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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue
Maan was aghast looking at Geet, his love. It was like time had stopped, fate was being cruel with them just then. As the poor girl sunk to the floor weeping in anguish, the powerful business tycoon felt utterly defeated. This was all a bad, evil dream. A dream which had shattered their beautiful world, had at least given them sorrow to the degree of causing a faint crack, a slight fog to loom over their happiness. Though he resolved to bring all the peace and happiness back in his mishti's life, maan feared not only for their well-being, but also for a life. The life which had started breathing, but perhaps wasn't destined to survive in the outer world.


Me back with yet another little story, folks. Plz spare some time to read and comment over this. Respond or else, i will remove all my writings very soon.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrtz for new story .
interesting concept ...but is it going to be a sad one ? 😒
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congos on new story!!
Saddy saddy Prologue..
plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue geet is shatterd !aan is helpless hoiw to help her nice waiting foir the part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love u for this story.. I adore it.. Do update soon.. And please what is this with removing.. Update few parts and see the response.. Every one will love it.. Thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story luking forward to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice.. waiting for more..
N do pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting to read more. Maan is so depressed seeing Geet's condition.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for ur new story
prologue seem to be saddy saddy😭
continue soon
and please add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice saddy prologue seems geet lost her baby and maan was helpless seeing his mishty crying all shattered and broken he wanted to give her all the love but didn't know how to soothe her for a loss which will cost their happiness and life

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