MG ff: Eternal love Chptr1A on pg 4& chptr1B on pg 5 (04/08/16) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1A

In London

It has been a month since Geet married Dev living in London. She was busy looking for Jaidev for about a month now and she couldn't locate him. While Dev was falling madly and deeply in love with Geet every single day.

Jaidev was busy playing a hero against Mr Patal spoil brat daughter Zakhiya who forgot about her roots and had too much English up her ass. How dare you lay your hands on me. Father will you let him lay his hands on me. I didn't see anything he did wrong Zakhiya said Mr Patal.

Jaidev got into a fight with some racist Londonians and that fight caused him the love of his life has he witness Geet hugging and sharing a tender kiss with Dev and he was heart broken.

In Paris.
Maan was surrounded by 12 girls and he slept with them all has he is a known player. Maan you need to turn away from this life said Romeo. Romeo you need to live a little. Am just wondering why am i your friend. Because am handsome and am your only friend. Am also your only friend. Yah yah yah now let party. Everyone drinks on me yelled Maan and Romeo rolled his eyes.

Back to London
Jaidev started dating Mr Patals daughter Zakhiya for her fathers wealth. Mr Patal mad Jaidev angry and Jaidev had lost his temper and bit up there older man black and blue. Dev found Mr Patals death body and he got arrested.

Jaidev please help me get Dev out of prison i know he didn't do it. Yes i know he didn't do it too and i can prove it. Really said a beaming Geet. Yes Geet meet me at the police station entrance around 3pm i will bring the prove.

At the police station

Did you bring the prove. Yes i did here. Okay let go. Not so fast Geet. What is it. You have to divorce Dev and marry me if you want him out of prison said a smirking Jaidev. Geet signed the divorce paper. Jaidev got Dev out of prison and left with Geet.

Dev was heartbroken and he returned back to Punjabi village. He found out why Geet divorced him and he vowed to get her back.

That's a rap guys i hope you will like it and please do hit the like button and live your reviews.

Love Busi

Recap: The war begins between Dev and Jaidev.

Chapter 1B
Edited by BusiMusi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice part maan is a player geet was happy with her husband but she had to divorce him to save him and went with jaidev
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1B

In Punjabi

Dev called up Zakhiya Patal and told her about Jaidev wedding and Zakhiya decided to gate crush Jaidev and Geet wedding. She stopped the wedding in the meddle and she gave Jaidev an offer she couldn't refuse. If call of this wedding and marry me i swear i can give you all the wealth in this world said Zakhiya.

Has much has your offer is tempting i have to choose my love this time and you know your way out and persist you can continue the ritual said Jaidev. Geet and Jaidev got married.

Dev became wealthy and made Jaidev lose the property. Jaidev worked has a labour to provide for his whole family has they lived has a joint family which is his family and Geet's family. Geet cheated on Jaidev and became pregnant with Dev's baby. The whole family thought the child was feathered by Jaidev.

Jam blamed Jaidev because he lost his job and he attacked Jaidev. Geet saw Jam try to hit Jaidev with a steel pipe ended up hit Geet who ran to Jaidev aid. Geet was rushed to the hospital and she lost the baby.

Geet and Jaidev became intimate due to her sorrow. Geet tried to walk on burning coals because she thinks she cheated on Dev but instead Jaidev carried Geet the bridal style and he was the one who one who walked on burning coals. We have to walk on this coals together because we committed this sin together said Jaidev and Geet was amazed and she kept on staring at Jaidev who was also looking at her with adoration.

Geet discovered she was pregnant with Jaidev baby and on their way home Geet got hurt has the was some stress. Jaidev rushed Geet to hospital and he was asked by the doctors to get some medicine for Geet has she is pregnant.

On his way to a pharmacy Jaidev was attacked and abducted and lock into where crazy people are locked. He was tortured and they made him believe he was this Janam Singh. Jaidev managed to escaped.

All his family believed that he died on the day of the a rival on the street except his mother and Geet. I know my son is death now stop rubbing some salt in my wounds woman said Jaidev's father. No my son is alive i no. Yes mil he is alive i heard him call my name tell him Meera. I didn't hear anything sis bil is death.

That it for now i hope you will like the update. Please do let me know where you like the update or not so i can do better next time and plz don't forget to hit the like button.

Love Busi
Recap: Dev and Geet get marry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the update dear
@part1
Geet got married to dev
Geet was searching for Jaidev
Geet and dev moved on in their life
Jaidev helped Geet to make Dev free
But put a condition on Geet to divorce dev and marry him
Maan is a player!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ part1b
Geet got married to Jaidev
Geet had miscarriage and she was pregnant with dev's child
Geet got pregnant with Jaidev child and is critical
Jaidev is missing and his family declared him dead
Still Geet and Jaidev mom believed he is alive!!

Precap!?? Geet and dev marriage😕
Where is maan!!?😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful updates! well written! bt Geet married Jaidev! Maan is a player! Geet leaves Dev 4 Jaidev as she was forced 2! Geet married Jaidev n pregnant with Dev;s child! she loses the baby! Geet again pregnant with Jaidev's child! she is in a serious condition! Jaidev kidnapped! he is assumed dead! he is alive n escaped! Geet n his mom believe he is alive! precap - Dev n Geet's marriage??? is this a Maaneet FF???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Nice part maan is a player geet was happy with her husband but she had to divorce him to save him and went with jaidev

thank you. Yes she was but in order to save him she head to divorce him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

Loved the update dear

@part1
Geet got married to dev
Geet was searching for Jaidev
Geet and dev moved on in their life
Jaidev helped Geet to make Dev free
But put a condition on Geet to divorce dev and marry him
Maan is a player!!

thank you. Yep she got married to Dev and she was looking for Jaidev and maan is a player.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

@ part1b

Geet got married to Jaidev
Geet had miscarriage and she was pregnant with dev's child
Geet got pregnant with Jaidev child and is critical
Jaidev is missing and his family declared him dead
Still Geet and Jaidev mom believed he is alive!!

Precap!?? Geet and dev marriage😕
Where is maan!!?😊

thank you. Yes Jaidev and Geet got married and had a miscarriage and became pregnant again but this time with Jaidev child not Dev. Yes he went miss and he was declared death but geet and his mother still believes he i alive.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#00cc99">wonderful updates! well written! bt Geet married Jaidev! Maan is a player! Geet leaves Dev 4 Jaidev as she was forced 2! Geet married Jaidev n pregnant with Dev;s child! she loses the baby! Geet again pregnant with Jaidev's child! she is in a serious condition! Jaidev kidnapped! he is assumed dead! he is alive n escaped! Geet n his mom believe he is alive! precap - Dev n Geet's marriage??? is this a Maaneet FF??? </font>

thank you. Yes is a MAANNEET FF well have them together soon.

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