MANEET OS - HIS CHOCOLATE - Page 3

Originally posted by: tania90

such a sweet os
maan loves her but hw dnt want geet innocence to lost in his love
I just loved it
ur stories r wonderful I just love reading ur stories

Originally posted by: nishamna

First of all congrats .for the promotion in if group.

It was an amazing os. It was so adorable moment when maan was consoling geet when she was crying over a fight with her friend. At first maan was angry but he knew how innocent is his geet so calmly made her understand. It was great os.

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Such a cute os. Just loved it. Maan very well know where geet could be . He so nicely and perfectly handled her. And geet is completely dependent on him and blindly trust him. Both love each other and maan want to wait for correct time to express so that she don't loose her innocense. Though i have not read much of u'r work i have just now started reading them and i want to tell one thing from what all i read so far that u'r work is so simple and the feelings that u depict through the characters is brilliant. Will be looking farward to read more. 😊

Originally posted by: LovelyDiva

Beautiful and sweet os love maan and his chocolate

Originally posted by: piyabulsara

Beautiful os
i like it

Originally posted by: inisah_hasini

Fab story

Originally posted by: aparna3011

sweet update

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#ff0066">hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful sweet OS! wonderfully written! Maan loves Geet n is so possessive of her! Maan goes 2 look 4 her! he knows where she is! She is in tears! Maan call her chocolate! he asks wt happened n she reveals! Maan angry with Dev! Maan assures her! May I please request another update 2 complete this OS! thanks, congrats on reaching 1000 posts! 👏😊</font>