Just for time pass with my readers of KTHH n BAABUL - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN



I think readers don't like my rona dhonna its decrease my spirit 😭



Didu its not like that!!
Do you think they(silent readers) haven't read ur update!!No they have read it..and asusual they they don't press like or comment!!
Di..many writers don't get even 20-30 likes!!
But they update regularly..and slowly their likes increase!!
And today they get 80-100..
I have seen writers who hardly get 5-6 likes for their stories..but they never lose spirit amd they continue to keep giving update!!
So never lose hope didu!!
You are amazing writer and don't waste ur writing talent by thinking of those who don't value it!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

I like ur both stories all scene
KTHH
but I fell like crying what maan did with geet on her 1st night
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Di!!
Mostly I like all the circumstances which adds up spice to the story and keeps readers to hookup with story

In Baabul
I liked the part where u brought out all the emotions of a father meeting his daughter for the first tym ever
Where maan found his puchki !! And when he couldn't bring thyself to see his baby's face
I literally felt miserable when Geet was mentally unstable and was subjected to betrayal

In KTHH
When maan put froth his truth under which circumstances he went through!! His emotional breakdown!!loved the part where Geet played piano tunes of his mother
Where Geet touched the chords of maan's heart with more warmth and endurance
Felt miserable when maan left geet next day of the wedding night

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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
nice time pass their r many scenes from both ff
wen everyone disowned geet
wen puchki lost her maa ki goad
wen maan found his daughter

kthh
main buhat hain
wen geet get married
wen daadi accused maan
wen maan get to know about his kid's
wen vicky accused maan
etc
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: anu5

Di!!

Mostly I like all the circumstances which adds up spice to the story and keeps readers to hookup with story

In Baabul
I liked the part where u brought out all the emotions of a father meeting his daughter for the first tym ever
Where maan found his puchki !! And when he couldn't bring thyself to see his baby's face
I literally felt miserable when Geet was mentally unstable and was subjected to betrayal

In KTHH
When maan put froth his truth under which circumstances he went through!! His emotional breakdown!!loved the part where Geet played piano tunes of his mother
Where Geet touched the chords of maan's heart with more warmth and endurance
Felt miserable when maan left geet next day of the wedding night


😭 ME MAKE U CRY
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
in KTHH

liked most d prt where geet n maan again became one...
cried seeing geet's suffering without any of her faults...

laughed fr d cuteness of d children...

nw want to kill u coz u r late fr d face off of d daima n her chudail daughter...coz of dem only everything happened...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma


nw want to kill u coz u r late fr d face off of d daima n her chudail daughter...coz of dem only everything happened...


WELL SAID 😆
Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN


😭 ME MAKE U CRY


Di!! U should be happy that ur stories can make readers relate to ur writings and to relate themselves with the character protrayed😊
U brought out new facets of thoughts on readers mind di with ur incredible writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
In baabul, the scene which i liked the most is when after 6 long years, geet came out of the airport and was talking with rohit and soumya.
She met her mausa-maasi, started a new life, completed all her studies in the shortest possible time.

Became a successful architect and was handling projects with such ease and confidence.

Specially that line, when rohit said in the middle of the night, "Is maasoom ko ab itna mazboot banna hoga ki saari duniya is ke saam ne jhuk jaaye. Ab tak iski innocence mei isne is duniya ko apni zindagi se khelne diya, pehle brij, then that bas***d who left her alone. But ab, isse is duniya se sirf apne sawaalo ke jawaab hi nahi balki apna haq bhi maangna hoga."

Although i have written few words the way i remember reading, but i loved this part the most till now in baabul.

About kya tumhe haq hai, I liked the scene in aashi's bungalow when maan came to his senses and geet was teasing him regarding the night he was dead drunk.

Geet's taunts were those, "Maan sir, aap restaurant hi to gaye thae meeting karne ke liye. Phir aap ne waha apna dinner khaya, apni drinks li aur maze se swimming kar rahe thay jab zor ki baarish huwi aur toofaan aaya. Swimming pool mein saara baarish ka paani bhar gaya aur aap restaurant ke pool se paani mei behte behte yahaan tak aa gaye."

When geet finished maan's face was worth watching and reading as he kept quiet like a kid caught while doing mischief. Imagining his vulnerable condition in front of his mishti, i just couldn't control my laughter. My mom was staring at me weirdly and kept asking, "Kya huwa itna kyu has rahi hai?"
I just lied about reading a funny blog and then she left for the market.

I liked these two situational scenes the most in both stories, kya tumhe haq hai and baabul.

Baabul specially is the depiction of different men as baabul, (Fathers)

One side is brij who dumped geet on maan's shoulders when he wanted to secure the future of his own daughter.

Second was maan who too left geet listening to his maamaji because he wanted to secure his life and future.

Third was rohit who accepted geet, cured her and gave her a new life, along with a new identity.
He is the most ideal baabul among the three. Ek taraf ek jawaan ladka, jisne ek ladki ko apne sath nashe mei jod to diya, phir usko chodkar, tooti haalath mei akeli phenk kar chala gaya.

Dusri taraf, ek baap ne apni beti ki khatir apni niece ko hi bedakhal kar diya, palat kar bhi nahi dekha ki uski wo dusri beti kahaan gayi, uska kya huwa.

Teesri taraf wo pita, jisne apni beti ko apnane ke liye khoon ke bandhan ko bhi peechay chod diya.

It is said that relations bound by love and truth are 100 times stronger and genuine than relations bound by blood. How true it is!

Pyaar aur apnepan ka rishta, khoon ke rishton se bada aur zyada gehra hota hai.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u for detail analysis but u moulded my dialogues with ur own 😆 ... Bajajs r not her Mausa Mausi dear...

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