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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

Full swing the party was going, as Maan had thrown it success of one project.

"Geet, she is lily, Aliya..." Rahul introducing Geet with all the pack members, as she was going to live this pack.

Geet was greeting everyone with smile and shaking hand.

Maan was standing far, sipping the wine from his glass. More than the party his attention was on Geet, her every move, the way she was blinking her eyes, the lips were moving while taking, and her cheeks were turning in red when Rahul were introducing with new person whether it was boy or girl.

She was unaware of surrounding what was happening, few girls giving her pitiful look, few girls burning with jealousy, all unmated male are looking at her with lust, he almost feel like ripping their eyes off from their socket, more than that he wanted to tear that teddy bear into pieces which she was holding like a dear life.

Suddenly he turned his gaze from her, mentally scolding himself, told himself that his wolf was doing this to him. He chugged the remaining drink and grabbed one more glass.

"Are you alright?" Maan looked the person; Sheila was looking at him as if trying to read.

"Am fine" he replied shortly and turned around and looked for which could grab his attention.

"Seriously?" Sheila frowned and placed her hand on his shoulder. He looked back at her, he was well aware that from two week he was avoiding her.

All because of that stupid mate stuff.

"Maan" both of them turned to voice of Rahul.

Maan looked at him and a small figure who was trying to hide herself behind Rahul body.

"Geet" Rahul tried to bring her front, but she just peek from his shoulder look one glance to Maan then hide back.

"No, no, no" she was repeating the word.

"It okay Geet, he is Alpha Maan" Rahul pulled her front to introduce the Alpha.

Maan looked at her; with one hand she was holding the teddy bear and other hand clutching Rahul t-shirt.

"No, no, okay, no okay" she hide her face in his chest and whispering "he is bad man, he gives me pain"

Maan heard everything what she said, clenching his jaw tightly.

"Home, home, I want to go home, he is bad man, home, I want to go" her tear started flowing.

Rahul was confused at her sudden hyper behavior seeing Alpha.

"I am sorry, Maan" Rahul just apologized for her behavior "I have to leave"

Maan shook his head.

"Such a disrespectful girl" Sheila said with hate, when they were out of vision. Maan jaw tightened, crush the glass in his hand, making Sheila was jump at fear, left the party angrily and Sheila ran behind him to catch his steps.

*****

Rahul came down; saw Naina and Adiraj was waiting for him. His mother and father were well aware that something was wrong with Geet, because they have come earlier from the party. He informed her everything about the Geet.

Before she could say anything, she heard loud stream of Geet, trio ran to Geet's room saw she was curled into ball screaming and crying.

Naina asked her, but Geet didn't say anything except screaming. They saw she was rubbing her chest and pulling her hair.

Rahul immediately picked his sister in his arm and took her pack doctor.

Doctor informed her them, she was now sleeping as they had given sedative to calm her down.

"Can you inform her mate?" Doctor said

"Mate?" Naina said it was more like question.

"But she doesn't have mate yet" Rahul replied instead of Naina.

"That can't be possible, because all the symptoms are showing that mate is begin with someone else, which cause her pain, through mate connection"

Rahul gritted his teeth preventing his wolf come out.

Doctor left them alone.

"That bas*..." Rahul stopped, looking at his mother "I will kill him".

Naina laid her head on husband's shoulder, Adiraj hold her tightly. She was always emotionally. After her daughter was she totally broke down and now after years everything was so messed up with their daughter's life.

*****

Next day Rahul tried to ask Geet who is her mate, who was busy with playing with her doll and toys which kept it with care all these years.

Naina laughed at her son's attempt; Geet said her mate was Zack. Rahul punched him on his face breaking his nose. Later on he came to know it was her pervious school friend a small boy.

"Nemo, nemo" she remember, smiled showing her teeth.

"Nemo, you mean to say that fish movie" Rahul wanted to confirm first, because doesn't wanted to repeat same mistake again.

"No" Geet said holding her teddy bear, start ranting "He is nemo, he is very good, I love him, he love me too, he is cutie and fluffy" she said while kissing one after another.

Rahul raised his eyebrows making disgust face; Naina and Adiraj started laughing at his priceless expression.

Their attempt was useless, a week passed she couldn't tell her mate name.

