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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Nice part 1 maan is a very ruthless king hw win the states and and when sees a beautiful gurl he marry her for his pleasure he as 20 wifes love is nit in his dictionary he learn to win and pleasure samaya main queen he choose this authority and rule the other queeen other queens tries to woo maan so get ther attention but maan not pay attention on them nice story waiting for next part lovely contine soon

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

I personally don't get enough of this part. I love reading it over and over. Thank you for sharing a wonderful concept. 😛

Edited by MistiofMistz - 9 years ago

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swathi90

@swathi90

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Hey mitu I commented on thread one ,should I comment here r there do let me know,for part 1 I commented on thread 1.loved story very much ,a very well written with nice start and character sketch😊👏.commented there do check let me know where to comment.update soon eagerly waiting for geetanjali entry

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: -Mitu-
Its daring not drains ... "daring love story"

Sorry my phone has its own dictionary ao misspelled

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Commented on the old thread di :D
Can't wait for the 4 chapter!!!!

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Res

Unres 😳

Part 1

Starting of the story is so damn interesting ⭐️

King Maan has 20 Queens 😲 but no one is able to stand in front of him... He is rude, strict, cunning and clever... But has no softness for his Queens, he only knows how to use them. All his queens bow down in front of him and has no self respect, only his patrani has guts to speak with him. Till now no one is able to rule over him... Hmm.. That's the main reason for my excitement 😆 I'm so desperate to know how will Geetanjali rule over him😳

I loved the first part... And so eager to read the next update 😛

Thanks Mitu for the unique concept...

I'm sure... I'm going to love it ❤️

Edited by ..neelanjana - 9 years ago

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

loved reading part 1 for one more time...maan is a ruthless king who hasn't met the right queen for him...he may has lots of rani's but none fits the place of maharani.. waiting!!!