than a day is much longer ..


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.



Part - 46


Part - 47

There was silence between them ,, their heart was arguing with their minds ,, Geet was trying to absorb Maan's words which wr affecting her deeply ,, any girl cd feel pride listening those words from her BF or husband , where as Maan's heart came in lil peace having Geet in his arms but his mind was restless thinking about those ppl who ruined their lives nd smiles ,, d dinner was almost silent ,both wr lost in their thoughts ,, sharing d room with Maan making Geet very restless ,, after dinner she quietly took her phone nd lappy nd settled in settee near d window ,, she got a call from SU nd both wr talking ,, Maan was sitting in sofa nd working on BPs but Geet's talks got his attention ,, she was asking about d progress of case .

With her talks Maan cd sensed that she was very much eager to know about NT nd Dev ,, D** Sharma was assuring her , buther face expressions wr showing her disappointment ,, near 2 weeks had passed but there was no clue regarding those criminals nd she was helpless even SU too was not allowing her to move alone for her security ,, Maan too didn't want that she wd face Dev ,, he was waiting for his detec team to get all d info about NT nd Dev who wr hiding in MA ,, he was waiting for his Dad's reply too .

Geet slept on settee cuddling herself ,, Maan's eyes fell on her nd a smile crept on his face seeing her ,, her serene look always eased his heart ,, lost in her magic nd helpless from his heart Maan came near her ,, he covered her with blanket nd removed her loose locks from her forehead softly ,, every moment he felt an urge to held her close to him ,, he was confused that why he was feeling a pull for her even knowing the truth that why both came across ? he didn't know that how that wall wd fall , but by passing every single day he was sure that she was an integral part of his life ,, she had some meanings in his life ,, she belong to him ,,giving her a contented look he came out in balcony nd made few calls .

That night passed nd next mrnig started with new challenges for Maan ,,Geet nd he took their BF nd went for meeting which stretched long but fruitful ,, finally Geet's idea worked nd all agreed over a rough lay out in which she suggested d use of owner's old nd small haweli as it is nd other designs according to that ,, all liked that old nd ethnic idea nd locked d deal ,, d client was very happy nd Maan was overwhelmed nd was falling for Geet ,, they wr back with happy note nd at d time of lunch Maan thanked Geet for her contribution ,, he left her in d suite to take some rest nd went out excusing to meet some suppliers .

But in real he went on diff task , his detect met with him , handed him d reports about Dev nd NT ,, then Maan called to his Dad nd informed him , not informed but gave his decision ,, after talking nd planning with SU he requested him to take action ASAP ,, Maan was very restless nd waiting eagerly in a small corner of d same hotel where they wr staying ,, d wait was very tiring nd he was gulping BC one after another to kill d stress nd time , finally after 3 nd half hr he got d call from his detec that 2 policemen along with a lady police went nd arrested NT ,, they sent few pics of carrying NT ,, Maan took a sigh of relief nd gave a winning smile ,, his one plan succeed nd now he was sure about d success of other plan ,, Maan informed nd thanked SU nd went to face Geet .

When he reached in his room nd engulfed Geet in excitement which startled Geet , but Maan was lost in his emotions nd mumbled gluing her close to him .

Maan: Geet ,, Geet we got it , we got it finally ,, i proved myself .

Geet who was confused garnered herself nd asked : what we have got Maan ?

Maan inhale in her crook : we got ur culprit Geet , that NT has arrested .

Geet parted in shock : what , r u saying right , when , where , who gave u this news ?

Maan looked at her with a soft nd winning smile : my detec .

Geet : ur detec ? SU knew about it ?

Maan: may be , or he cn get this news from his sources , r u not happy Geet ?

Geet : of course I m nd thank u so much Maan .

Maan : don't thank me Geet , i don't want this formality .

Geet : Maan ,i saying this from d bottom of my heart .

Maan: then say that u trust me , u trust Maan .

Geet shuddered nd looked at him deeply touched : i trust u , i trust u Maan .

Maan : that's it , nd thanks for this honour .

Geet: no Maan , here i m thankful to u , u deserve this honour .

Maan smiled nd gave a jerk to glue her more to him : i m thanking for breaking a hurdle .

Geet : hurdle ?

Maan smiled : yes ,for calling me Maan , i really love this progress .

Geet startled nd then shied with a faint smile ,, Maan love this side of her nd gave an adoring look .

Maan: i want to see u like this Geet , plzz be with me like this .