But every night Geet would suffered from that burning sensation where she will screaming and crying.

"I can't see my baby like this, please do something" Naina cried out to her husband, from other side they can still hear Geet's scream. They had no idea how can they reduced her pain, because her mate is bedding with someone else.

*****

"Me too, me too" Geet clapped her hand with excitement.

While Maan was passing suddenly his attention caught to melodious voice who playing with a five year old boy. He kept looking her, this whole week he tried to distract his mind from her thoughts by keeping himself busy with pack works and night with Sheila, but at end it will her whom she will be thinking.

"Maan, aren't you going for training?" Sheila rolled her eyes Geet to look at Maan with smile.

Before he could comprehend, Sheila kissed him.

He pushed Sheila, hearing Geet scream, as if anyone someone poured some kind of acid on her.

"Geet?" Maan looked at her with concern.

"Yo...you are bad man" Geet was holding the baseball bat for playing, starting hitting him as tears were flowing with that "You bad man"

Everyone jaw dropped looking at view, a mere girl was hitting Alpha.

Suddenly he grabbed her bat and snatch it angrily from her break into two pieces throw it other side.

This made Geet more angry, than started hitting her little fist.

Maan grabbed her hand pinned her to the tree hitting her back, she shrieked in pain, but he didn't care at moment his rage was at peak.

"LEAVE" Maan commanded in alpha tone, which made all leave the place reluctantly.

"You..." Maan was going to shout at her for being disrespectful but seeing her tear, he stopped.

He slowly removed his hand from her, was going to wipe her tear but interrupted by Rahul

"Geet"

Geet pushed Maan and ran toward Rahul "he is a bad man, beat him, he gives me pain every day, beat him, beat him" sobbed on his chest.

"Are you her mate?" Rahul asked holding his sister tightly, he was almost shivering with anger seeing her, though her sister couldn't express the feeling what she went through because of mate connection, but he knew she had suffer terrible this whole week because of her mate because her mate couldn't keep control of his lust.

Maan nodded to his question.

"Lily take her" Rahul asked lily who came along with him

"Go with her, Geet" Rahul told her.

As soon they were out of vision, Rahul didn't wait a second to shift into wolf and attack Maan.


P.s. If you are not reading the original version also at least put a vote on the original version, thinking as Maaneet. My sincere request to you.

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(till chapter 3 updated in this version)

Edited by pixi_nightingal - 8 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Flawless update..
Geet was still accusing maan as bad man!
Rahul was madly searching geet's made everywhere and at last he found him..he's none other than maan!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Love u r story
Continue Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Read all the parts in your blog... Please update more of it... Will love to read in both version... update was damn good... Maan do have a protective and possessive side for geet but the thing is he is the Alpha ... He can't bear that his mate is not perfect ... But she is too much perfect for him... He tried every possible way to take his attention away from geet but at the end it will only land on her ... His nights spent with shiela didn't go well with geet... She feels pain but couldn't voice out her feelings who is the one causing it... Rahul tried every thing to ask her to tell who is her mate but poor baby ... Cute scene... All laughed at his plight .. But one day Sheila kissed maan and geet too was there and the pain strikes again.. He was concerned but as she started to beat him .. He loses his cool... Rahul came there and asked him in full rage whether he is the one and with maan's reply he attacked him in his wolf form... Update soon
Edited by doll.12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Interesting one... I want to know what maan answer rahul... Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Loved d story...poor geet..but maan ki kya galti hai...looking frwd
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
This story is superb interesting!!
Feeling bad for Geet!!
Rahul..superb protective bro👏
grr...Maan with that chudail...coz of that Geet is suffering!!
Loved it very much!!
Please continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
I couldn't stop redaing next part..so i signed in wattpad..just to read next part😆
though I read the story with other char names..but in my mind I portrayed those chars as my Maaneet!!😃😳
And i voted too😊
Thanks for the link!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Both are connected lovely update
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Posted: 9 years ago
read both parts
both are awesome n interesting
maan n geet characters are deep n mysterious
maan is noticing geet 's move very closely when she was around
geet fears from maan
rahul n geet part is funny hahaha nemo
seriously like that part
geet is in pain because of maan
waiting for rahul n maan's fight
update soon

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