Geet didn't reply but gave a look full of affection nd trust ,, Maan hugged her nd this time Geet reciprocated which soothe his heart ,, both remained like that for long nd feeling solace in each other arms ,,after some time they parted nd Geet wished to talk SU ,, Maan desired for a spl dinner nd Geet agreed ,, Maan went to freshen up with a contented smile nd then make few calls .

Geet talked to SU nd asked about NT case ,, both talked for half an hr nd then finished d call , but at d end Geet was confused not satisfying with few points .

It was a beautiful dinner arranged by Maan for this spl day ,, he got d deal nd a good news of NT's arrest ,, Geet was touched with his efforts nd find him happy nd smiling from heart ,, both wr talking on diff topics nd lastly came on NT .

Geet : Maan i m not getting d point why SU wants to run this case here , not in delhi ?

Maan cleared his throat nd replied in a very composing way : Geet if SU is saying this then there must be some reason , u trust him or not ?

Geet: of corse i trust him but why he wanted to keep her here when she did a crime in delhi nd we filed d case there .

Maan: Geet d case cn be shifted anywhere , nd what is wrong here ? may be SU has some grip here , u know he has one of his known police officer here .

Geet kept quiet thinking something ,, Maan looked at her concern nd held her hands in his .

Maan: Geet , don't suspect us ,u'll get justice nd very soon , this is my promise to u .

Geet gave a fainted smile nd nodded in yes ,, she thought to wait nd watch .

Maan : Geet d whole family along with SU is coming TM so we have to stay lil longer here .

Geet : OK , i too wanted to stay here to face NT .

Maan: u'll ,but 1st let d SU come , then we'll talk on further action .

Geet hummed then both had a lil walk under cloudy sky nd soon it started drizzling ,, Maan held Geet's hand nd ran towards their suite .

Geet :Maan i want to enjoy d rain.

Maan: no Geet ,ur wound cn get infection , u cn enjoy d rain from balcony .

Geet pouted nd both entered in d room ,, Maan smiled at her antics nd dragged her in balcony .

Maan lovingly hugged her from back nd spoke near her ear : this time make urself happy with this nd next time i'll pull u in rain ,, see from distance too it looks so beautiful .


Geet shuddered when Maan's body touched her from back nd he caged her in his strong arms ,, she felt a warmth inside her nd something melting ,, an urge to wrap herself with this warmth , to lost in those unknown feelings which she felt in Maan's proximity ,, everything was so soothing ,pleasing nd new to feel ,, she was loosing herself .

Maan was drawing in same feelings ,, he glued her more to him ,, his face was touching her face from side ,, he started melting down ,, body started heating up nd tensile feeling her softness nd warmth ,, both wr lost in those magical moments ,but Geet felt a jerk nd came in reality when something hard touched her from back ,, a throbbing hardness ,, she startled open her eyes nd nd realized their closeness ,, reality hit her nd she removed Maan's hands nd run inside d room ,closed herself inside d WR ,,some drops of tears rolled down from her eyes nd she mumbled .

Geet : no ,it cn't be happen ,, it's wrong ,it's wrong ,Geet how cn u forget d truth of ur life , u cn't ruin his life ,u cn't , keep u away from him ,, make him to understand nd to move on ,, u r ruined nd don't have anything to give him .

Where Maan was looking at his hands nd then at that direction where Geet went ,,then he smiled remembering their closeness ,, he felt d changed in his body nd shook his head ,, racked his fingers in his thick hair .

Maan : ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi ,, janta hu intzaar bahot lamba hei aur essi halat mei muskil bhi ,, Maan u r falling for her , but have to control on ur feelings ,, remember slow nd steady wins d race .

He hummed SRK song keeping his right hand on his heart ... ...

Haule -haule se hawa lagti hei ,, haule -haule ..

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FY26Ft6-hxY[/YOUTUBE]


Precap - Geet faced NT ... NT started her tricks ... .


Part - 48

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Edited by singh24 - 8 years ago
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HELLO DI 🤗
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😃😃 aaj ke liye tsr daal rahi hu..
update kal .. abhi time nahi hei..
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Originally posted by: singh24



😃😃 aaj ke liye tsr daal rahi hu..
update kal .. abhi time nahi hei..

di aap update ko lekat itna na socho..agar nahi ho raha to mat do...
aap bas apna dhayn rakho pehle 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Donnaa

di aap update ko lekat itna na socho..agar nahi ho raha to mat do...
aap bas apna dhayn rakho pehle 😛



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big bold exactly 😆😆
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i am here 😊
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net ka ki haal hai??
baby gayab ho gayi
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😃 updated tsr on Pg...2

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